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Neeraj

@nature2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

happy new year ALL n u

N nYC chpter bAck to back

n thankz not acepting req. on fb😔

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

the chapter was wonderful... finish read all ur three chapter in a go...
finally swayan and sharon are leave behind the back and look to a new around...
do continue soon and pm me

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anandita

@blooming_angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

its not at all a trash marium di..!!
its was amazing for me beyond words of appreciation it was..it was beyond perfect..!!
it is the most beautiful new year present ever..!! happy new year di..😊
u know ur stories always make me wonder how can someone has such a beautiful neverending mind of thoughts..!! everytime ur stories touch my heart to the core and surprise me beyond anything,,!!

i really have words to describe ur stories..!! i don't have anything to post cause all i fell is i am SPEECHLESS..!! it was fantastic..!!

and even if i don't want to say this because m hell angry from u to ignore my comments my scraps my messages and my pms..!! thinking u don't consider me anything..!!

u were u are and U WILL ME MY FANFICTION QuEen!!

my personal ideal ..!!

thats all i wanna say..!!😊

Edited by Princess_anny - 12 years ago

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#44

Marium 😛 . Such an amazing writer you are. Its the first story i am reading from you and it was just amazing, mind blowing, fantastic, awesome, outstanding and what not. Loved Swayam in it. I was excited from day one when you posted the concept and frankly, i did read the three chapters when u updated but i am a little lazy in commenting 🤢. Thanks for giving three chapters back to back . Keep writing more. happy new year!!!

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#45

MARIUM 🤗

Meri jaan.. 3 chapters in 1 go.. 😳

LOVE YOU FOR THAT ❤️

Now coming to the updates..

you killed it

as always writing section main toh tu EXCEL kar chuki hain

it was damn amazing. main jitna bhi kahu kam hain

swayam was simply amazing in these few parts

his character is wow 😳

i am now so excited to read this FF now.

thanks for the PM and update soon

DON'T FORGET TO PM ME.. 😛

PS. sorry for the late comment

have been busy

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Don't even know anymore

@Death_Memories

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Marium tere hatke concept kill me every time
first of all to happy new year babe
coming to the story I couldn't help but feel how it is inspired
I was thinking about Ram Leela.The characters of sharon and swayam are like complete opposite of the Show but still i could picture them clearly in the update thank to you brilliant writing.The way you penned down these chapters I wished they never end.I wanted to keep on reading.I loved the authentic setting and description of the story.Swayam is entertaining and sharon is a firebrand here too.I loved how confident swayam was when he said he will get her out of that place soon.The escape was a surprise because I thought it would be a lot later but i didn't feel like the story was rushed another plus point of how you have written the story.The kiss total surprise.I can see that swayam is bold and confident in this story but that kiss surely was unpredictable yet it seemed to fit nicely in the sorry.I liked how sharon was all brave and fiery but the moment she uttered "mujhe darr lag rha hai" It showed how vulnerable and innocent she really is.Swayam's way of comforting was totally heroic in a poetic sense if you know what i mean.I absolutely loved the concept.

I loved the new shade of swaron that i got to see here.They were poles apart from their characters on show but still swaron.I loved the intensity of the setup.I am in absolute awe of how you came up with this concept and how you carried it out so far.

SHEER BRILLIANCE!!!!!!!!!!!

I cant wait to read further.Update soon and count me in for detailed analysis like this as a huge comment.Cheers for the talent you possess truly one phenomenal writer girl.You rock...

Love
Harshita

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#47

what a troublesome life did you plan for Sharon..

but the way you got all of it depicted and that too not losing the essence of the originality.. their regional backgrounds... the language and all..

I liked all of the emotional content being laced so beautifully...