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Posted: 12 years ago
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Pratik Dude,

Dude,i always love and adore ur writing whatever u write becoz as a reader i always found all those important substantials which are required for a perfect write up..I know u never agree ki ur a good writer but i dont care becoz i know u are great writer..I know u since u were writing ur Disco Dancer and Love Struck is such an epic which is still going on though marvellous mode..And i am happy to seeing such an amazing response on ur work.U always come with some new ideas and such a unique style of writing and as a reader i always enjoyed that n still i am enjoying..

Now Dude,i must say the plot u have potrayed is just amazing..Though I am not following D3 since past one year due to busy life but i could easily imagined the plot where u showed current track and mixed up with ur writing..Honestly it was beautifull start to showing such scene with too emotional mixture..I really think ki Alok is very bad character..Just loved the way u penned all those of emotions of swayam and sharon..Loved the Dialouge delivery of swayam (Specially last one)..So in short Bro,Awesome done here..Keep update soon,I really want to read Sharon Pov regarding this scene,I am sure it will be damm interesting..

So Bro Update
And Bro sorry for not commenting on ur other work..I got ur PM but couldnt able to do comment in proper timing constraint but i will surly do my all comments as soon as fast..So keep sending me Pm's




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Posted: 12 years ago
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pratik it was simply awesome..just loved d both d parts..commenting on both d parts together.. 😃

d way u have describe the whole situation is simply amazing..nyc selection of scene 👍🏼

coming to fst part...angry swayam was nicely penned down...his love for sharon was clearly visible in his anger...just loved d way u have handled d whole situation...specially d lst line..brilliant job.. 👏

coming to second part..swaron emotions were perfectly defined..much needed showdown was simply perfect...loved every bit of it..and den d end was cute.. 😳 siren and majnu back in action.. 😆 😆

over all just loved it..looking forward to read more from you.. 😃

i knw u had left story on cliff-anger but thnx my examz go to read both d parts together... 😆 😆
sorry for late comment and guess i hv res 2 times..sorry for dat also.. 😔


Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
the chapter 1 was superb and fabulous on current track...
i hate this person who did along and really to the team that they got together
and teach him a lesson that was deserve it... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24

Thank you very much for such warm response to first part and as I promised that I would update as soon as I get 50 likes so here I am keeping my promise and updating in time. I have tried to send PM to all the fifty persons who like the first part.

Part 2 I still Love you and Love you till the end

Everybody was utterly shocked with what Swayam was screaming loudly. Sharon was shocked and surprised because he really showed the emotion today that had made her fall in love with him and the pain for not being able to be there for her could be seen in his eyes. Sharon suddenly felt if he never gave up loving her. His intensity and the way his blood rose in anger to see Sharon in danger was pretty much an evidence that one wants to prove that other person loves you out of his or her skin.

"Swayam what are you saying? We are in public" Rey spoke

"There is nothing wrong in what I spoke Rey everybody knows how much I have loved Sharon and this jerk crossed his line so he needs to learn his lesson today and I will teach him one. If his father would have taught him how to respect girls then instead of questioning you and kriya his father would have asked him how could he just capture and see that moment instead of taking off his eyes from there" Swayam spoke in anger again...

"But Swayam cool down we can talk this calmly" Rey said

"What calmness Rey? And for whom, this jerk deserves only one language that is to beat him up. He and his father Mr. so called Sarpanch ji were showing us the manners and taught us how ill mannered we are but we never do such cheep tricks to get a girl do use such cheep tactics. Hell NO... you can win a person with love not with force that's what these little children needs to learn and my god what an example Mr. Alok has set up, if can be bad influence on them then let it be at list they will learn to protect their sisters, mother and wife ok" Swayam was losing all the control he had on his mind up to now.

"Swayam just calm down please you need to relax Sharon is fine you saved her dude, Sharon please come here now only you can calm him down" Rey called Sharon

Swayam just freed himself from their grip with force and ran again to Alok to beat him up, he held him with color and spoke "Only thing that can calm me down now is that I shall beat this guy to death I just cannot stand him"

Sharon finally understood that there is nothing that can stop him now but he needs to stop now because he will get himself in trouble now if doesn't stop now. Sharon ran to Swayam where he was standing holding Alok.

Sharon caught Swayam's hand and just tried to drag him but Swayam was standing like if his feet were cemented on that place he didn't move an inch after all the efforts of Sharon and others.

"Swayam leave him you have already taught him a lesson now he won't dare to touch any girl not only me but any other girl. So leave him now" Sharon said

"Swayam bhai hum aapse mafi mangte hain ke aage se aisa kuch nahi karenge please humien jane dein" Alok finally spoke something after getting confidance that everybody was trying to get Swayam away from him

"No ways tuje maaf karu, maaf kar bhi diya hota ek bar agar tune mere sath kuch kiya hota but tune us insan ke sath vo kiya jise main khud se zyada value karta hu" Swayam said

"Swayam for God's sake please leave him, if you don't leave him trust me I will cut my hand" Sharon said angrily

Swayam didn't say anything just left Alok and left from there only. Finally everybody could take a breath because the cyclone named Swayam finally left and he got silent because of Sharon. But before leaving he gave death glare to Alok and blinked his eyes to Sharon indicating her that he left him only because she wanted.

Sarpanch and villagers apologized to Sharon and also to Rey and Kriya for not understanding their position. Finally they allowed them to leave with their shoot. But still everybody was so shocked with whatever happened because nobody has ever seen Swayam in this mode. He look like some hungry tiger who was all of sudden freed from his cage.

Sharon wanted to talk to Swayam because she wanted to thank him for helping her and somewhere a ray hope had risen to her that he loves her still.

"Guys I will just go and change and I need to check on Swayam also so I meet you guys later" Sharon said

"Sharon I don't think that's good idea you should not talk to Swayam right now, let kriya talk to him she can handle him better in this situation" Rey said

"No Rey I know him bit well now and I need some answers from him" Sharon said and left without looking back.

Rey soon realized that this was not over because Swayam had invited a bigger cyclone for himself now and somewhere everybody realized that this wasn't going to be that easy as it looked. And all were mentally prepared to see another showdown because the way Sharon said she needed some answers means she was damm serious and Swayam being in the mood he was in will not hold back and listen so something huge is bound to happen now.

Sharon got change and put on new clothes and went to search Swayam but he wasn't seen anywhere. Sharon searched almost places she knew in the village. Finally when she was roaming a little kid appeared before her.

"You want something" A cute little girl asked

"I am searching for someone" Sharon told

"Oh can I help you in that" girl asked

"how can you help, he is not visible anywhere" Sharon said

"Who" girl asked

"The person I am looking for" Sharon replied

"Are you looking for a guy with long hair fair skin and tall" girl asked

"Yes the same guy" Sharon replied finally sensing some hope of finding him

"Oh ok so you are searching for my Romeo, he downside near lake on tree" girl replied

"Your Romeo?" Sharon gave her puzzled look

"You are searching for that hottiee Swayam right? Then he only is my Romeo as he promised me" Girl said

"Oh god you little brat, now run to your house and let me meet him" Sharon said

"Ok but be gentle with him otherwise I will break your leg" girl said

Sharon smiled and girl blinked at her and left for her home. Sharon ran downside where Swayam was sitting. She knew he would prefer a place where nobody could see him so he was at that place. No wonder only Swayam could have found a place like that in whole village.

Sharon finally reached to him and looked at him. He was lost totally lost in his thoughts.

"Swayam" Sharon shouted at him. Her voice broke his concentration and brought him back to the world and he looked to see who called him. He was amazed to find Sharon there and he wondered how she found him when he told nobody where he was.

"Sharon, how in the world you found this place, and who told you I am here" Swayam asked

"Shut up for once because I am not here to answer you instead I am here to get answers from you" Sharon said

Swayam figured out what was coming to his way. So he stood up and began to walk.

"Don't you dare to walk off on me today Swayam" Sharon said

Swayam didn't listen to her and just carried on walking.

"Swayam I am not going to beg you to stay. I am ordering you to stay right there and otherwise you know I am very much capable of harming myself if you don't listen to me so you better stop and listen to me today" Sharon said

Swayam just turned around and saw her and blinked his eyes indicating that yes I am standing here listening to you. Sharon understood now he will not go anywhere and listen to her. So she walked up to him and stood right in front of him.

"So you beat the hell up of a guy just because he tried to force himself upon me and you still call that you don't care for me now" Sharon said

Swayam stood there silent.

"Speak up damm it I need to know. What kind of puppet do you think I am, you are allowed to care for me and beat anybody if he misbehaves with me but I don't get a second chance to prove myself and my love for you" Sharon said

Still Swayam didn't say a word and stood there silent.

"Why the hell are you standing like a statue now, come on shout like the way you were in the noon" Sharon said

Swayam didn't utter a word.

"Why Swayam why you are doing this to me, don't you see how much I am incomplete without you. I just am not Sharon Rai Prakash if you are not there. I just cannot feel myself without you Swayam and still you say I don't love you" Sharon said

Finally Swayam spoke something "Sharon it's just a habit that you have of seeing me around you and that is not love you will get over me as soon as you find a person who loves you and whom you love most importantly" said and again started to walk off.

Sharon looked at him in utter disbelief how could he just react like that after whatever he did in afternoon for her. Sharon got angry and spoke "I am not finished and you are not leaving this early Swayam"

Swayam stopped in his track and looked around to see Sharon coming towards him.

"Look Swayam if you think that's the way it is working then why the hell you reacted like that, why didn't anybody come to save me and why didn't I thought of anybody when I was in trouble except for you and why was that I was the only person who was able to stop you from beating that guy further how come Swayam" Sharon said angrily

"I don't know how it works and it is making me crazy as hell as well" Swayam replied

"Oh it is making you crazy really? It's driving me insane to know that somebody whom I love also loves me but thinks that I don't love him and I deserve someone better. Can you live with such situation" Sharon said

Now Swayam was losing it, he was holding himself back but this was enough to bring him back.

"No how would I know about such situation because the person I loved and trusted most just scrapped me in front of whole college like I was some shit trash paper which was used and thrown away, and now you ask me what pain it is to see the person who loves you walk back on you" Swayam spoke

"I told you other day itself that I will go confess in front of everyone then why you stopped me" Sharon spoke

"I stopped you because you didn't know how people treated me after you rejected me; do you have any idea how it is to be called a cheap stalker, or a pervert and most used term after that incident was that I was being a jerk who was forcing myself upon you why because people heard me telling you to confess and you bluntly rejected me like a piece of trash and above all what did you say we were never couple and will never be, how easy it was for you to deny me in public if I meant anything to you then you would have once thought what after effect it will have on me, but hell no you were only worried about yourself and how will you face people when they know you are dating a guy who just a bloody stalker and not a crowd puller" Swayam spoke and agony in his voice proved how much it still pained him to remind that incident

Sharon went numb for a while because she did realize her one mistake had caused some big things in his life, but she went there to him and asked him that she will make it public that she was dating him and now it is time to reply him because after all this pain she was the one who initiated recovery procedures but it was Swayam who was running away.

"Look Swayam I just cannot imagine that pain you went through because of a stupid mistake I made but I came to you and offered you that we should make it public and since then God only knows that how many times I have tried to make up on you but you are always running away from me" Sharon replied finally getting back to her senses

"Oh how cool is that one day you plainly reject me stating we were never a couple and will never be; and on very next day you wanted to quote that we were couple, and you assumed people would believe that we were actually a couple, no ways they would have thought you are trying to cover me up because we are one team and spoiling my reputation means spoiling team's reputation. People would have thought that we are pretending to be a couple just to save team and my image for sake of our friends ok, and do you really know till day people make fun of me because I tried to force myself on somebody who didn't have an inch of trust on me that she can confess to friends and people that she loves me, and please don't say you panicked suddenly" Swayam said

Sharon had no idea that how much pain he was hiding in himself from that day. His pain and the things that people said to him is still evident in his eyes and now Sharon began to feel guilty and started to realize what she thinks panic was actually crime that made Swayam a piece of fun in people's eyes.

Sharon controlled herself and spoke again why she panicked "Look Swayam I really panicked and the reason was that we decided to keep it personal not make a public affair about our relationship and suddenly turn of events started to flow that made me panic and I did not realize that I should have trusted you, instead I avoided you bluntly that was a mistake Swayam I agree, but I am trying to make up for it"

"What can you make up Sharon, can you make people believe that the rejection scene was fluke and we actually were dating and I never forced myself upon you actually I waited for 5 long years for you to be mine, could you prove them, hell no so there are no make ups for it Swayam Shekhawat is a piece of trash for everybody now, and well we decided to keep it secret and I agree turn off events forced you to panic but you know what love teaches us to trust the person you love most when you are in problem, if you loved me then the first thing that would have come to your mind is Swayam I love him and I trust him I will follow whatever he does to handle the situation" Swayam said

"I know Swayam I cannot make or dominate the way people think but I know you have waited for me and for you it me who mattered since when people started mattering you the most, I realize that you are important to me I come to you and I surrendered myself to you then how does it matter what people think. I agree for a time I didn't think of what my actions would cause and I was being selfish bitch but trust me the heart of this bitch belongs to you only and you have to believe me that whenever my heart calls you, you reach the place where I need you and time and again you prove that you can sense my heartbeats and you know how I am more than I know myself, then how can you just plainly believe that I have no feelings for you" Sharon asked

"It started to matter from the time you said we were never a couple because the person mattered to me most plainly kicked me out as if I was nothing so I did realize how much I have gone low in loving you. I made fun of myself again and again my going madly behind you and you never seem to have considered that even I can feel hurt. I did thought that I know you very well and on that basis only that day I announced in public that we were couple thinking that you will trust me but you did other thing and that made me re-think that I actually don't know the Sharon who didn't care for me when it really mattered, ya I can sense whenever you need me because still today I haven't given up loving you damm it, but I have no trust left in me to trust you that you will not leave me again and once again I will not be humiliated in front of whole lot of people" Swayam spoke

"See I always know you loved me and if I believe your love why can't you believe me for once, don't you think a person calls or cries for person whom it trusts most when a person is in trouble. Whenever I fall in trouble only person that comes in my mind is you Swayam if you are not there then I feel alone in this brutal world but somehow every time when I need you, you tend to appear before me" Sharon said crying and broken just sat on ground holding Swayam's legs. Here Swayam was also crying because in all this month's first time he felt she wanted him no she loved him yes she loved her feeling was true her eyes said what her lips pronounced.

"You mean you only love me and no one else ever and you will never leave me" Swayam spoke hold her arms making her stand again and wiped her tears.

"I...I...PPP...Promise Swayam J...JJust one chance I want to die in your arms only, you are the only person I want to be even if you don't have anything I can live with you in slum if I have you with me" Sharon said holding Swayam's hand

"Look Sharon I don't think if you leave me now then I will not be able to breathe or stay alive anymore, I need you damm it Sharon Rai Prakash is only dream Swayam Shekhawat has seen since he feel in love with you madly. I am sacrificing myself my honor again for you only and I am giving in you for the last time, I don't care what people will say or what fun they make until you are holding my hand tight" Swayam said and hugged Sharon.

Sharon hugged him back like she got something she was never able to reach. She wasn't even ready to leave him early from that hug. She just held him as tightly as she could because her heart wanted to feel him his smell and everything about him. Sharon was lost in Swayam and so was Swayam. They finally broke apart and smiled to each other.

"You know what Swayam this time instead of making fun of you people will say Sharon has finally manage to understand what Swayam can do for her and he saved her that made Sharon fell in love with him finally and this will not be a fluke because everybody has seen how you went to beat that guy who tried to do that shit on me" Sharon said hugging him back

Swayam smiled a bit and then hugged her back tightly and spoke "Your mind never stops thinking about something, I mean we are trying to feel each other you are thought up how people will react to this. You are only one piece and you are my Siren Sharon" Swayam said and both of them left each other and walked hand in hand to back to village.

"You know what Sharon I was thinking that how about you fulfill all my wishes again for a change" Swayam said blinking at Sharon

"You mean you want me to pamper you all over again" Sharon said

"Ya somewhat like that only" Swayam replied

Sharon got into her diva mode again and Swayam knew now he needs to run to save himself because siren was back now. Swayam ran and Sharon chased him and if he came in her reach then he is gone for good now. Finally they were enjoying their time, Sharon caught him hugged him and both of them went to their friends who were waiting to go back.

Well that was the story about SwaRon reunion now how they revealed that to Rey-Kriya and others is whole different story all together, you all free to imagine how those things would have happen.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update... as always...

plzz update ur other works...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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edited my comment abv on both d parts...sorry for inconvenience..
Edited by sweetdivya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wao tat was the end tat i imagined 😭
as a writer you definitely Tell ur readers something
that sparkles the imagination as short as possible
n Expresses the essence of the image
that you see in your mind
in a well-painted and focused description.
tis update was amazinggly written
sply the dialogs in the showdown
i m in love wit tis swayam
he has gone through hard times
n often carry years of emotional baggage
that keeps him in bondage to a person.
he experiences pain and sorrow --
from what he has gone through rejection
i simply loved the way how you showed
a contrast b/w swayam n sharon becoz
both simultaneously feel different things
about the same subject
its like showing two different sides of a coin
tat is the reason why sharon n swayam
always stand "alone in a crowd"
despite the joy around them,
their history of struggle and torment sets them apart
from others in the room.
thank you for such an emotional update 😃

ps i forgot to mention tat i was
dancing wit joy when swayam was hitting alok 😉
also the romeo part was really cute 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
great ts...read both parts..its awesome.👍🏼..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Super duper awesome update 😊
loved it to the core ❤️
Finally swaron ka patch up
loved swaron conversation ❤️
swayam finally beated alok (me very happy )
romeo part was cute 😳
from the start till the end it was simply perfect
really loved the whole scenario
the update is penned down very beautifully 👏
u depicted the emotions like anger,pain,sorrow.guilt very nicely and beautifully
excellent job 👍🏼
u r a brilliant writer
plzzz keep writing more and do pm me
thanks for the pm
and thank u sooo much for writing this
i m very glad that u wrote
it was very much needed and it is indeed a breath of refreshing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanks for the pm...its a awesome ts...i swear its 1000% better than nowdays d3 script...
Edited by anindya_vrushan - 12 years ago

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