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Posted: 11 years ago
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SOME ERROR POSTING THE CHAPTER ...WILL BE UPDATING SOON
Edited by anu1299 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Manyata Chopra - a cute girl of 14yrs...very self conscious...she thinks no one will ever love her or like her because she don't look beautiful as other girls...but she was cute , slim , fair, hot and sexy ...but her height made her conscious...and she developed a complex...she was quite less in height...

Uday Kapoor - 18yrs old...not so charming and handsome...but he is cute by his nature...even he have very short height...he have no goal in his life...he just enjoys his life with his frnds...smoking , drinks and hookah...that's what he use to call real fun...

Sanya Mishra - 14yrs old ...best frnd of manyata...she was damn intelligent one of the topper in her class...she use to love a guy a lot...but because of her looks he don't like her back...unlike manyata she was not good looking or hot or sexy...she had very dark complection...and when manyata started liking uday and seeing uday flirt with manyata back...she hated it...because no one use to even look at her...the one she loved doesn't loved her back and her bestfrnd got the one she wanted...

komal chopra - manyata's mother...after the birth of manyata's younger brother she use to care about the new born child and unknowingly neglected manyata the reason why she hates her mom...

Brijraj chopra - a busy man...who don't have time for her daughter...but he loves her...but manyata started hating him for being such a bad dad...

Vijay chopra - manyata's elder brother he is 15yrs old...always miffed with manyata...doesn't like her much...and wants to see her unhappy ...:(

Jai chopra - manyata's younger brother...just 2 yrs old...manyata doesn't pay attention to him...she thinks he took away her mother's care and love from her..but deep inside she loves her brother the most ...and can do anything for him...


other characters will be introduced as the story will progress...

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Edited by anu1299 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it starts with girl coming back home after her school holding her bag...which was falling till her knees...enters her house...
MOM ...she shouted...
aagayi beta...her mother came ...
W*F ? im standing in front of her and she is asking have u reached ? what is wrong with her? Strange she! ...jai ke birth ke bad toh pta hi nhi ...in mein sense of humour nam ki cheez bachi hi nhi hai ...>.< ...irritated manyata thought...
yes mom...she answered in an irritating tone...
how was ur day ?
theek tha...she said and went into her room...

IN EVENING...
17TH AUGUST 2013
as she logged into her fb account...
she checked frnds request list...
first name that showed upon her screen was
UDAY KAPOOR
150 MUTUAL FRNDS...


hmmm..uday kapoor...150 mutual frnds? I think I should accept his request...she thought and accepted his req.
that day he was not online...and when she logged out of her account he signed in ...


days passed by...and it was 28TH AUGUST 2013
she logged in her account...
suddenly she got a notification that said "uday kapoor liked your profile picture"
after 2mins she got another notification that says "uday kapoor liked your cover picture"

abbey yeh hai kon ? uday kapoor? Liking my pics? Lemme check his profile...she checked his profile info and all...then she looked at his profile pic....hmm...he is cute...in the way he is posing...

she commented on her profile pic "thanx uday kapoor fr thy lyk" 😊
then on her cover pic 😊

after 5 mins she got a mssg from uday (guys now I'll be showing their chat ) :
Uday : hey! XD
Manya: hey...
Uday:hows u ?
Manya: good wbu?
Uday: same here...
manya: hmmm...
Uday: can we know each other?
Manya:umm...sure...ur in ais If im not wrong ? (ais - aster international school)
Uday: yeah...
Manya: oh me too...in which class?
Uday: 12th and u ?
Manya: ur quite older ...anyways im in 9th
Uday : so does that matters? XD
Manya: no it doesn't ...im just saying im younger...LOL
Uday: yeah...even I like young girls...😉
Manya: lols...
in her mind she thought....aww...his talks are cute...
Uday: aur tell...
Manya: nothing much...u tell...
Uday: same here....
Manya: hm...anyways bbye...gtg...
Uday: bye...

the whole night she thought about their convo...
he said he likes young girls...was he indirectly saying he likes me ? no manyata...kya sochti rehti hai tu ? ...aaj pehli bar bat kari hai ...itni jaldi thodi na koi kissi ko like karne lagta hai...

next day in school...she told sanya and Kajal about her talk with uday (kajal is also her bestest frnd)
Kajal : aye haye...vo chotu sa bacha lagta hai...height dekhi hai uski...tu kaha uske chakkar mei fas gyi ?
Sanya: shayad maine dekha hai usse...itna bhi cute nhi hai...
Manya: han toh maine kab kaha ki mai usse like karti hun...im just saying ki kal humne normal bat kit hi...tumhe toh kuch batana hi nhi chahiye...


5TH AUGUST 2013...
everyone was assembled in basket ball court of the school...it was teachers day ...
when sanya said oye...manyata dekh ...voh hai uday jisse tu uss din bat kar rhi thi...sanya her best frnd told her...
manyata stared uday from some distance...
hmm...ye sirf apni pics mei hi acha lagta hai...he is a very average looking guy...and iski height kitni choti hai...ye 12th class mei hai ? strange...MANYATA THOUGHT...


SO GUYZZ THAT WAS IT...I KNOW THIS PART WAS A BIT BORING...THE ACTUAL STORY WILL START FROM CHAPTER 2 ...SO I HOPE U ALL LIKE THIS CHAPPY ...SORRY IF I WASTED UR TIME...

LOVE ANU 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice update
so the villain is sanya
but what happend between them
i hope uday and manayata meet
also update ur other 2 ss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Anu ,

nice update! I knew from the prologue that Sanya was after Uday herself, that's why she was putting Manyata off him. Their first chat was quite cute😳.
Ummm , Jai is a baby boy😲!! Shocking , but a nice change😆.
Do continue soon,
thanks for the PM😊.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey this is amazing!!!😃
I thought Jai was a girl lol you changed her to a boy😆
Anyway it was fab!! And their chat was so cute!☺️
(Wishing it was me😆 being manyata)
Aha x Do Update soon! And i mean soon otherwise i will murder u!!!!!!!!!!!😈
Ty for the pm😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved the update so even sanya liked uday thats y she was finding faults of him in front of manyata... hmm so there is distance between the siblings as manyata thinks because of j her mom doesnt pay much attention on her which i hope decreases soon... y doesnt vijay like manyata i hope in the future he and sanya dont join hands... the first was gd really cant wait for the second part do update soon and thanks for the pm ... plus the cs is lovely
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Awesome update! The storyline is very intriguing 😳
Uday is short in height!?!? Thats awkward 😕
Lol Jai is her baby brother 😆
Anyways do continue soon and keep up the good work! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice cs. Superb starting. Thanks for pm. Continue soon. Sorry for late comment.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
hey!
sorry im late
was busy wid exams!
well updates marvellous!
teenage phase very unstable phase...
and that surely happens wid every1
so natural!!
loved it to core
update soon

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