AR/ArSh SS ||LOST||Dark concept|16+||Part 4&5 PG 9|

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*The story didn't contain graphical content.Few events might be violent*


Prologue

Her hand raised to the curtains.She move them aside ,letting the light spread into the dark room.Her eyes glassy,face expressionless.She watch wistfully at rays.

Her heart may be deserted but may be still a flicker of emotion present in the depth of her organ.May Be a hope!


But Hope for what??


She lost,Lost everything yet nothing.

Her eyes move to the sleeping form of the person.Her hand moved to the knot of the sheath with securely held her form.The form which has been abused.

She sat beside him and stare at his face.This person is her husband.Everyday he is loving her.Trying to make her live again.Trying to know the reason behind her lifeless soul.

But can she share with him,her life,her sorrow.Probably never!!!

As her mind scream never.The flicker of emotion that raised in her eyes ,Lost.



Index:

Part 1

Part 2 pg 5

Part 3 PG 7

Part 4 & 5
Edited by MrMrsChiping. - 11 years ago

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Maria151994 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aww..this seems so sad...I hope the man is able to find her lost happiness and soul
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice prologue
Continue soon
Thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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short but amazing prologue..

post part1 soon plz..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice concept...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept
loved it
continue soon
pm me when u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it does sound heavy.but i love the way you write.i would have been happier if it had been a little longer. but no problem. you can always give us a longer update next time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interestinggg
um looking forward to read itt
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Prologue sounds sad but interesting.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.

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