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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

part 30
awesome...
poor Aamna...
Veena stil wants Aamna to be her bahu...
but Raj doesnt deserve her...
how could he...
and now hes demanding money too...
let him repent so much...
cont soon dear...

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Imane

@The_Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: spvd
part 30
awesome...
thanks
poor Aamna...
Veena stil wants Aamna to be her bahu...
yes she dont like archie
but Raj doesnt deserve her...
how could he...
he just make mistakes...he is human after all
and now hes demanding money too...
let him repent so much...
it will be difficult i cant make suffer Rajeeev😉
but i'll try to
cont soon dear...
ok sis

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#113

Recap: Rajeev aur Archie ki engagement ho gaye...he become to being rude with Aamna wich make her angry so she also decide to be rude to him

Kissmat part 31:

Aamna was wondering from where she can have money to give to Rajeev
when suddenly she has an idea she decide to sale her wedding jora
which give her money to give to Rajeev
Jab hi Akshat aya she stand up and give the money to him
Akshat: yeh kya...
Aamna doeasnt let him finish
Aamna: come with me
She dragg him by his arm
Akshat: batao to sahi where we are going aur paise kyun diye
Aamna: mujhe office jana hai
All the way he kept on asking her but she doeasnt reply and kept on driving
Then she dragg him inside Rajeev's cabin without saying hi to anyone jaise ke uska raste Rajeev ki cabin me khatam hota tha and she just have to go straight on her way
She come in without knocking
Rajeev: tum?
Aamna: I have a name You are not alowed to call me TUM
Rajeev: why are you angry main to sirf baat kar raha tha waisse ab tum mujse kiya kehne aye ho...You'll do your drama crying and all ke mere paas paisse nahi hai blablabla
Aamna: that's what you wanted...likin aksaar jaisse hum chahte hai waissa nahi hota Mr garewal
Rajeev(lost somewhere at her sentence): it's true...(he take a long breath) to phir...tum hi batao kaissa hona chaiye
Aamna: baat chahat ki naye...kissmat ki hai...hum jitna bhi cha lein...jo hona hai woh ho jata hai
Rajeev: nahi Aamna(he take her name with affection) aksaar jo hota hai woh kisi insaan ki wajah se...for exemple agar kisi ka accident ho jaye to woh us aadmi ki wajah se hoga jisne gari ghalat chalaye...usne dhyan se chalayie hoti to accident na hota
Aamna: zindaghi ghari nahi hoti Rajeev...zindaghi to ek kitab hai jo pehle hi likhi hui hai...agar koi jitni bhi koshish krale usko badal nahi sakta chahe woh achi khatam hoti ho yaa phir buri tarah khatam hoti ho...
Rajeev: yeh soch woh logon ke liye hoti hai jo ke sirf gum phir kar zindaghi guzarte hai...chabi ki tarah chakar kaat te rehte hai...zindaghi to age bharne ke liye bani hai
Between them there were Akshat who didnt understand what is just happening but he wa listening carefully to them
theycome out of their world when they hear Rajeev's mobile ringing
He pick up
Rajeev: haan...I know...meeting kal rakh do dammit..
he cut the phone
Rajeev: haan to tum kis kaam se aye thi
Aamna: tumhare paisse dene
Rajeev: oh...itni jaldi paison ka intezam kar liya tumne
Aaman: maine nahi...tumhari hi baat maani Akshat se help mangi...Aki money(she call him Aki to make Rajeev jealous)
Akshat: huh?...What... what money?
Aamna whispers to him: Akshaat paisse!!!
Akshat: oh...haan haan...paisse
he take out the money Aamna gives him of his pocket
Akshat: yeh lo
Aamna gives it to Rajeev
Rajeev was shocked and burning with anger
Aamna: itne sahi hai ke aur bhi chaiye
Rajeev: its inuf You can leave
Aamna: haan haan waisse bhi who would like to be here with you...(she look at Akshat and smile to him) chalein Akshat...waisse bhi ghar ja kar bohot important kaam hain naa
Akshat: haan...haan chalo
They goes out and Rajeev hit the sofa with his leg in anger
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The night he goes home in anger
All were sitting in the lounge
Veena: Rajeev a gaye betta
Rajeev:haan aur kahan jaougha...ana to hai hi mujhe
Archie comes to him
Archie: why are you so angry honey
Rajeev: oh you please...
Chetan: Rajeev!!!! tameez se baat karo...woh sahi hi keh rahi hai kyun itne ghusse me ho?
Rajeev: you dont care If I know you aur angry main us Amana ki wajah se houn pata nahi kya samajti hai apne aap ko dammit kind of *****

Veena: Rajeev!!!!! I have enought of yours syupid behaviour kabhi anger me ghar wapas ana kabhi drunk ho kar...aur kya kya galiyan marte ho
Vassu: Veena...kyun fusul me hi mere bette ko daant rahi ho...relax Rajeev dekh leinghe hum usse...come with me
Rajeev gives a look to Veena and goes
A tear drop from her eye
Sanjana come seeing that
Sanjana: Don't worry mumma
Veena: aissa kya keh diya Aamna ne ke woh is had tak usse hate karta hai
Sanjana: mumma choriye naa mens are like that
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Hospital:
Aamna: Charu kya hua You look tense saab kuch thik hai naa
Charu(angry): what do you wnat I tell you...aap kuch samajti hi nahi hai...aapko kahein care kariye to aap ulta karti hai...kehti houn khanna thik se khayie aap normal insaan ka bhi khanna chor deti hai
Aamna: what means babies to thik hain naa
Charu: haan jab tak aap khud hi unka murder nahi kar deti tab tak to bilkul thik hai...but you are going the way to looses them...then goes
Aamna: Charu enuff tum doctor ho yaa nahi jab bhi aati houn You are weak you dont take care...do you behave like that with others patients?
Charu: nahi dii...first its the truth that you are weak...2th no I dont behave like that with others...because you are my dii...I know what is the meaning of these babies to you...I know you'll be shattered if you loose them...the others patients ko main keh deti houn you are too weak...take care that's it age woh jane aur unke hubby janne...if they loose a child they'll try again...the more worse a doctor can do to a patient is that leave his patient on his own...which I'm not going to do with you dii
Aamna: to what should I do
Charu smile and rlax a bit
Charu: khanna thik se khaiye
Aamna: dil nahi karta charu...har cheez mujhe karvi lagti hai...and if I eat a bit then I'll feels strange
Charu: Dii aapke pehle problem ke liye to I dont know You should like to eat spicy things...aur dusra it's normal...abhi bohot se changements ho ghein I know it's you'r first time and you are not used
Aamna: hhmm
Charu: aur take care karna its not only sit on sofa and dont move its also dont be tense and be happy dont be frustrated and angry or other hhmm
Aamna: okay
Charu:I guess you'll listen to me
Aamna: I'll try
Charu: good
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Rajeev was tence because of her he was angry ke she is in love perfectly with Akshat and he dont loves Archie at all...pehle to he maked his friends jealous ke my wife this..my wife that and now...
Aman: big b aap kya soch rahe hain
Rajeev: tum to har waqt apni us bhabhi ka hi saat dete ho naa...main to tumhara kuch lagta hi nahi houn I'm a stranger
Aman: nahi big b aap bataye to
Rajeev: Aamna aye thi apna rent dene
Aman: likin woh to ab yahain nahi rehtin
Rajeev:pichle month ka
Aman:likin aap bhi naa unse rent kyun manga
Rajeev: huh aye to us Akshat ke saat usse paise liye mere moun par mare aur gaye!!!
Aman: apne hi shuru kiya naa...aur aab wo unjke husban jaissa hai to unse paisse nahi leinghi to aur kisse leinghi
Rajeev: tum bhi karne lag gaye uski sifarish!!!
He gets up in anger
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Sinnah house Aamna were sleeping on sofa when Akshat and Charu come back home

Charu: chor maat karo dii so rahi hai
Akshat: she has strange behaviour these days
Charu: hhmm she is too weak Akshat mujhe dar lagta hai
Akshat: we'll take care of her...you know aaj bohot se paisse Rajeev ko dene gaye thi poocha to kehti hai Its not your problem
Charu: what?...bohot hi ajeeb hain...iss tarah andar hi andar cheezein chupana aur andar hi andar rona pareshan hona its not good
Akshat: hhmm
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The next day:

Aamna ko Rajeev ki bohot yaad a rahi thi she was not feeling well...pajta rahi for having sale her wedding clothes as it was one of the most precious thing wich she still has

Later in afternoon Kanan comes back home and find her lying on her bed

It was seeing she is not sleeping but in uncoucious
Kanan usse hospital le jati hai

after charu check she comes out of her cabin with tears in her eyes
Kanan: kya hua she is ok?
Charu: nods in yes
Kanan breath and then she ask
Kanan: and babies???
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Dear readers I'm really sorry for the late posting as the latest part i wrote was short and I dont liked the way I wrote in hurry...actually 2th trimestre is the longest and the hardest...I'm everyday doing DM till dinner time...but for now I'm in swuisse it's beatifull we come for one week wth college friends...so I'm posting a part from here 1,2 ghante nikal ke...hope u liked and I promise to post a part soon as I'm back in Paris....

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#114

part 31
nice...
poor Aamna...
and Raj he will regret so much...
so suddenly is showering her love on him...
cont soon...

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#115

Hey Imane..

Thank you so much for the pm..and so sorry for replying late as I have so much pm and updates to read..and busy with works..anyways..let's go for the analysis..as always..I really loved the update dear..it is really well written..and each picture really matched with the scenes perfectly..so Charu is really concerned about her sister Aamna..and it is very natural for any sister to be concerned..and I also believe that at this pregnancy stage..she shouldn't be stressed which will affect her health..so be careful dear..and please take care of yourself Aamna..as far as Veena ji is concerned ..I really applause her for give a tight reply to Rajeev..really..even I'm really fed up of his so called tantrums..I'm sure he will regret sooner or later..please Mr. Raj..sudhar Jao..you really need some counseling 😡..and Veena ji will be the perfect person..I really hope that this Archie ditches him...I'm really curious to read what happen next as Aamna fell unconscious ..Kanan asked Charu if Aamna is ok..she replied yes in sadness..Oh god..please ..I hope she doesn't suffer from miscarriage..😭..please continue soon dear..I really looking forward to read the next update..please continue and private me😃

Edited by VishakaGal12 - 11 years ago

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: VishakaGal12
Hey Imane..
Thank you so much for the pm.your welcome dear.and so sorry for replying late as I have so much pm and updates to read..and busy with works.It's ok.anyways..let's go for the analysis..as always..I really loved the update dear..it is really well written..and each picture really matched with the scenes perfectly.thank u .so Charu is really concerned about her sister Aamna..and it is very natural for any sister to be concerned..and I also believe that at this pregnancy stage..she shouldn't be stressed which will affect her health..so be careful dear..and please take care of yourself Aamna..as far as Veena ji is concerned ..I really applause her for give a tight reply to Rajeev..really..even I'm really fed up of his so called tantrums..I'm sure he will regret sooner or later..please Mr. Raj..sudhar Jao..you really need some counseling 😡..and Veena ji will be the perfect person..I really hope that this Archie ditches him...I'm really curious to read what happen next as Aamna fell unconscious ..Kanan asked Charu if Aamna is ok..she replied yes in sadness..Oh god..please ..I hope she doesn't suffer from miscarriage..😭..please continue soon dear..I really looking forward to read the next update..please continue and private me😃off course I'll cont soon than I can dear...and I didnt comment the rest of ur comment because u just express ur wiews perfectly...ok bye dear

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Imane

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Posted: 11 years ago

#117

Recap: Rishi give Aamna a letter wrote by Swayam without reading it, Aamna start to being rude with Rajeev like he does, and later Kanan found her home in uncouncious

Kissmat Last Part:

after charu check she comes out of her cabin with tears in her eyes
Kanan: kya hua she is ok?
Charu: nods in yes
Kanan breath and then she ask
Kanan: and babies???
Charu: they are fine
Kanan: then why are you worried??
Charu: It's my fault I didnt take care of her...I just...I couldnt fullfil my responsabilities
Kanan: its ok all will be fine
Charu: hhmm
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Garewal house:
Rishi were shearching for something in his drawer when he see a paper...he remember the time he give it to Aamna
Rishi read it by curiousitly and were shocked
He calls Aman and Sanjana and shows them
they rush Sinah house where Akshat and Kanan were sitting worried about Aamna
Ding dong (door bell ring)
Kanan open the door
Rishi: Kanan where is Aamna BHABHI??
Kanan: bhabhi?
Sanjana: yaa please tell Kanan
Kanan: Sanju she is at hospital
Aman: oh...for check up??
Kanan: no actually she fails into uncoucious due to she was weak and dont eating properly
Sanjana: what???
Rishi: oh no...is she okay?
Kanan and Akshat were suprised by his behaviour
Akshat: haan dont need to worry
Rishi: Akshat
Akshat: haan
Rishi: say the truth...you never sleept with bhabhi?
Akshat look at him
Akshat: haan I mean...eemm...No i never do that
Aman: what? But she is pregnant...how can be...
Rishi (feeling guilty): It's big b's babes
Sanjana: what?
Kanan: Rishi how do you knowed that
Rishi: I already heard Swayam saying it and this letter...but you...you knowed also...tell why the hell bhabhi left big b
Kanan says them the truth after what hearing they were crying
Rishi: and all that time I doubted on bhabhi aur itni sab takleef ponchaye maine unhe...woh to...mere hi big b ke liye
Sanjana: oh my god...
Rishi(angrily): uss Swayam ko to main nahi choroun gha
Aman: relax bro...sab se pehlr we have to told the truth to big b
Sanjana: haan chalo
Akshat: no wait...
but they have left
Kanan: damn dii will be angry on me
Akshat: come let's go hospital before something bad happen
Kanan: I dont think so
Akshat: to kya haath pe haath rakh kar bhethe rahe hum
Kanan: we dont have any other option
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Garewal house:
Rishi: big b
Rajeev(while working on a file): haan
Rishi: I want to talk to you in private
Rajeev: uff tum bhi naa bolo
RIshi: its serious big b...its about Aamna bhabhi
Rajeev look at him hearing this
Rishi: big b she loves you alot...in fact she never ever ahve any physical relation with Akshat...the childs she is caring...is your's...big b that night Swayam kiddnaped her...(he tells Rajeev the whole story)
Rajeev(tears in his eyes): what?...And just for me she...and I what I just do...how I behaved with her I'm sorry so sorry...
Rishi: sorry aap ko bhabhi se maang ni hogi...she is in hospital
Rajeev: I'll goes but for now leave me alone please Rishi I need some time...
Rishi get out from there and Swayam who was listenning everything burns with anger
Inside Rajeev break into tears...he was feeling extremily guilty...he dont knowed how Aamna will react...If she ever wan forgive him
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Hospital
Aamna was lying on bed looking blankly...without any emotions
Someone come in anger in the room opening the door while making a damn loud sound
Aamna darr ke look at the door and be shocked to see...Swayam there
Aamna: tum?...
Swayam come towards her and holds her collar
Swayam: you how dare you...it's finisht you are finisht...
Aamna(weakly): leave me...leave me Swayam...maine kuch nahi kiya sab tumhara kaha mana...meri zindaghi barbat kar li tumne
Swayam: shut up...You sayed the truth to Rishi I wont leave you
Before Aamna says or understand a thing
Swayam take out a knife
Aamna(scared like hell almost crying): dont...please dont do anything please...
Swayam: shut up I'll kills you...you and youre babies!!!!
Aamna: nnnoo not babies please
Swayam was about to plant the knife in her stomach but she kickly remove the perfusions out of her hand and get up of bed running towards the red button
But Swayam catch her before she could press it
Aamna: Swayaam pleeeaaassee...aahh(she scream as he holds her hand tight to much tight) leeaave mee hheeelllppp
Swayam cover her mouth with his hand
Swayam: shut up!!! stop screaaming damn you tumse to chutkara paana hi bohot mushkil hai
Aamna: uummm..(she moans as she couldnt talk)
He holds her by her hair and throw her on ground
Aamna screamed she know inside her that its was the end
He bends and again were about to plant the knife but Aamna rolled on side holding her tummy with both her arms not letting hurt it
Swayam: you think you are too much smart huh? he holds her by her hands and again try a time
Aamna screamed: Raaajjeeevvv!!!!!!!!!!
and before he could do something someone screamed from behind: leeaaave her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Swayam look at the door and be shocked to find Rajeev there
Aamna too looked and she moans in fear: uumm...Rajjj
Rajeev come towards them: Aamu dont worry kuch nahi hoga...
Swayam make Aamna stands up rudely and put the knife in front of her tummy holding her tight
Swayam: dont approaches or I kill her
Aamna: Rajeeevvv...before I die I want to say that...that I...I love you
Rajeev: I know me too...Aamna You wont die
Rajeev come nears them Swayam put the knife and Rajeev come in front that its hurt his arms
He screamed out in pain
Rajeev: aaahhh!!!
Aamna: Rajeeevvv!!!
Rajeev: Dont worry I'm fine but I wont leave this Swayam...meri Aamna saath...
Swayam runs from there
Rajeev rush behind him but Aamna doesnt let him
Aamna: leave him you are injured...damn it's bleeding so much...(looking at his wound)
Rajeev: Aamna its okay sirf ek karoch hai let me go
Aamna: noo ways...
Rajeev: please he is escaping Aamna
Aamna: let me come with you
Rajeev: noo you are weak...bimaar ho tum stay here
Aamna: okay then i wont let you goes
Rajeev: uuff okay come
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Archie(waiting for Swayam in hall of hospital): ho gaya kaam
Swayam: no fast come runs from there
Archie and Swayam escape in their car followed by Rajeev and Aamna
In RA car
Rajeev: damn why the hell I bring you with me...its too dangerous
Aamna: shut up drive fast
They followed SA car when Swayam turn to escape from a track but he were driving too much fast his car fall into a khai and exploded with fire every where
RA reach there and seeing that they were relived
Rajeev hugs Aamna
Rajeev: its okay its finisht...alll will be fine...Aamna I'm sorry...I'm so sorry(crying) forgive me please...I know main maafi ke layak nahi houn but please
Aamna(crying thought relived): sshhh it's ok...I love you
it's start to rain
Rajeev: ouch..(he screamed as rain drop fallen on his wound)
Aamna: oh I forgot you are injured come let's go back hospital
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Back home sab ko sachaye pata chal gaye
Rajeev decided that Lallit...Vassu and Chetan leave the house
As Veena hearing this divorced Chetan
2,3 monts later
Akshat-Charu
Aman-Kanan
ki shaadi ho gaye
some time later Aamna give two beatifull kids to Rajeev...which make him so happy
He has changed he take so muh care of Aamna he loves her alot he does everything he can do for her
Aamna were like living in a beatifull dream a caring husband...two beatifull kids what she needed more

This was the story of Rajeev and Aamna
Koi kitni bhi koshish kar le unko judaa naa kar paya kyunke unka milne KISSMAT me likha tha
Main yeh nahi kehti ke unki zindaghi me aur mushkilein nahi ayie likin unhone unka milke samna kiya kabhi ek doosre par shak nahi kiya and they lived happily forever
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Okay guys I could make the story more long but I decided to finish it here
Hope u all enjoyed my fic live your comments
I maybe start a new one but this will depend on 2th trimestre's bulletin...if it's good then I'll start soon as it's holidays and If it's bad then I only start in summer holidays mean in July
Bye take care and thanks for reading and commenting
especially to
-Deepa
-Vishaka
-Mehek
-Surya
-Manju

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Vishaka Sanjana

@Sanjana4Rajeev

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Posted: 11 years ago

#118

Hey Imane!

Thank you so much for pm me..I really loved the last part of this FF..and can't believe that it ended so soon..but all ends well..So let's start with the analysis..as always..I really loved the way you have written this last updates..and all of the emotions of the characters were absolutely brilliant..so hats off to you!..Awwee..I'm glad that Aamna did not have miscarriage,she was ill due to the constant weaknesses..and finally the truth is out..😃😃..Akshat told the truth to Sanjana and Rishi..and it was very natural for them to get angry as it ruined many people's life..specially our dear couple Raj and Aamna..and while at garewal's place..he was working on his file..finally Rishi told Rajeev that Aamna did not cheat on him..and the entire truth..and he was really regretting his mistake..but swayam😡😡😡..how dare he attacks Aamna..good thing that Rajeev has saved her from this devil!!..I have just no words to say ..but good thing that Aarchie and Swayam is out of their life..so aanth bhala..to saab bhala!!😃😃..Awwee..I'm just happy that Rajeev and Aamna reunited once again..😳😳,..wishing the couple all the very best..and hope they have a wonderful life with their two beautiful children!!..God bless them!..Imane..please come up with new FF..and really going to miss this FF a lot!..So pm me..when you come up with new FF..take care!!