^THE JADED PRINCE^-{MANEET II} PRT-155to157 pg-50

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THE JADED PRINCE


link to previous thread:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1921053/the-jaded-prince-maneet-ff-next-thread-pg-151


PART 117

M-Tch..

He looks away with a half smile forming on his lip as if that would ever be possible... besides sometimes he likes arguing with her

G-Naa? Nahi? Hamare khilaaf jaane ki gustaakhi

M- I am tired. I am going to sleep

He gets up, goes to his side of the bed and lies down

G-Wait wait wait. I have something for my gusse ki dukaan pati

He is throwing a Geet style tantrum

G-Maaan sit naaa. Utho utho utho [she is nudging him]

He glares at her

M-I was walking for almost 3 and a half hours. I am tired!

G-Please 5 minutes. Good boy. Pleaseee!

He turns his back to her

G-Maan !

M-Tired

She starts tickling him

He holds both her hands away from him

G-5 minutes. Pleaseee. Look I don't want to hurt you again. So let me be

G-It's a surprise. Special for you

She pouts

Maan is not moving even an inch

G-You just want to fight, and taunt. Never wanna understand. Meri kabhi sunni hi nahi hai. Meri koi value hi nahi hai. Chahe galti kisi ki bhi ho. Jhukegi to Geet hi. Aap jhuk gaye to aapki shaan mein kai aa jayegi

Maan keeps a pillow on his head and pretends to sleep

G-Bohot ho gaya Maan. I had enough. You need to change. Hamesha main nahi jhukungi. Tumhe nahi sunna hai naa, mat suno. Mujhe bhi koi farak nahi padta. Aaj tak iss rishte ke liye jo bhi kiya hai maine kiya hai. Tumhara bass chalta to zindagi bhar mujhe iss kamre main yaa ghar pe uss bedroom mein band rakhte

Maan ne to kaan par takiya rakh liya hai

Geet bole jaa rahi hai, gussa nikaal rahi h...wo bhi jaake mudke so jaati hai gusse se

Next morning-

Geet is sleeping and Maan gets up

He make sure everything is ready and good to go then he get ready himself

Geet abh bhi so rahi hai

He orders breakfast

Phir ata hai Maan Kashshe ke paas, khada hota hai

M-Geet? Geet. Utho!

Geet is still sleeping

He nudges her a little

M-Geet utho.

Geet thoda hilti hai...ankhen malke phir so gai

M-Geet!!!! You got 20 minutes. Uth jao warna phirse unhi travel karogi

He says giving her final nudge and takes the covers off her

She sits up with her eyes closed and hair ruffled

M-19 minutes

Maan grumbles and sits down to have breakfast

G-ehhh

She opens one of her eye

G-emmm...eh...ehhh

M-18 and a half..

He says munching on his toast

G-Meri lashes chipak gai hain

Maan gets up, walks over to her with a glass of water in his hand

He tilts her face upwards and pour little water on her eyes

G-That won't work. Warm it

Maan narrows his eyes

He keeps her face tilted up and rubs her eye gently, working on the water over her stuck lids

G-Get up

He helps her to get up and then directs her toward the bath room

There he opens the tap of hot water and bathes her eye with it

M-ok now?

G-Nooo. It's entangled. Sponge it

Maan frowns, soaks the foam in water and hands it to her

M-Help yourself

And walks out

She shuts the door

Aft some 10 minuteM-

She says from the bathroom

G-Go out and shut the door after you

M- What? Go out? Where? Why?

G-Out of the room, Maan. I wanna change. I didn't take my clothes along. Should I explain more? Can't you do it without your series of questions?

M- Sorry.

He says and goes out

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratz 4 the new thread!
continue soon
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congratz on new thread... I hope that both will get back together... it was working all fine and then again their differences... do update soon.
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cool... this seriously is one amazing portrayal of my favourite couple... loved it continue soon...
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congrats on new thread...i sincerely hope geet sticks to her words!
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wonderful update...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt update...

continue nxt prt soon plz...
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PART 118

G-Go out and shut the door after you

M- What? Go out? Where? Why?

G-Out of the room, Maan. I wanna change. I didn't take my clothes along. Should I explain more? Can't you do it without your series of questions?

M- Sorry.

He says and goes out

Geet dresses herself, then calls for him

G- Maaan... Maaan!!!!!

He comes back and looks at his watch

M-Let's go

He has the porter with him

The porter goes in and collect the luggage

G-hmm

M-You had breakfast?

G-Why care?

She walks out of the room

Maan looks around at the table he can tell by the contents that she hasn't eaten

They get to the air port...

They are in the waiting area and Maan hands her a small paper bag

Geet looks at him and frowns

He had anticipated that she wouldn't eat or something would go wrong. So he had bought something for her to eat

G-What's inside?

M-Your breakfast

She takes a look inside the bag and takes a look around and puts the bag into a bin

Maan looks at her action but doesn't say anything.. if this was how she was going to be then fine.. better for him. Maybe he'll change and get over his problems before falling even more for her

She sits at a corner

They wait for the boarding ignoring each other whole time

She opens her novel and starts reading till they are boarded in

She expects a sorry from him. Jab tak nahi bolega decide kiya hai vo bhi baat nahi karegi

Maan ne to soch liya hai ki this is for the best even if I's not to his liking, so he wouldn't do anyting to alter the situation..

They get in the plane

M-You want the window seat?

She sits on the window seat as they fly

Geet starts watching a movie...Devdas [story of a drunk fool]

Maan picks up a business magazine to read

He does glance at her from time to time.. apne Maan style mein , dekh bhi le aur kisi ko pata bhi naa chale...more like steal a glance of her

There is a cute loving couple on other side

Geet gives them an admiring glance and gives a hard stare to Maan

He pretends to be engrossed in his magazine and is ignoring Geet's pointed glares and glances

They reach and they silently reach home too

The home is in a mess, with bottles and things lying around everywhere and the mama lying somewhere

Geet is shocked seeing the condition of the house

M- [mutters] That f***er!

He marches over to his mama grabs his collar and drags him to the bath room

G-Maan!

M- Don't worry. I am not going to hit him

As he goes, Geet has all the manual work of picking up the bottles and cleaning the place. Some broken glasses lying everywhere

Wahan Maan mama ko shower ke neeche baitha kar full force mei paani chala deta hai and mama howls at sudden cold downpour. He is shouting, howling, sputtering, cursing all at the same time

Maan leaves him alone in the bathroom and comes out and looks over at the place and then silently starts picking up empty bottles

Maan safai kar raha tha chup chap

2 min baad mama bhi bahar aate hai shower se

Maan doesn't need to ask what has happened. He knows kya hua ...mama partied alone with drinks for 2 months straight

Ek ek kona ganda ho gaya hai

Fridge mein kide ho gaye hain

G-eeewww. Kab ka khana hai ye?

M- Leave it. I'll clean it

G-Why would you? I can do it. You don't need to bother

Geet looks at mamaji...touches his feet and smiles

G-Kaise hain aap?

Maan deosn't even bother acknowledging him with a namaste or hi or anything

Mama-Badiya, tu kaisi hai? [with a squeezing hug to Geet]

Maan walks up to mama and says quite angrily

M- Maine mana kiya tha na yahan ye sab karne ke liye. Kaha tha na apni gandh apne kamre tak rakhna! Mujhe ab se yahan gandh nahi dikhni chaiye, jo karna hai apne kamre mei karna

Geet looks at Maan

Mama-Haan haan, main saaf karta hoon naa

G-Nahi nahi, aap kyun saaf karenge. Main hoon naa. Aap aaram kijie. Aapne kuch khaya bhi nahi hoga, main kuch bana deti hoon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice.. still ignoring each other.. idiots..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it
hope that everything will be back to normal between maan and geet
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Mama's charactr is stil nt cleared.is he +ve or -ve.Maaneet ki baat krvaao plz

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