OS: First Kiss - Page 5

Originally posted by: pinks2911

And I missed this..😭

But I have your index bookmarked now..😃 So no way I am gonna miss your stories now...😉

Originally posted by: Nikita_Smith

This is what we call an exceptionally well written One Shot...Great Job Saima👏

Can you please provide me the link to your writing index :)

Originally posted by: farz_parachute

I've actually read this when you first posted it...and read it couple of days ago, never got to clicking the 'like button' Am just reading it again now, so thought I'd comment..

This part got to me! I love it when Zoya gets all frustrated and starts lashing out...

'I'm sorry I didn't...' Zoya held her hand up to stop him she held back the tears that stung her eyes 'you know someone once said to me that I should never waste my time trying to explain myself to those who are committed to misunderstanding me...and you not only misunderstand me but are also committed to hurting me and time and time again showing me...letting me know how much you hate me...what do you want from me Asad an apology...sorry for ever coming into your life, into your home, for making friends with Najma, for coming to India or for being born...which is it Asad?' Zoya screamed in a tone of voice she never knew existed.

👏👏👏

Overall, so sweet and very heartfelt.

I love Zoya here. But then again. I love Zoya in almost every story. Hehe.

<font size="2">I'd like to say write more, but you do already. So now I say...write s'more?😉</font>

<font size="2">Kay, kay...penning off now.</font>

<font size="2">Mwah mwahhh</font>

Originally posted by: benaz

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hiya. I started reading this OS of yours but then I was like have I read this before? But still I continued reading and then I knew I had read it but didnt get around to comment. I had liked it. Just to say that your stories are worth reading twice and even more😉</font>

Originally posted by: aman93

such a lovely story