JaGan FF- Heavenly Soulmates (Updt-part 22 -pg 48) - Page 34

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Posted: 12 years ago
@sush meri andar tou WU parnai ki bhi himmat nahi rahe 😆suna hai doctor sahab sirf kuch seconds k darshan daitay hain koi isay kidnap karo and naya show dilyao 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sushiani


haan he is so cutee , I love him so much.. ussko baut pamper karti that smday he was doind sharat with crayons , he made walls dirty.. my sis was scolding him..
it happened recently so i wrote it..
i thought it will be great as JaNu scene..
sadly we are not getting any scenes of them these days😭

Aww little baby..give him lots of love from me
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update Sushi 🤗 loved it 😊 you included some action drama also. I can imagine the scene. Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks sush for your update, it is so nice. Thank you very much
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow this was so nice.👍🏼 👏I enjoy a lot about lal singh's part in your update👏🤗. eagerly waiting for your next part🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

A very Short Update for now.. I will update it soon

Night:

It was monsoon night in Rajasthan, person will have no clue when the rain starts.. Mannu was already so tired all these days,she decided to take stay in the temple near the outskirts of Jaitser.
"Am I wrong," she leaned at the pillar staring upwards, It was cloudy and the sky was not clearly visible the situation resembled her state of mind, it was full of doubts and confusion.
Doubt because she was afraid that there are still chances, Ratan may attack haveli people again but she has to leave the place, "why should I un-necessarily put them in trouble?"she thought.
She was confused because of her restlessness, "I should be happy , I left the place now He cannot harm Dr.saab and his family.. The burden of guilt is gone but why I feel like crying now? I feel so.empty now but why?"she was lost in thoughts.

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Next Day Morning:
He woke up with a smile on his face, a smile really meaned alot to him .Few months back his life was lifeless.. now he is like a cool teenager full of life and joy. He thought of yesterday's incident were he held her hand.. he dint have any answer , if he is questioned 'why did you do that?' The way he made her quite making mannu to draw in the mobile app . "I must take her to the hospital today.." he thought and got up. He looked at the clock it was 6'o clock in the morning. He got up almost everyone were awake.

He stood before the door and tried to knock it but it just opened even with so light pressure on it. He went inside and found the room empty. He came downstairs thinking she must have been in the kitchen with Mannu. But his guess was wrong , he checked all the places even the couch sometimes where she sits and stare at the sky. No sign of her. He asked everyone in the home and everyone gave the same answer that they haven't seen Ganga since morning. Small fear entered his mind.. he was so worried for her.. He ran towards her room.His worries turned to anger. Dadisa and Basant came upstairs.. Ds was quite surprised, she never expected Ganga to leave home in.such a manner that too when situations are like this.

"Lets inform police, we cannot just assume that she left the place, anything could have happened.. after witnessing yesterday's incident anything may happen...," Basant was saying he looked at jagya..," we cant stay quite like this."
"Tausaa no attack happened, she left the haveli, she dint neither took the toys or gifts which we gave to Mannu along with her.. " he pointed at the toys which they gave to Mannu , his voice choked, "She just left.. lets get into our works.." he said.

Ds and Basant were surprised with Jagya's behaviour. They expected him to in search for Ganga and Mannu but he reacted in a complete different manner.
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.In The Hospital:

Jagya looked as serious as he could be , but there was a slight trace of sadness and disappointment in his eyes which his friend figured out, "Stop it Jagya, Enough you are doing a lot of drama ." Lal singh said seriously. "Ganga and Mannu shouldn't the topic now."Jagya replied.

"Did I take their Names by Chance? OH! so its about them you are thinking about holding the wrong file to check the data.. " Lal said.

"Its none of your business Lal Singh , please stop it.."Jagya said and tried to go out of the place but Lal singh stopped him.."Enough of your stupid ego go find them if u r worried and who you are trying to bluff saying you don't really care about them. Look I know you lo.. "Lal stopped.

"What did you just say lal, tumne abhi kya kaha..?" Jagya was shocked to hear that. He dropped all the files and demanded him to answer, "Look I dont what you actually feel for Ganga but as a third person or a friend I think you are in love with her.." Lal Singh said,"I amy be wrong too , it can just be a like too but what matters is your choice. If u want them back then why are you just not going there out to search them."he ended.
Jagya left the place as he heard something which was a pure surprise for him. He said ,"I am going to house please take care of the hospital Lal."
He took his bike out and rushed to his home .
Edited by sushiani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This is nice update😊 waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey sushi, where is the next part dear ❓ I'm waiting eagerly for the 19th part😭 Please update it fast😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arul thanks for the lovely comment, I think you are the only reader left. 😆
Will update for you.. now 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sushiani

Arul thanks for the lovely comment, I think you are the only reader left. 😆

Will update for you.. now 😊

ahem hum nai comment nahi kiya par like tou kiya 😭waiting for next update Eagerly😎jaldi jaldi update karo

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