Zain Saves Aliya & Aayat~OS~

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys!
em with an OS
which is my imagination for the current track. i hope u'll like it.

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"itni si deir phone off raha to tension o gai? Zain Abdullah o ga to tu apnay ghar, tu mera kuch nhi bigaar sakta, aik picture send kr raha hoon ayat k mobile py deikh k batana k tum isay jaantay ho ya nhi"

Calls Disconnects.

He sends mms.

Zain opens messages and becomes shocked.

"Aliya Ki tasveer?? Aliya kidhr hai??"

He calls Aliya.

"hello Aliya kidhr ho tum?"

"Rocky baat kar raha hoon, main nain kaha than a mera koi kuch bhi ni bigaar sakta. Aliya tumhari biwi hai na? wo idhr mery pas hai, agr tum chahtay ho k aliya zinda rahay to Ayat ko mery hawalay kr do, warna!"

He removes clothe from her face.

"zain please! Bachao! Help me!"

N call disconnects

"Aliya rocky k kabzay main hai!"

"appi?? Par wo wahan kesy pohnchin?"

"yehi to mujhe samjh nhi aa rha! Wo aliya tk kesy pohncha??"

"ab hum kia krain? Jeeju api ko kesy bachain gain ab? Jeeju meri api ko kuch nhi hona chaiye"

"don't worry Ayat main Aliya ko kuch nhi honay doon ga, tum betho main abhi aata hoon!"

Aftr some time Zain comes to that flat.

She opens door.

"Ayat! Jaldi karo humain yahan sy niklna hai."

"Q jeeju? Appi kidhr hai? Hum kahan jayen gayen?"

"tum apni cheezain uthao. Or jesa main kahun wesa kro, kisi b unknwn numbr sy call mt uthana, or rocky ki call blkul bhi pick mt krna, jo mrzi o jye tum us k numbr sy call pick mt krna. Main nain pta chala lia hai wo log abi kdhr hain, main jaa raha hun udhr, or tum abi meri friend ki sister k pas ruko gi, tm us ghr sy kadam nhi nkalo g. jo main keh raha hun dihaan say suno. Or is bar kuch ghlti mt krna."

Aftr picking up all the things, they leave the flat.

And kartar drives the car, and drops ayat on sara's home..

"kartar! Ab SP gupta ko pick krna hai. Unhun nain kia kaha tha k wo kidhr milain gain?"

"wo keh rhay thy k greenland restaurant k samny."

"chalo phr wahin chalo na"

"hmm! Han wahin ja rhy hain"

"pta nhi aliya kis hal main ho g?"

"Aliya ki bohat fikar ho rhi ha?"

"biwi hai wo meri, kesy fikar na ho?" (Be inteehhhaa)

They pick SP Gupta. He was also in civilian's dress.

"to Mr. gupta kia plan hai?

"main nain udhr 2 or civilians k dress main police behj di hai jo backup plan k lye hung yen udhr..

"theek sir! Bus model town main street numbr 45 hai na?"

"g or house no. 148"
"theek sir! Bus pohnch gye hain hum!"

They enter in the house, secretly, and attack on the guards, n

After so much fight Zain reaches to the Control room, where rocky was sitting on a relaxing chair. And aliya was tied with the rope. And she was in fainted condition.

After fight with rocky he saves himself.

Mr. Gupata arrests him and Zain saves Aliya.

He unties her And hugs her. (ISHQ KHUDAAA)

She was fainted.

He holds her and brings her to Hospital.

THE END

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I hope u guys will Like it. plz dont forget to leave your comments. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os.hope this happen in show so that we get to see some intense zaya scene.keep writing more on zaya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ressy messy😉
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lovely OS dear😃
plz update ur FF soon too😊
i love zaya a lot😳
Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hy nice os dear
Dis is the frst wrk m reading fr zain n aliya..

Lets hope vl get more amazing wrk ..in future
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

nice os.hope this happen in show so that we get to see some intense zaya scene.keep writing more on zaya.




yea ryt.. thats why I want this track.. that rocky should kidnap her 😆 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Hy nice os dear

Dis is the frst wrk m reading fr zain n aliya..

Lets hope vl get more amazing wrk ..in future




aww thanks dear 😳 😳

yea not so much writers r wrkng here. but I have seen sme ff here..
I hav also started bt didnt update 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res
unres

cool it was,..
short n sweet,..
i just want th show ina direction where both confess asap,..😆😆
Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing os
Now i want this to happen in BI lol
Keep writing dear
Love ur work
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow all ksgians are here eh lolz
So we all watch beintehaa now as our ksg is not in qh eh
Lovely os hun

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