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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 11

Geet Maan se milne jaathi...

Maan apne kamre mein akhela hai...

No one to help...

Waise Dadi ne Adi ko wpas bhulaya hai...he is on his way...

Tab tak toh Maan akhela hi hoga...

Maan phone pe kissi se baat kar raha hai...

Geet knocks...

Maan: come in

Geet gets in...

Maan is very angry looking at her in his room...he didn't expect her...

Maan: tum? Ab kyun aayi ho? paise kam pad gaye hai kya?

Geet: aap ko kya laga? Police ko bhejthe toh mein dar jaathi?

Maan: tumne toh police ko bhi daradhi, tummare wajhe se Dadi bhi mujhe chodke chale gaye

Geet: aap ko toh kush hona chahiye? Aap bhi wahi chahathe haina? Ab aap jo chaho kar sakthe ho

Maan: mujhe tummare ghyaan ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, mujhe zaroori kaam hai, tum chale jao yahan se

Geet: mujhe patha hai ki aapki zaroori kaam kya hai? yahi haina?

Geet takes the bottle she had been hiding at her back and gives to him...

Maan bahut kush hotha...jaise bhi ho usska kaam hojaye toh teek hai...

Geet: ye lo, kal raat meinne galthi se aapka bottle kali kardhi, ussko wapas karne hi aayi thi, achcha hua Dadi ko ab aapke barein mein patha chal gaya, ab aapko koi nahi rokhega, jitna chaho philo

Geet keeps it on the table

Maan tries to reach it...he couldn't...

He looks at Geet...

Geet: mein ye kaam nahi kar sakthi, aap hi lelo

Maan: tum nahi karthi toh kya hua? Ek phone kartha toh 100 log aayenge mere seva karne

Geet: paison se toh aap hazaroon servants ko kareedh sakhte pyaar ko nahi, uss faltu ki aadat ne aap se aapki Dadi ka pyaar cheenliya hai

Maan ko toh zara sa bhi afsoos nahi hai...he keeps staring the bottle...

Geet: mein bhi kisse baat karkke apna waqt barbad kar rahi hoon

Geet gets a call from Ranno...

Geet: haan maa

Ranno: Geet, tum apne lunch box ghar pe hi chodkke chale gayi

Geet: sab iss Dhust danav ke wajhe se hi hua hai

Geet stares him...

Maan is surprised...

Ye har waqt mujhe aaise kyun dehthi?

Ranno: Geet, tum teek toh haina?

Geet: haan maa, tum fikar mat karo, mein bilkul teek hoon

Ranno: mujhe bahut chintha hothi hai beta

Geet: meinne kaha na, mujhe koi kuch nahi kar saktha...

Geet looks at Maan as if to warn him...

Maan gets furious...

Ranno: tumne subhe bhi teek se nhi kahya

Geet: hare, mein kya bachi hoon, mein manage karloongi

Ranno: tere papaji tumare tiffin lekhe aarahe hai

Geet: kya? Tumne kamakaam unko kyun oareshaan kiya?

Ranno: hare, meinne toh unko rokhne ki koshish kiya tha, par woh manthe hi nahi, tum dekhlo, woh aathe hi honge

Geet: ye papaji bhi na

Geet runs to receive her father...

Geet chale jaathi...

Maan ko bahut bhura lagtha...

Ye Geet apne parivaar ko kitne pyaar karthi aur apne papaji ki kitne izzat karthi...

Ye toh bahut achci baat hai...

Ye job hi kehthi hai sach kehthi hai...

Koi dikhawa nahi...

Geet ke jaane ke badh Maan ko usske batein bar bar yaad aathe...Maan sochne laga...

He feels guilty...

He tries to call Dadi to apologise...

Lekhin Dadi Maan se baat hi nahi karna chahathe hai...

She switches off her mobile...

Ghar pe call kartha toh Nakul hi jawaab detha...

" Dadi kissi se bhi baat karna nahi chahathe, haina dadi?"

Poor Nakul he is so scared...

Maan toh ghar wapas aake Nakul ke jaan hi le lega...

Par Dadi bhi bahut ziddi hai, Nakul ke paas aur koi rastha nahi hai...

Nakul tells Maan that Dadi is very upset and she has not had her food too...

Maan feels very bad...

Itne saal mein dadi ne kabhi Maan se baat karne se inkaar nahi kiya hai, lekhin aaj uss stupid ladhki ke wajhe se Dadi Maan se baat karna bhi nahi chahathe...ye bhi uss stupid idiot ka hi idea hoga?

Maan is really angry with Geet...

He has even forgotten his drink...

Maan looks at the bottle on the table...

He could have it if he wants as there is no one to stop him, he just can't...

Something stops him, maybe it's Dadi's silence...or that girl's ghyaan?

What? MSK ko koi kaise badal saktha?

Maan turns mad...

Once again he tries to call Dadi...

Her mobile is still switched off...

Maan ko bahut gussa aatha...

That bottle reminds him of Geet...

Geet has occupied his mind fully...

He sees Geet with a victorious smile on that bottle...

He throws the mobile on that...it falls down and breaks...

The smell of liquor makes him go crazy...

But that too culdn't stop him from thinking about Geet...

Adi comes just then...

Poor Adi, always enters at the wrong time...

Adi: gud mor sir

Adi thinks, toh subha subha shuru ho gaye?

Maan: tum?

Adi: Adi sir

Maan stares him...

Adi looks at the broken pieces...

Maybe that's why Maan sir is angry...

Maan sir ko naye bottle lekhe aatha toh Adi bach saktha...waise nashe mein MSK toh ek bemaan alcoholic banjaatha...

Adi: I'll get a new one sir

Ab Maan ko Geet ke baat yaad aathi..."paison se sirf servants milthe hai"

Kitna sach hai?

Maan ko apni galthi ki ehsaas hothi...

Maan: usski koi zaroori nahi hai, issko saaf kardho

Adi is shocked...

He stands there still staring Maan...

Maan: Adi, kissi ko bhulakke aao, tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha

Maan chilatha...

Adi runs to save himself...

Maan keeps thinking about what to do?

Ab jaise bhi Dadi ko manana padega...

He never felt so ashamed...

And also for the first time he feels that he is all alone and is a little scared...

All these days Dadi was a big support for him and never let him feel rejected...by his father...

And whatever he did Dadi couldn't be harsh with him...

That's why he took everything for granted...even Dadi's love and affection seemed to be irritating him...

But now he realizes his mistake...

He is nothing without Dadi or the Khurana tag...

He has just now started his career which is now a lurking in the middle...

He is scared that if he could walk again...

He is remimded of how he couldn't even take the bottle in front of that Geet...

And she was having a winning smile on her face...

And what if he couldn't stand on his own...

Nooo...his love...his cricket?...

What would he do without cricket...

He doesn't know anything else...

And that has kept him occupied and helped him stay away from his loneliness...

Suddenly he feels very weak...

He then tries to walk on his own...

He feels like a loser whenever this Geet tries to help him stand...

He is not used to this...

He is the MSK...others seek his help and he never accepts others help...

He is feeling insulted seeking Geet's help...

And what if he had to rely on others for the rest of his life...

Ohhh god...Maan kissi ke samne kaise juktha?

That's impossible...

He will have to stand on his own, without depending in anyone...specialy that Geet...

She thinks that he is left at her mercy now...

No you fool, I'm the MSK...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome updates...I have a request as u don't send pms , so can u make an index with page nos. , it is easier to read as sometimes it is not easy to read daily & searching for updates make it difficult & time consuming...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
maan realized his mistake!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanghita0000

awesome updates...I have a request as u don't send pms , so can u make an index with page nos. , it is easier to read as sometimes it is not easy to read daily & searching for updates make it difficult & time consuming...

sorry for the inconvenience...
but you will find an update on almost every page...
that's why I don't give Index as such...
there is no need for it I think...
last Update would be on last page and the previous on the previous pages...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part - 12

He tries to stand...

But he couldn't balance on his single leg...

He is not going to give up...

He tries again...

Geet had just come to see what he is doing...

As DAdi had left Maan b'coz of Geet, she feels that it's now her responsibility to keep an eye on him...

Moreover she knows that Maan's arrogance and misbehavoiur is purely b'coz of his drinking habits and he is not a Dhust danav by nature...

She had seen that he is realy feeling bad after dadi left...

She knows that he is hurt and he is helpless...

Geet keeps watching his moves...

She is happy that he wants to stand on his own...

Maan struggles and looses his balance...

He is about to fall but Geet gives him a hand...

Maan is surprised...

He looks at her eyes...

She is realy concerned about him...but why?

Maan couldn't understand her...

What does she want?

But Maan is not ready to take her help...

Geet tries to help him walk...

But Maan stares her...

He tries to leave her hand...

Geet: hare, rukho, ghirjaoge

Geet pulls the walker closer and Maan holds it for support...

Maan: toh Ms.420. ab yahan kyun aayi ho? ab kya lootne aaye ho?

Geet: what? How dare you call me a thief?

Maan: pure 10 lakh chori karkke itne nautangi teek nahi hai

Geet: mein nautangi karthi hoon?

Geet makes a cute angry face...

Maan couldn't stop himself from admiring her gimmicks...

And her eyes keep staring him always...

Though she pretends to be angry she couldn't hide her concern and affection, Geet herself doesn't know why is she so much worried about Maan? She keeps telling herself that she is doing this only for Dadi...

Poor Dadima, had to endure so much pain due to her nalayak potha...

Geet had to teach him a lesson...

Atleast for dadi's sake...

Maan tries to walk faster...

Geet stops him...

This may be dangerous...

He needs to give rest to his legs...

Geet: rukho, ek hi din mein aap daud nahi sakthe

Maan: mujhe patha hai, ye mera pher hai

Geet: aaj patha chala? Mera pher, achcha hua aap Dadi ke dua se aaj bachgaye, warna zindagi bar wheel chair mein chalna padtha

Maan: what?

Maan gets angry...

He pushes the walker harder...

He wants to show her that he can walk on his own...

But why is it that he always wants to prove her wrong...

But the thing is that Geet is always right and that irritates him the most...

He has become weak and is wobbling as he is still under the influence of alcohol...

Geet: aaise hi peethe raho, tabhi toh mujhe bhi har din ek naya tamasha dekhne ko miltha, haina babaji?

Maan: tummm

Geet: aaj ka tamasha katam karthe hai, mujhe aur bhi patients se milna hai, chalo, leitjao

Geet drags the walker...

Maan tries to resist...but she is too strong for this sick Maan...

Maan is so frustrated...

Ek pagal ladhki mujhe jeet gayi...

Ye kaise ho saktha?

Ye sab iss daru ke wajhe se hi hua hai...

Agar issko sambalna hai toh mujhe jaldh hi apne pherom pe kadhe hona chahiye...

Ab toh mein issko harakke hi chodoonga...

Maan apne aap se vada kartha ki jab tak Maan Geet ke madat ke bina chaltha daru ko haath nahi lagayega...

Maan ko patha hai ki ab kya karna hai...

He is determined to give up his drinks...

Then no one can take advantage of him and no one can control him...

Just b'coz he is not steady everyone is trying to control him, specially that stupid Geet...

MSK kissi ke haath ka katputli nahi ban saktha...chahe woh Geet ho ya Daru...

MSK pane marzi ka malik hai...

Agar MSK nahi chahtha toh usske zindagi mein kissi ka bhi ki jagah nahi hotha, na hi daru ka aur na hi kissi aur ka...

Par Maan jitna bhi koshish karein ab Geet uske zindagi ka ek zaroori hissa bangayi hai...

If he wants to keep her away he has to get hold of himself, he has to get rid of his bad habit for which he has become a slave...if he wants to be the master, then he has to take charge...he has to say no to drinks...and that way dadi will also be happy...

If he gives up drinking Dadi will come to see him herself, he need not call her at all...

Maan se baat nahi karthe toh kya hua? Dadi zaroopr Adi se baat karenge, aur Maan ke barein mein poochthe hi rahenge, haina?

Maan then tries to be nice with the hospital staff...seva Geet ke...

Everyone is surprised to see the change...

Geet ko bhi kabar milthi...toh inko ab sirf mujhse shikayat hai?

Koi baat nahi, kuch toh achcha hua haina?

Next week...

Maan is slowly getting better...

He can stand and walk with the help of his walker...

Doctors are also happy with his improvement...

Geet is also happy...

But she doesn't show that she is happy in front of Maan...

And Maan always keeps blaming her for everything...

If he is in pain he will start yelling at Geet...

Maan: tumne kya kiya? Tum toh mujhe chaltha phirtha dekh nahi sakthi, haina? Tumme toh bahut kush hogi ki mein aaisa hoon

Maan gets nervous without his daily dose, he feels the pain more...

It's very difficult for him to comtrol his temptations...

Geet tries to distract him and keeps fighting with him...

Geet: haan haan, mein bahut kush hoon, kam se kam ab sab chain se rasthe mein chal sakthe, warna kaun jaantha ki kab aapke haath mauth aayega?

Maan: pehle tujhe koi kyun nahi martha?

Geet: aap haina? Jaldhi teek ho jao aur phir dekhthe hai ki kaun kissko martha?

Maan: toh tum ab khoon bhi karthi ho? Ms.420 se Ms.khatil

Geet: aapko khoon katrthi toh mujhe paise kahan se millega?

Maan: tumne Dadi se kitna paisa liya mujhe tang karne ki?

Geet: Dadi aapke tarah kanjoos nahi hai

Maan: mujhe patha hai,tumne hi dadi ko kuch ulta seedha bathakke mujhse dhoor kardhi, haina?

Geet: haan, aapke saath rehkke beizzatti sehne se achcha Dadi ghar pe aaram karthe, aaise umar mein unko aapne chain se sone bhi nahi diya haina?

Maan: tum kehna kya chahthi ho? mein apne Dadi se pyaar nahi kartha?

Geet: pyaar karthe toh aaise kyun karthe?

Maan ke paas jawab nahi hai...
Maan: toh sirf tum pyaar karna jaanthi ho?
Geet is shocked...
Maan looks into her eyes for an answer...
Geet struggles to face his eyes...
Geet: chalo, mujhe jaana hai, aap bhi leitjao
she tries to escape...
Maan catches hold of her...
Maneet eyelock...
Maan is confused...
ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...
isske saath rehke mein bhi pagal hojaoonga...
Maan moves back suddenly...
He is angry with himself...
but he shows his anger on Geet...
Maan: tummm, mere samne mat aao, mujhse dhoor raho, samjhi?
Geet talks to herself..." babaji, mein toh jaa rahi thi, kissne mujhe rkha? aap hi bathao, meinne kya kiya? sare galthiyan ye karthe aur inzaam mujhpe dalthe..."
Maan: haan, jab bhi tum mere samne hothi ho mein bhi galthiyan karne laga hoon
Maan stares Geet and Geet leaves...

Geet ussko alkele sochne chodthi...

Maan ko dhere dhere apni galthiyon ka ehsaas hotha...

Maan changes without his knowledge...

But the others can see the difference...Geet too notices that...

Dadi also keeps askng about Maan everyday...

Dadi ko bhi patha chaltha...

Dadi Maan ko milna chahathe hai, usske pehle Dadi Geet ko thank karna chahathe hai...

She gets a beautiful ring(shagun?) for Geet...

She first goes to meet Geet...

Geet is happy to see dadi...

Geet: m'am aap?

Geet daudkke jaake dadi ko hug karthi...

Geet pareshaan ho jaathi...

Dadi Maan se mil ke aaye hai kya?

Toh Maan ab pehle jaise shuru ho jayega...

Abhi abhi toh sudarne ki umeed dikhthi hai?

Geet: m'am, aapko yahan kaise aana pada?

Dadi didn't expect such a welcome...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
Nice part...


Lage raho maan babu...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Kisi din ye maan totally pagal hojayega!
Geet k pyar me 😉😆
Waiting for the next!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
geet maan ki akal ko teek karne mein lagi hai😆😆aur asar bhi hona shuru huwa
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Awesome update
finally maan is changing...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
awww...loving this fight a lot

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