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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#191

WHAT A LOVELY END

GEET FELL IN LOVE WITH MAAN AND CANT THINK OF HER LIFE WITHOUT HIM

AND GIVE AN EPILOGUE

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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#192

Awww that was such a nice n happy ending

Hahahahahaaa couldnt stop laughing reading pihu's masti n teasing

N loved geet's side of the story of how she fell in love again n the song was just beautifulll

Gonna miss this story but u better come back soon with a new n a long one

N the ending lines were just wowww

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KawaiiGeet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#193

finally read this...
sryy pichle baar ka tho precap dekh ke meiine gussey mein comment hi nahi kiya... lol
khair ab kar deti hun.
i also thot ke maan ka accident hua but this time it was geet
can really understand her emotion because she had lost her love once and she cant anymore...
her confession to him was maano jaise apna sab kuch daav par lagaya ho maut ke saamne...
like if she doesnt say now..she wont be able to say it forever!
this update was just too good
she realized what he means to her...ow much he cares for her..and how much he loves her
even after she told him she wont be able to love him, he still did his part religiously not letting her even a bit upset about her past or present
this maan is just too good yaar

i loved geet's monologue whrin she realizes her needs and his needs.
their morning romance was so nice re...and pihu...uff this is called real sense kabab mein haddi and i love her for tht😎
epilogue...i demand a hottt epilogue😃

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_SnowFlakes_

@_SnowFlakes_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#194

Awesome & beautiful update ..

Loved it how geet explained to maan that hw she fall for him ..

hahaha pihu disturbing in maaneet's romantic moment ..😉 & maan getting irritated ..

pihu teasing maaneet with peelon song was superb ..

finally the selfless love & care of maan won & geet fall in love with him..

Loved the poem in the end it is really beautiful ..

Yesss me want epilouge plsss ..

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#195

part 6
last part
awesome dear...
lovely...
nice one...

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gurti30

@gurti30

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#196

beautiful end dear

finally adhuri dhadkan puri ho gayi and man got his love and geet got her happiness and love back in her life

and would love to read epilogue😊

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#197

haii ritu here i am

god this story short and sweet just loved it gal

and that prologue with poem just taken my heart away now i can see you are very good poet

i got ur poem but didn't got time to give reply sorry

in frront of you i am nothing re i am not poet must accept it

Saasein mein le to raha tha

Un saason ko lene ki wajah aaj mili

Dil to har pal dhadak raha tha

Is dhadkan ko uski taal aaj mili...

Saasein to mein le rahi hu

Un saason ki wajah kahi kho gayi hai

Dil to abhi bhi dhadakta hai

Uski aawaz par kahi gumsum ho gayi hai...

these lines i loved it actually the whole one from prologue but u deleted that why re?? may i know

you are such good writer and this story wah ji

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#198

part 1

i love maan and his choti so much they are full of life

actually loved whole family of khurana geet's dad happy going

choti is such a sweet and cute girl

geet is living with soo much pain i can feel it your narration makes me feel her pian also

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Twilightsparkle

@Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#199

maan's choti is really such cute making fum of MSK oops not bad choti

geet and armaan were so happy with there life but god taken away there love but again given chance to geet to live again

nice part

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 11 years ago

#200

part 3

geet straight away said no even said she wont be able to love him

i felt sad for both maaneet here maan lost his love when she said she loves some one else even his name remainds her love

fate it really cruel when maan given freedom to decide everything of her choice she said yes for parents

ohh that was painfum for both maaneet re

Pyaar karte hai par keh nahi sakte

Pyaar kar liya ab dobara nahi kar sakte...

Nibhaunge ye rishta bina umid ke

Dharm nibhaungi patni ka puri shiddat se...

Keh na sakenge par kabhi to tum samjhogi

Samjhne ki aapko mein puri koshish karungi...

Zindagi ab tumhare pyaar ke intazar me gujarenge

Zindagi ab sirf is rishte ko nibhane ke liye jeeyenge...

these lines are just awesome re you did great job saying there feelins with poem just awesome

sparkle

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