SS: BEETEY LAMHE....cs and chp-1 pg 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys I hope everyone remembers me...actually I was not active on IF but now im back with a story...im having this story in my mind from quite a long time from now...so I thought let's give it a try...so here it goes...

PROLOUGE

Just in the middle of nowhere...life gives you a fairytale...and that's exactly what happened with me
it is said everyone we see or know are meant to cross our paths in our life...but why the hell u came into my life ? why god ? why u did this to me...why did u snatched him from me so early ? so easily...?

28TH AUGUST 2013
Uday: hey! XD
Manya's POV hmmm...uday kapoor? Who is he ? liking my pics and now sending me mssg...let me check his profile...she checked his profile...hmm...his profile picture is nice...the way he is posing give me signals that he is cool and smart so I should reply him...END OF POV
Manya: hey...
Uday: hows u ?
Manya: im good u tell...
Uday: same here ...so can we know each other ?
Manya: um...yeah sure...so ur in ais ? (AIS- ASTER INTERNATIONAL SCHOOL ...THE SCHOOL IN WHICH THEY STUDY)
Uday: yesh...
Manya: oh me too...in which class?
Uday: 12th and u ?
Manya: ur quite elder than me...anyways im in 9th
Uday : so does that matters ?
Manya: no it doesn't but im just saying im younger...LOL
Uday: yeah...even I like young girls...
MANYA'S POV...LOL HE IS SO FUNNY AND SWEET...


8TH SEPTEMBER 2013
Manya: ok bye now...kal maths practical hai aur aarti mam ke questions horrible hote hai...
Uday: aree nhi...mai bhi toh padha hun unse...vo toh achi teacher hai...
Manya: toh fir mera bhi practical de diyo kal ?
Uday: han...dekh liyo ...top karegi fir tu...mujhe bula liyo kal...
Manya: han top toh karungi but neeche se...
Uday: aree pls ...don't go offline so soon...mera bhi padhne ka man nhi kar rha...thodi der aur bat karte hai pls?
MANYA'S POV...AWW...HIS TALKS ARE SO CUTE...


oye...manyata dekh ...voh hai uday jisse tu har din bat karti hai...sanya her best frnd told her...
manyata stared uday from some distance...
hmm...ye sirf apni pics mei hi acha lagta hai...he is a very average looking guy...and iski height kitni choti hai...ye 12th class mei hai ? strange...MANYATA THOUGHT...


I wanna tell u something ...but tu nhi samjhegi.....manyata mssged her frnds sanya...
aree bta na pls? she texted back...
okay...i like him...and I have a crush on him from quite some time...
yeah I knew it...


15th October 2013...
uday send one of his pic to manya in which he was holding a small baby in his arms...and asked her how is the picture...
MANYATA POV...OMG HE LOOKS SO SO SO DAMN CUTE WITH BABY...AWW...SHE WAS JUST HAVING AN EXTRA BIG SMILE ON HER FACE...then she mssged him
Manya: ye mssg mere liye hai ? -_-
Uday: han...
Manya: anyways ye baby kiska hai ?
Uday: tera and mera...LOL
manyata started blushing very very hard after reading this mssg...


slowly they became good frnds...and eventually very good frnds...everyday they use to see each other in school...but never dared to go and talk face to face...and they use to mssg each other everyday...


as uday was in 12th class so his pre-boards started ...he stopped coming to school...and n the other hand some circumstances forced manyata to log in her facebook account and hand it over to her brother...her brothe read all her mssges...also the whole chat with uday...
everyone in her house thought she was in relationship with him...because just the way they use to talk made everyone believe that they are dating...but manyata tried to convince everyone that uday is just her frnd nothing else...

she was alone...she was not able to talk to uday...she didn't knew where he was...how he was...and she was so disturbed by all this...that she wanted to sucide...she went in a minor depression for sometime...no one noticed that...she was all broken from inside she was missing uday very much...she was no longer frnds with her best frnd sanya...she spent endless nights thinking about uday...crying...listening to heart-breaking song...
just waiting everything to be alright once again...


so guys done with prologue ...do tell me how is it...i know u'll be very confused...but it will be clear as story will progress...and yeah one more thing...my exams are starting..so I'll give u cs and chapter 1 on 22nd march...till then do tell me ur views should I continue this story or not...

LOVE ANU...😳



PROLOUGE : PAGE 1 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3940299

CHARACTER SKETCH: PAGE 4 http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3940299&TPN=4&#p103265247

CHAPTER ONE: PAGE 4
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3940299&TPN=4&#p103265247

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Anu ,

Prologue was awesome! The messages between Manveer were very sweet ... and when Uday told that the Baby was hers and his - that was too cute😳!!
Obviously u should continue the story!
I hope there is a happy ending for the 2😃.
**Sanya's part - I mean the way she spoke about Uday ... is quite confusing ; Why is she trying to put Manyata off him😕?
Try to update before the 22nd😳! Thanks for the PM😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Anu welcome back!!🤗
Nice prologue btw what happened to your other S.S
and where did u disappear😆 to lol
Do continue the story soon!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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really nice update nd plz plz update next prt soon waiting sweety nd add me to ur buddy list
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Posted: 11 years ago
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U NOE WAT THIS IS TEENAGER LOVE STORY BUt SACHIEE YE STORY MUJH PE BELONG KARTI hai i mean chat ... how he said hey to her how they became more than frndz oh god... that so me ...this is perfect love it plz continue .. even mai has rhi thi coz ye sab mere sath ho chuka ... hai 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dear superb prologue. Love it. If possible then add me in ur pm list. Conti soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey anu welcum back
the prologue is fantastic
u should continue
plsss contnue soon
pls update ur 2 ss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...navina...

Hi Anu , Hey!

Prologue was awesome! Thank you😳 The messages between Manveer were very sweet ... and when Uday told that the Baby was hers and his - that was too cute😳!! yeah...indeed cute...😳😉
Obviously u should continue the story! yeah sure...😃
I hope there is a happy ending for the 2😃. i hope that too...but lets see...
**Sanya's part - I mean the way she spoke about Uday ... is quite confusing ; Why is she trying to put Manyata off him😕? actually no...but maybe yes...u'll get to know...😳
Try to update before the 22nd😳! Thanks for the PM😊. I'll try

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey annu,
how have you been?
missing your ss
do continue that too
and for this story
OMG i have never ever read such a cute story
awn they meet in FB
this is just so awesome
omg manyata 's brother
how dare he do that?
and awn uday was so cute about the baby part
how can someone not fall for him?
omg 22 is long way
please try to update a bit faster
and thanks for the pm
hugss

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Posted: 11 years ago
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anu really the prologue and the chats manveer had i found it cute when they couldnt speak to each other face to face but were comfortable talking online... where did uday go all of sudden poor manyata in a depression missing uday i hope he is missing her too and how comes sanaya and manyata r no longer friends do update first part soon and thanks for the pm

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