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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 7

Geet : teek hai m'am, ab mein chalthi hoon

Dadi: hare, aap thode dher hummare saath rukh nahi sakthe?

Geet: par m'am

Dadi: aap saath hothe toh humme thoda achcha lagega

Geet smiles and looks at Maan...

Maan ko hosh aatha...

Maan: dadi

Dadi: Maan bete, ye aapne kya kardhi? Hum ne kitne bar kaha ki ye bahut bhuri aadat hai

Maan looks at Geet...then he looks at dadi...

Dadi sabke samne kuch bhi bolthe hai...woh bhi iss pagal ke samne...

Pehle hi ye Maan ko bahut izzat karthi?...

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: woh...mein

Maan: Dadi, Adi abhi tak nahi aaya?

Dadi: Adi office chala gaya

Maan: lekhin meinne ussko yahan aane ko kaha tha

Dadi: humne hi unko wapas bheja hai, hum haina aapke paas

Maan gets irritated...

Maan: aapko yahan aane ki kya zaroorat thi?

Geet is shocked...ye kaise batein kartha?

But Dadi is used to this, ye sab uss daru ka asar hai...

Maan needs it desperately...Dadi is here to stop him...

Dadi: Maan bete, jab aap yahan hai toh hum kaise nahi aathe?

Maan: aapko takleef lene ki kya zaroori hai, aap ghar jaake aaram kyun nahi karthe?

Dadi bahut upset hothe...

Dadi: Maan bete, ye aap kaise batein kar rahe hai? hum aapko aaise haal mein akhele kaise chodke jaathe?

Geet feels that there is some problem...

She doesn't want to interfere in their personnel matter...

And she can't stand Maan's rude attitude towards his own Dadi, she just hates him all the more...

Yahan rehthi toh zaroor jagdah ho jayega...

Geet: toh m'am, mein chalthi hoon

She leaves them alone...

Geet keeps thinking about Dadi and feels bad for her...

Maan ko dadi ki koi parva nahi hai...

Kaise aadmi hai? bahut bade cricketer ho toh kya hua? Apne dadi se koi aaise baat kartha hai kya?

Mujhe toh usske shakal dekhthe hi patha chal gaya ki ye aaisa hi hoga, pura ka pura Dhust Danav, haina babaji?

Geet ki duty katam hone ke badh woh ghar jaane ke liye tayaar hai...

Jaane se pehle apne colleague se dadi ke khyaal rakhne ke liye kehkke jaathi...

Aur unke madat karne ke liye request bhi karkke jaathi...

That night Maan asks dadi to go home and take some rest, she can come back in the morning...

Dadi is not ready to leave him alone, but Maan sends her home somehow...

Then he calls Adi...

Adi drinks lekhe aatha...being an addict Maan couldn't stay away from alcohol any more...

He has turned mad and needs his drink very badly...

Adi too knows that he is not supposed to do this, but he is a mere servant, he works for Maan and it is his job to obey his master, moreover if he doesn't get him what he wants Maan would ask the wardboy or someone else to get him, that way the press people would get the news...

Pehle hi Maan ka naam karab ho gaya, iss accident ke badh, adi covered it up blamimg the driver for the accident...

Next day doctor ko patha chaltha ki Maan consumed alcohol and he gets very angry,,,,

He complaints to dadi that she should have taken this more seriously, it's her grandson's life, not any joke...

He also warns that the hospital won't allow him to saty further if he continues to disobey the rules...

Dadi ko pehle hi patha tha ki aaisa hi hoga, issiliye woh Maan ke paas rukhna chahthe the...

Dadi warns Adi not to repeat this mistake and asks him to go on a 15 day leave...

She also asks him to switch off his mobile for Maan would call him back somehow threatening him ...

Adi also wants Maan to get rid of this habit, but he is worried about Dadi, how will she manage alone?

Dadi says that she can manage with the help of the hospital staff...

Adi then leaves...

Geet comes in the evening...

She has taken her friends night duty as she had to attend her sick mother...

Warna Geet ka kaam toh sirf mornings mein hothi...

She doesn't know what happened last night...

She comes to Maan's room...

She just wanted to meet Dadi...

She also wants to know how Maan is doing...

Zyada problem toh nahi hogi?

She is still worried that she had done something wrong...

Dadi looks very upset, and she is worried about something...

What happened?

Kal ki tarah Geet se baat bhi nahi karthe?

Maan toh soothe hi raha shayad medicine ka asar ho?

Geet Dadi ko zyada pareshaan nahi karna chahathi, shayd dadi bahut tak gayi hogi...

She leaves for the moment but returns after a while to check if everything is fine...

Dadi is still awake...

Geet: aap ghar nahi gaye?

Dadi: kaise jaathe?

Dadi almost breaks down...tears run down her eyes...

Geet ko apne se itne bade buzurk ko rothe hue dekhke achcha nahi lagtha...

Geet: m'am, aap teek toh haina?

Dadi: hum toh teek hai, lekhin

Dadi looks at Maan...

Geet: kya baat hai? aap itna pareshaan kyun hai?

Dadi: humme sirf Maan ki chintha hai

Geet: aap kyun chintha karthe ho? woh jaldh hi teek ho jayenge

Dadi: nahi, Maan kabhi teek nahi honge

Geet: nahi nahi,yahan ka doctors toh sabse best hai

Dadi: woh baat nahi hai bete

Geet: toh phir?

Dadi: hum kaise kahe? M<aan ko pine ki aadat hai, humne toh unko samjaane ki bahut koshish ki, shayad unke maa hothi toh ye sab nahi hotha

Geet Dadi ek haath pakadke unko console karne ki koshish karthi...

Geet: ye kay? Aap ko toh bhukar hai, aap leitjayiye, aapko aaram ki zaroorat hai, mein tablet lekhe aathi hoon

Geet medicine lekhe aathi...

Dadi: kash humme aapke jaise pothi milthi

Geet: aap thode dher so jayiye

Dadi still keeps watching Maan...

Dadi: aaise haalat mein hum kaise so sakthe?

Geet: aap pehle ye dawa lo aur sojao, mein yahi hoon, aapke paas, aapko chintha karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, mere hothe hue yahan koi kuch nahi kar saktha, aap sojao

Dadi ko Geet pe pura barosa hai, she lies down to get some sleep...

Geet is also happy to help dadi...

She likes her so much...

Maan ki dadi haina? Shayad issiliye?

Nahi nahi, Geet ko sirf Dadi pasand hai...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
awesome update
dadi worried about maan
ye maan peena kab chodega!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
hope geet will give a big knock on maan head so ,,he will stop hurting dadi.😡😡..wonderful update..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
dadima is worried abt maan...
maan 😡 ye peena kab chedega??!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
Nice update...


Ab Geet pehredaari karigi Maan ki...uski night duty jo hain...😉



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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Part - 8

Next day...

Dadi is feeling better...

She just hopes Geet could help Maan too?

Maan is feeling restless...

He is very angry that Adi has not yet come with his medicine?

Dadi knows him netter...he is not going to get his drink today...

Maan: ye Adi kahan mar gaya? Dadi aapko kuch patha hai kya?

Dadi: nahi bete

Maan: dadi, usska phone bhi nahi lag raha hai

Dadi: humne toh unko dekha bhi nahi

Maan: phir ye Adi ahcnak kahan gayab ho gaya?

Dadi: aapko Adi ki itna fikar kyun hotha hai bete?

Maan: woh...yahan aane wala tha

Dadi: lagtha hai unko koi aur zaroori kaam aagaya

Maan: isse zaroori kya kaam ho saktha? Ye Adi hamesha aaisa hi hai

Maan gets irritated...

Maan: Dadi, aap ne ussko kuch kahan?

Dadi: humme unko kya kahenge bete?

Maan: nahi dadi, Adi aaisa kabhi nahi kartha

Maan keeps on questioning Dadi...

Geet comes with the lunch for Dadi...

She had asked Ranno to prepare lunch for Dadi as she is sick...

Dadi ki tabyat teek nahi hai aur issko toh sirf apna fikar hai...

Geet ko ye sab pasand nahi aatha...

Geet: aap thode dher chup nahi reh sakthe?

Maan stares her...

Maan: tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? doctor ne kaha ki ek hafte ke liye tummara koi kaam nahi hai

Geet: mein Dadi se milne aayi hoon, aapko patha bhi hai ki Dadi ki tabyaat karab hai?

Maan: kya? Dadi, aap ko kya hua?

Geet: ab kyun poochthe ho? do din badh poochthe, Dadi aap khana khao, aapko dawa bhi lena haina?

Dadi: humme bhook nahi hai bete

Geet: aapko kissi ki fikar karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, aap pehle apna khyaal rakho

Geet keeps staring Maan...she looks very upset...

Maan gets angry...ye kaun hothi hai mujhpe naraaz hone ki?

Maan: tum kehna kya chahathi ho?

Geet: m'am, aap aaram kijiye, mein badh mein aathi hoon

Dadi: thanks bete, kal raat hummare madat karne ke liye

Maan is shocked...

Kal raat ye kaisi madat kar rahi thi...

Jab Maan nashe mein hotha toh patha nahi kya kya kartha?

Shayad kal raat Maan nashe mein kuch kadbad toh kiya nahi...

aur dadi ko madat lene ki koi aur nahi mila?

Pehle hi ye mujhe kissi khooni ki tarah dekhthi...ab toh ye mujhe janwaar hi sanajthi hogi?

Maan is a little worried now...

But he has never cared about what other would think about him...

He has not even bothered about Dadi's feelings...

And here he is worried that this silly girl would think bad about him...

Aur ussne toh sahi kaha, Dadi bahut kamzoor lagthe...

Maan: Dadi, kal raat kya hua?

Dadi: aap chodiye, aap jaanke kya karenge?

Maan: dadi, aapne Adi ko yahan aane se mana toh nahi kiya haina?

Dadi: Maan, aap kab sudrenge?

Dadi is fed up with him now...

Maan is also not happy that he has troubled Dadi so much, but he has no control over himself now...

Maan: Dadi, meinne pehle hi kaha ki aap ghar jaake aaram kijiye, ab dekho aap ka haal ?

Dadi: hum aapko iss halat mein chodke kaise jaathe bete? Kya aap apne khyaal rakhe sakthe? Nahi na?

Maan: aaj aap ghar jaake aaram karlo, warna aapki tabyat aur bigadjaathi

Dadi: humme apni koi parwa nahi hai

Maan: dadima, aap aaise kyun zidd karteh ho?

Dadi: kyunki hum aapki Dadi hai bete, aap ki zidd toh hummare hi gene hai

Maan sochthe rehtha ki kaise Dadi ko sambalein?

He waits for Dadi to sleep...

Apr Maan ko kya patha ki raat ki duty Geet ka hai...

He has already made arrangements for the night...

Adi nahi hai toh kya?

Paise detha toh kitne log aayenge?

He has got his stock for the night, lekhin ye dadi toh soothe hi nahi...

She is watching him like an eagle...

Geet too comes to her help...

Maan Geet ko dekhthehi chilane lagtha...

Maan: tum? Iss waqt?

Geet toh Maan ko jawaab bhi nahi dethi...

Maan: hare, tumne suna nahi? Tum yahan kyun aayi ho?

Geet smiles at Dadi...

Dadi is happy to see her...

They just ignore Maan...

Geet: ab aap kaise hai?

Dadi: hum toh sirf aapki intrezaar hi kar rahe the

Maan can't tolerate this...

Ye donno milkke Maan ke khilaaf koi sajist kar rahe hai...

Maan: halo, m'am, mujhe sona hai

Geet turns the other way...

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha?

Maan shouts...

Geet: kyun chilathe ho? Dadi ko bhi sona hai, m'am aap so jayiye

Geet helps Dadi...

Geet wahi table pe beitkke apna kaam karne kai...

Maan: ye kya hai iss hospital mein patients ko chain se sone bhi nahi dethe hai kya? mein abhi chief ko call kartha hoon

Geet is not bothered...

Chief ka phone bhi nahi lagtha...lagtha hai Maan ka network mein hi problem hai, kissi ka phone bhi nahi lagtha...

Kaise lagtha? Chief toh abroad gaye hai kissi conference attend karne...

Maan: tum apna kaam bahar jaake karo

Geet toh sunthi hi nahi...

Maan smashes the medicine tray...

Dadi pretends to be sleeping...

Let him do whatever he wmats...this is Geet's plan...

Geet doesn't move, she continues her work...ek bar mudke bhi nahi dekhthi...

Dadi ko ye sab dekhkke bahut maza aatha...

Ahccha hai Geet, ye toh humme kitna tang karthe hai, aaj inko aap ahccha jawaab dethe hai...

She comes and gives him a chit...

Maan: ye kya hai?

Geet: ye sab apne hi thoda haina? Iss ka bill, wow aapke haath mein kitna dam hai, ye lo issko bhi thodo

Geet gives him another instrument...

Maan is confused and annoyed at this behavior...

Maan: kya? pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Geet sochthi hai ki aaj mein tumme pagal banakke hi codthi...

Geet: woh kya haina? Ye teek se kaam nahi kartha, aur hummare kanjoos chief issko badalthe hi nahi, ab tummare paas itna paisa hai aur itna gussa bhi hai toh mein bhi isski thoda faida utana chahathi hoon, tummare gusse ki koi na koi faida toh hona chahiye haina? Kyunki ye aaise waise nahi MSK ki gussa hai

Ab Maan ko hi patha nahi ki iss ladhki ko kya karein?

Maan ko teek karna hai toh aaise hi kissi ki zaroorat hai, yahi Maan ko zabardast takkar de sakthi, Dadi toh ab Geet ko apne bahu hi manthe hai, MSK ka waat lag gaya...

Behcare Maan, he is hopeless...

He feels like a caged tiger, woh bhi wounded...

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awesome update
geet hi maan ko sudhar sakti hai!!!!!!!
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😆😆😆lovely update..pls cont soon..
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Part - 9

Maan aaise chup chap issko dekhkhe nahi reh saktha...

Maan jaise bhi apna kaam karkhe rahega...

Maan ne ek bar faisla kar liya hai toh koi bhi ussko rokh nahi saktha, ye pagal ladhki bhi, haina?

Iss ladhki ko aaise nahi sambal saktha, toh koi aur tareeka dhoondhna padega...

Socho Maan socho...

Maan revolt kartha toh ye bhi revolt karthi...

Maan chilatha toh ye bhi chilathi...

Agar Maan sojaatha toh ye bhi sojayegi, haina?

Ye teek lagtha...Maan retreats amd pretends to be tired...he lies down...

Geet wapas apne jagah pe jaake apna kaam karthi...

Dadi is very happy...she can get some rest now...

Sher ko sambalne sherni aagayi haina?

Geet haina? Ab Maan kuch nahi kar saktha...

Dadi chain se sojaathi...

Geet bhi Maan se ladhke bahut tak gayi...

She also falls asleep...

Maan is just waiting for this...

He takes out the bottle he has been hiding beneath his pillow...

Geet switches on the light...

Geet: aapne kya socha? Ye aapka ghar hai?

Maan: ghar nahi hai toh kya hua? Ye bhi mera hi kamra hai, meinne paise diya haina?

Geet: ye koi lodge nahi hai, ye hospital hai aur yahan ka kuch rules and regulations hai

Maan: what? Tum log yahan seva nahi kar rahe ho, I have paid a huge amount, paisa kam hai toh aur lelo, kitna chahiye?

Geet: kitne doge?

Maan just can't understand her...issko kaise deal karthe?

Maan ko laga ye mazak kar rahi hai...

But Geet is serious...

Geet: bolo litne doge?

Maan si surprised...toh ye bhi paise chahathi?

Maan smiles...

Maan: kitna chahiye? Ek lakh? Do lakh?

Geet: ye toh bahut kam hai

Maan: kya? ye lo blank cheque, jitna chahe fill karlo

Geet: A/C mein paisa haina?

Maan: jitna tum soch sakthi usse bhi zyada hai

Geet fills it and gives it to him...

Maan: 10 lakh?

Geet: aaj ke liye itna hi kaafi hai, sign karo

Maan sign karke detha...

Maan: ab jao, mujhe akhele chodo

Geet: hare, apne 10 lakh diya hai, mujhe apki seva karne ki ek moka toh dijiye, lo bottle mujhe do, mein open karke dethi

Maan gives it to her...jaise bhi Maan ko pina hai...

Geet takes it to the wash basin and pours it down...

Maan is pissed off...

Maan: ye kya kar rahi ho? pagal ho gayi ho kya?

Geet: nahi, aap pagal ho gaye ho, paison se sab kuch kareed nahi sakthe, samje aap?

Maan: mera paisa?

Geet: tummare paison ke liye meinne tummare jaan bacha liya hai

Maan: what?

Geet: issko peethe toh mar jaathe haina?

Maan gets very angry...

Maan: tum samajthi kya apne aapko?

Geet: sshhh...dhere bolo, Dadi so rahe hai

Maan: aaj toh tum bach gayi, apr mein tumme itne asaani se nahi chodoonga

Geet: thode dher chup nahi reh sakthe? Mujhe kaam karne do, mein aapki taarh baap ke paison mein nahi jeethi

Maan ko lagtha hai ki isse baat karkke koi faida nahi hai...kal issko patha chalega ki MSK se panga lene se kya kya ho saktha?

Next day...

Handa house...it's 2'o clock...Geet has just come home ...but she has to get back to work...

Geet si getting ready to leave for work...

She has been struggling to handle her time between work and Maan's watch dog duty...

Handaji: Geet, aaj itne jaldhi tayaar ho gayi, koi khaas kaam hai kya? raat ko bhi teek se sothi nahi, apna khyaal rakhna beta, kaam toh badh mein hi kar sakthe

Geet: papaji aaj mein gurudwara jaana chahathi hoon

Ranno: Geet, khana khakke jao

Geet: nahi maa, pehke babaji ka darshan phir khana

Geet babaji se dua karkke wapas aathi...

Geet switches on her mobile...

Ghar se hpone aatha...

Handaji: Geet, tum kahan ho?

Geet: mein bas abhi gurudware se nikhal hi rahi hoon

Handaji bahut pareshaan lagthe...

Hadaji: jaldhi ghar aao beta

Geet: kyun papaji? Kya baat hai?

Handaji: Geet, pehel tum ghar aao, mein tumme badh mein bathatha hoon

Geet: ji papaji

Geet rushes home...

She finds a lot of people staring her house...

And there is a police jeep parked in front of her house...

All the people look at her and start gossiping ...

Police have inquired about her only...

Lo Geet aagayi...patha nahi aajkal ke ladhkiyan kaise kaise kaam karthe?

Dekhne kemliye toh kitna sharif dikhthe?

Handaji ka izzat ko hi mitti mein miladiya issne...

Handaji kitne sharif aur imaandar insaan hai...

Aaj kal sab paison ke peeche hi padhe hai...

Geet is confused...

She rushes in to find what's wrong...

Chief has also come ...he has just landed Mambai and ahs directly come here...to meet Geet?

Aaise kya ho gaya?

Geet: chief? Aap yahan?

Chief: Geet, ye tumne kua kiay hai?

Geet: meinne kya kiya hai?

Chief: tumne Mr,MSK se paisa liya haina?

Geet: haan chief, liya tha

Ranno is shocked to hear that...

Ranno: Geet, meinne tumme aaise sanskar diya hai kya? tumne toh tere papa ka naam achche se roshan kardhi!

Handaji: Geet, tum bolo beta, kya hua tha?

Chief: Geet, tumne toh hummara hospital ki izzat ko mitti mein liladhi, mera itne saal ka mehnat ka yahi pal mila?

Police officer: you are under arrest, Ms.Geet

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Uff yeh maan kab shodhrega!!!
Nice update

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