SwaRon TS - on Precap of yesterday

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SwaRon TS: I will always love you and Protect You

Hi Everyone on the D3 forum I have been here since the time this show started but I really don't know many here because there is huge following to the show. I have not really been an active follower of the show for past 8 months now, but I have seen videos occasionally on internet and yes I have followed SwaRon actively throughout this time also and I am very well aware of SwaRon track, but what tempted me to write on Current Track today is the Per-Episode teaser they showed today in which Alok closes the door and Sharon is alone inside. Look in last 8 months this is first time I am excited about something and which makes me write this. So yes this is a two shot for current track. But I have my own ways of writing and posting so here goes the deal there will be no PMs for first part, You have to read it from forum and spread it If you like. And I will post second part and send PMs if I get minimum 50 likes and desire to read second otherwise forget about second part because I am already satisfied with readers I have on my others works and I will focus on providing updates to them on what they usually read from me. So if this deal is acceptable then read ahead otherwise thank you for investing time to read this one, Look I may sound rude or proud at this moment but trust me I send something like 221 PMs and I have some loyal readers who only read my works even if I don't send any PMs so I am doing this thing that read first part if you like to read second then tell me I will post it and PM you because you wish to read further, I don't want to force anybody to read it by sending unnecessary pms so don't get me wrong people who know me also know that I am not at rude or proud about anything. Enjoy the update...

Part 1 I am the Protector

It was a start of fresh day as everybody was feeling their head strong because of the effect of Alcoholic mouth freshener Alok gave them. Everybody was feeling strange because the effect of Bhang was clearly getting off from them, only Swayam was normal as he had gone to talk with his dad on phone call and on returning he found there was something wrong and finally he came to conclusion that mouth fresheners were mixed. Swayam saw everybody there behaving strangely except for Sharon so he ran to find Sharon. He eventually found Sharon with Alok and saw Alok trying to force himself on Sharon and Swayam just reached there on time and hit Alok a strong right hand on face to scroll him off from Sharon. But the thing Swayam did surely saved Sharon otherwise she would have no idea what could have happen to her in that drunken state.

Swayam brought Sharon to cottage back in his arms as Sharon was barely able to stand. On request on Sharon Swayam sat right there beside her whole night and took care for her. During whole night Swayam just starred at Sharon's face, he was always amazed to see that innocence on Sharon's face when she is asleep because that's the only time she doesn't pretend anything. His heart raced for her, he was deeply in love with her and there is absolutely no one denying that but he had made his mind up to let her free so that she can search someone whom she can love back the same way he would love her.

Sharon finally woke up and first vision came in front of her eye was Swayam sleeping on the chair right beside her, she just starred at his face for sometime there was some sort of pleasantness spread all over his face, it looked like something came to him which just gave him comfort and calm he needed because all this while Swayam may be ignoring her but looked a bit distracted that trademark content with anything Swayam was missing but she found it today and she hardly knows the reason why he looks so pleased. But she didn't have any idea that she was the only sole reason that could give him smile because still his life is revolving around her and for her.

Everybody went to get fresh and get ready for leaving. But little did they know that something had happened last night which will change their lives and that's what really happened because last night in drunken state Rey and Kriya lost control on their emotions and something really happened which was purely natural because they both were deeply attracted to each other. But somebody was there to present the whole thing in such a way that can benefit him and cause harm to the team because somebody from team did not allow him to grab chance and fulfill his dirty desire.

Alok was the guy who saw Rey and Kriya and shoots a picture of them so that he can use it to wash the brains of other villagers. He smartly did that and convinced villagers that Rey and Kriya and others have fooled them and this will spoil little children of village also. So they basically forced Rey and Kriya to get married and leave then. They needed time to think of something and that's why Rey agreed to the suggestion and said yes to marriage. He agreed so that they could by some time out of it, and then team met and Rey explained to them that they need to get their camera in which they shot the video and run away from village and team will have to do it and meanwhile Rey and Kriya will take part in the rituals which villagers say to distract them and give team chance to inspect all parts and get the camera.

Everybody worked out places to search and divided themselves in teams of two... Swayam and Sharon were given the part around the area where sarpanch lived... Sharon went inside sarpanch's house and Swayam was searching outside areas there.

Sharon did reach in there and searched the whole place. Finally she found the camera and turned down to take it and was about to turn back and leave and there suddenly out of nowhere Alok appeared and closed the door from inside. Alok was nearing Sharon and Sharon on the other side was getting worried because Swayam just had rescued her from Alok a day before. Intentions of Alok did not seem to comfort Sharon but he looked like he wanted to harm Sharon and use her for his pleasure.

"Alok why did you close the Door just stay away from me?" Sharon said

"You are not really a kid not to know why I closed the door and once I closed the door how can I stay away from you Sharon ji" Alok said

Sharon gulped in fear and she knew there no way she could run from there. She didn't had any idea where Swayam would be. So it was of no use of shouting for help because nobody would be around and he would have made sure that nobody is around when he gets his dirty desires on her.

Sharon got in fear for sometime but she realized that fearing and shouting isn't going to help her. She will have to stand up for herself and fight to save herself. She just got ready to fight him and hit him with full of her force so that she can run. As she made up her mind she just got forward and tried to hit him. Alok held her hand clutched her in his arms...

"Sharon ji don't even try that because I am way too strong than you and you cannot fight me" Alok said

"Hell what, even I am sure and nobody messes up with me do you understand you see what I do to you now" Sharon blurted in anger

"Oh ya really, I guess you will not be able to see anybody after I finish what I am about to do to you now" Alok said and smirked

Sharon understood that she has no way left and but to shout and just pray that somebody hears her.

On the other hand Swayam who was searching outside found nothing and was waiting for Sharon and come out so that they can go to other places to search. But to his surprise Sharon took very long and still she didn't come out. Swayam was starting to get worried now and he was starting to move towards Sarpanch's house. And suddenly Sarpanch ji appeared there and caught him near his house.

"What are you doing near my house?" Sarpanch asked

"Well my friend has went in there to change but she hasn't come out yet so I am getting worried if she is tucked up in something or what because she isn't even replying phone calls" Swayam replied. He knew he lied but there was no option other than to lie because otherwise Sarpanch would create one more scene out of this.

"Ok I have other key of house so if she has locked from inside then we can open house and see if she is fine or not" Sarpanch said

"Ya that's fine we should just hurry up because it's been long since she is inside" Swayam said

Sarpanch agreed and they went to open the house. Inside the house Sharon was still trying hard free herself from Alok but Alok had managed to ground her and was trying to rip her shirt and she was there shouting and hitting Alok in anticipation that either somebody comes or Alok gets hurt so she can run away.

Suddenly the door opened and Sharon saw Swayam appearing with somebody there. Swayam and Sarpanch saw what Alok was up to but Alok didn't realize that somebody found him. Anger was blazing in Swayam's eyes and Sharon also felt that its now impossible to stop Swayam today.

"Alok you son of a Bi***, leave her otherwise your mother will regret that you are her son. I will beat the hell out of you" Swayam screamed

"Alok what are you up to?" Sarpanch asked in anger

"Please save me he is forcing himself up on me" Sharon said looking towards them.

Swayam rushed there and Alok got up because he saw Sarpanch there and Swayam just wiped of Sharon's tears and helped her get up and tied a blanket around her and turned back to Alok again.

"You, how dare you touch her? Do you even know who is she? Today there is absolutely nobody saving you from me" Swayam said and started hitting him.

Swayam was beating the hell out him and dragging him to the centre of the village and Sarpanch and Sharon were following him. Everybody saw Swayam beating Alok in the centre of village in presence of his father who is Sarpanch also. And they saw Sharon there wiped in blanket crying so girls ran up to her to ask what happened to her and Sharon explained them what actually happened.

Swayam was furiously beating Alok and then boys realized that if they didn't stop him now then he will beat him to death. So Rey and others boys got involved and took Swayam away from Alok. But while they were dragging Swayam away he was srcreamig...

"This cheep guy was saying that what will young children think of us and bla-bla-bla but what does he think what did he do now inspired the younger children to just cheep job" Swayam said

"Cool down Swayam" Rey said who himself was angry but wanted to control swayam who was going out of control

"No Rey, how can I cool down, they are forcing you to marry Kriya because they think what you did was wrong... but they don't know that this cheep guy actually mixed Bhang in your mouth-fresheners that he gave you and that's why you all lost your senses and did something you even don't know about, and that this smarty pants took Sharon too some distant place and tried to force himself upon her but I reached there and hit him so to get back on me this guy mixed up the picture of yours and Kriya" Swayam spoke everything clearly and was still screaming

"Speak up you moron otherwise I will beat you to death no matter what happens to me after that" Swayam screamed

Alok who manipulated up to that time got scared of Swayam and his anger because he looked like he would kill anybody to protect Sharon.

"You know you moron I loved her to the core but still I never tried to get close to her and you thought you can force yourself on her" Swayam screamed

Everybody looked at Swayam in utter shock...

Well that's it for this part. I know it's on cliff-hanger but what can I do even I want to attract readers... go hit like and comment and you know the deal second update and PMs only if I get 50 likes...


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rosyrkohli thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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i know tat the current track is kinda crap but wat to do
it was a nice start
it was emotional no doubt about it
sharon's fear n swayam's anger
was beautifully penned
i m expecting a very emotional n
heart-touching outburst b/w
swaron in the next update
looking forward to ur update
do update soon 😛


Edited by rosyrkohli - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I too wish swayam to beat dt moron alok..
I hope same happens in d show..
it will be great to watch swayam fighting for sharon..
ds is great piece of writing yaar..
do update soon.
unable to like, actually like button is not working..
so count ds as a LIKE..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazinggg start👏
lovedd itt very much❤️
Swayam accepted that he loves sharon in front of everybody😳
beautifully written👍🏼
Edited by aishu3003 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing Start!
And something to look forward on
Pls Update soon
And do PM me 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome please don't leave us hanging , do continue dear TM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing beginning pratzyy i have told you before that you write pretty amazing and you gave proof of it.. This part was just too good..
I specially liked one line in the end "I loved her but never tried to go close to her and you tried to force yourself on her" these were beautiful I loved these lines..😊.
Also how Swayam protected Sharon his anger and rage was a treat to read so all in all this update was bloody awesome and please continue soon..😊.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing bhai...

iwant dis 2 happen in show...

plzz update soon nd do pm me...
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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

I too wish swayam to beat dt moron alok..
I hope same happens in d show..
it will be great to watch swayam fighting for sharon..
ds is great piece of writing yaar..
do update soon.
unable to like, actually like button is not working..
so count ds as a LIKE..



Are thank you so much dear for such nice words...it means a lot to me...if like column goes up to 50 i will surely update...
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Thanks i am glad to know you want to read furthur...

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