Well I regurarly visit these site for stories I had never thought that i will write my own stories i am a new writer so help me Chapter1 (Mohan comes to indore with megha and jaan) Mohan and Megha at vyas house Nanhi:Spiderman Tum aa Gaye (she runs and hugs Mohan) Nanhi:maine to umeed ho chod di thi ki tum. Aagoe kitna miss kiya tume (she cries 😠). Mohan: (He hugs Nanhi) aee roti hai kya tu inti badi hokar dek mai ab gaya na band kar rona chal (The entire vyas family sorrounds Mohan and Megha) and. Starts asking questions to Mohan about what happend in two years and all the family
Members bombard him with his previous memories mohan tries to remember it but he faints Megha: (scared) Mohan Ake kholo mohan mohan tum sun rahe ho na she cries a hell doctor bulao koi The doctor comes He checks mohan. Megha; doctor kya hua mohan ko (she Weeps ) yeh behosh kyu ho haya. Doctor:shayad jyada stress lene ke waje se MrBhatnagar behosh ho gaye hoge dekiye age se dhayan rakyege ki yeh koi stress nahi le megha:she looks at fainted mohan. Tumene to jan hi le li meri tume kuch. Ho jata to Comments and criticisim welcome
Edited by rishabh22 - 12 years ago