SS: Adhuri Dhadkan... Last part - pg 36, 26th Dec 2013 - Page 21

beautiful morning romance.

Awesome...superb ending Ritu
loved it so much
Maaneet scene were lovely...loved geet confession
well written
thanks for sharing n PMs

just now finished it .awesome but pls give epilogue plsss

love ur ss yaar

Last part.. but happy ending.. Finally both confessed their love... Amazing part..

Sorry Rituja for late comments...

Part 2

Geet's past and pain was very well written...I could feel what she must have gone through...first her father's rejection and then that accident while she was on phone with him...

Maan is so excited to meet her but he will be hurt too after hearing the truth...

Part 3

Wow what an amazing part...sach mein I was just lost in it completely...

Loved how she told him truthfully and he believed that yes she will try her best. The part where he asks her about his name...wow that was so touching...

You are a great poetess ritzz...your few lines convey everything. She said yes and he is ready to wait...i am sure it will take less than lifetime because pyaar sirf ek baar nahi hota...hum bahut logon se pyaar karte hain bas har kisi ki jagah alag hoti hai humari zindagi mein...

Part 4

Engagement and Marriage...last part was very touching...it will tough for her to call him with his name...Along with her, Maan is also feeling helpless...very emotional indeed

Part 5

Haule haule...true love always get reciprocated sooner or later...his patience finally won and she realized her love...very well written ritzz...

Part 6

Geet;s POV was so well explained...aah...just lovely

Pihu is so cute...peeloon...lol...perfect ending thought I wouldn't mind an epilogue at all

Muaah...

awesome ss👏👏




epilouge please

Beautifully Written...<3
The way Maan had a hope that Geet will love him Back.
Geet gave a chance to Relation.
One Accident Which took Her love And the other accident Gave her Soulnate.
It was A amazing SS
Both Complete Each Other in A perfect way

Adhoori thi Wo Pyar ko Khone ke Kaaran
Adhoora Tha wo Pyar na Milne Ke Kaaran.
Mile the Ye Dono Adhoore Logh.
Ek dusre Ko Adhoore Pan se Mitane...

loved it to d core :D


its A perfect Ending But Have greed To read Epilogue...[EMAIL= ][/EMAIL]

Very Nice Update.



Please give an Epilogue for it...

very sensible and well written ss. its like tasting a good coffee with perfect combo of emotions,love,understanding.