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tharu01

@tharu01

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

omg omg i loved it loved it aloottt..!! omg soo emotional u made me cry...😭 😭 it was super duper...its wooowww ..thnk u... keep writing more like dis😉

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

that was superb and perfect fantastic ending... loved it

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

b4 commenting for this part i edited my prev comment on p-1

woww woowww Swaron patch-up was shown beautifully⭐️

i totally lovedd Swaron convo😊

amazingly written⭐️

and yuss swayam beat alok🥳

and d sharon-girl part was cutee😆

lovedd this TS😊

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Trisha paul

@trisha19

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Super Awesome TS..👏

I just loved the swaron convo..

Great work...👏👏👏

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try2149

@try2149

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

hey pratik,i am just speechless after reading ur this work.

you have done a tremendous job.👏

i loved each n every word of this ts specially swayam's pain,his state of mind,their confession,everything.

actually the truth is that, firstly i liked ur update n then i read that bcoz i know ur works are always a masterpiece.

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

well i know i am extremely late

sorry

you have always been a tremendous writer

and one of my favorites

i am always left spell bound after reading your updates

this TS as always was amazing

i was shocked seeing so many emotions, and he way they were described 👍🏼

would love to learn to write like you

please do give tips 😛 (might use them for my FF)

thanks for the PM

keep writing

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Dude Awesome n such a emotional update here,what a beautifully played with the skills of writing..It was well explained,described and beautifully penned..I could easliy understand swayam's character..How beautifully u described his pain,anger,and his mind state.I always like ur narration whether it is love struck or disco dancers.It was interesting scene to saw various events in a one go..Swaron convo was amazingly written..Dialouge delivery was OOsum and such a master piece..I like swayam's dialouges during showdown..Bro i must say u did a great job to penned swayam's part..Loved the ending part..In short,Beautifull work..Keep writing..

Thanx for PM and unreserved my previous comment on page no 4

Prateek

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Rishabh Narula

@swaron1107

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Really nice bro. Loved your thought on the current track. Feelings of Swayam and Sharon were nicely described. Thanks for writing this.

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nancynnv

@nancynnv

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Hey Pratik bhai
I m extremely sorry for commenting so so so late...
Actually my boards r starting really soon
So was busy in my studies
Btw the update was as expected too awesome
Loved the intensity
N thank u very much for writing alok's dialogue in Hindi
It was really sweet of u to consider the comment
Par it was not a complain
I was just joking ...
I so wish something like this would have happened :(
This is truly swaron
It was a treat reading it n imagining the same

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

It's really awesome I loved it literally.

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