My Parents Maaneet SS Last Part pg94

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 11 years ago

#491

😃That is true.Any other writer would have explained the incidents in detail(Even Suhaag raat too).But I prefer short stories than dragging.

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

it was very short explaination of their marriage and I told u earlier that u don't let us enjoy any good part...ur story jumps from one incident to other incident...just like here just few lines that Maan and Geet dressed as Christian couple and got married and then they get some romantic that is all then ur story jumped from there to Pinky creating confusion in Aarav's mind...so many incidents in one update that it is very normal to get confuse...
I agree every writer has different style of writing and this is urs but I will tell u that incidents change very fast in ur story...any other writer would have taken this story to minimum 25 parts more...
😆😆

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Angel13

@Angel13

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#492

hummm my fav. cha. were both Geet and Apeksha as both loved Araav as their own

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Geethanda87

@Geethanda87

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#493

waise to mere saare favt. character hai
but this story based on only aarav
aarav is a very swt
or my favt. scene is jb aarav kehta hai dono hi uski mother hai
this scene was very emotional
thats why i like it very much
or ek scene aur hai jb sach na jaante huye bhi
aarav geet ke liye wig lekar aata hai
its very touching

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Mehek25

@Mehek25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#494

Was a lovely story Jasmine...
As for the ending...loved that it was happy...
Great to know that Aarav accepted them as his mim nd dad...and also that geet was fully cured...
Waiting for more such interesting writing from u..
Thanx for pm dear...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#495

beautiful endinggg👏

awesomeee parts👏👏

lovedd ittt❤️

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#496

Wow those last 3 chapters were amazing
All worked out so well
Aww that's why Vicky was so worried he felt he cheated Ap by donating his sperm n she thought she was guilty to him too
Felt so sorry for maan n the fact he can't father any children
Glad all worked out though n that Aarav still didn't care n decided to keep both couples as his parents
Wow they were away for six yrs for treatment
Six yrs living alone ...nice
Loved the happy ending with all being together n Aarav growing up to be very sucessful in his fathers' business n taking his bf pinky as his bride
Thanks for pm gonna miss this story

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mandeep

@mandy15

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#497

loved it dear :)

superb :)

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Lads

@Lads

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#498

Wwwowww dear lvvvd d ending...

Ur ff ws 1 of d bests n is ofcourse...i hv startd folwng it frm recent n i lvvvd d apeksha vicky partss in ur ff...dy r bssst...i lvvv alll deir scenes...alll r my mooossst favs...

U make us lvvv vth ur ff...alll d vry vvvry bssst fr ur future n careeer...u r 1 d grrrt writers...plsss do cntinue writngs...lvvv u...n a vvvry thnq fr ur mssstlvvvly ff...

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Lads

@Lads

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#499

OMG!!!!!!!!!! N finally d truth is out n aalll is messs cleard out bbbeautifulllyy...

It ws a tottaaallly twist bara update...

Lvvv lvvv lvvd d VikSha partsss...shocking n beautifuuulll...i ws totttally in shock by vicky being d sperm donor...dn it turnd to a sooo amazing n bbbeautifuulll shock aftr knowng Apeksha d sperm donor...it ws sooo bbbeautifffulll part...lvvvd dm..

Grrrt update dear..

N reallly sry fr d late rply...ws busy vth uni wrk...