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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: mochhug
THIS WAS SOOO FLIPPING CUTE! OMG! And you captured their emotions, their characterization sooo well.

I was so waiting for your comment...ur so cute.

Thank you for liking and leaving your feedback

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Priya Tilva

@asadzoya143

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Very beautifully written. I liked it.

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Farhana

@risingsea101

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Amazing OS Saima

Beautifully written :)

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: risingsea101
Amazing OS Saima
Beautifully written :)

Thank you 😊

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duasahil

@duasahil

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hi,I am new here n read first kiss its very nice. and realy soft touch of lovers,hope we will get more chance to read beautiful story from u.

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-DarkSlayer-

@-DarkSlayer-

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Awww, this was so cute! I honestly loved how even though Asad knows he loves Zoya there is this difficulty of how he will tell her. Thank you so much for such an awesome OS.

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

OMG! Such a beautiful OS :)

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-Astrid-

@-Astrid-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Beautifully written😊...loved it😊

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Saima Syed

@Saima-Syed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart
Awww, this was so cute! I honestly loved how even though Asad knows he loves Zoya there is this difficulty of how he will tell her. Thank you so much for such an awesome OS.
xx

Thank you so much for liking it. Please do read my other OS's if you get a chance.