ASYA: ON MY WEDDING DAY.... MARRIED A STRANGER INSTEAD OF MY BRIDE !! - Page 67

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shona-ksgian

awsome update

loved it
😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nehi0015

r u going to update this thursday...


yeah ... !
i'll update today 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rockstar_16

when r u going to update reyna ???😭


i'll update in an hour 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: parakshi

Hey reyna!
when r u updating?
plzzz update soon


i'll update today only ... n within an hour 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: khadupam

Its going great
Awesome
Need to see wht happens next
N wht was in that diary of asad i want to read the continuation of diary
Rest was great
Update soon


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Posted: 11 years ago

part 9 :

asad: so ... Such diverse people like us, can also have some similaries in interests n likes ... That's really nice to know !

zoya: even I'm surprised to know !! ... Done with ur first aid ... how are u feeling now ?

asad: it's not like ... something went into my eyes, ... u remove it n ask ... how are u feeling 😆?

I got hurt n u've done dressing just now ... It needs some time to heal zoya !! ... I'll tell u tommorrow, whether I'm feeling well or not ...😉 !!

ok, lets go now, we r getting late !

zoya: late for wat ?

asad: are you planning to stay back here for the rest of ur life 😆? ... We need to go !! ... Mom n dad might be waiting

zoya: oh yeah ... lets go !

they go near their cars but don't find anyone there !

asad: where did they all go ?

zoya: how can I know ?😉

asad: come, lets see around ... they might have gone to roam !

zoya: wat abt our friends ?

asad: oh yeah ... i forgot to remove our friends from my pocket, ... just a min !😆

zoya: is that a joke ? ... I didn't get laugh !!😡

asad: who told u it's a joke ... ? ... N not getting laugh isn't my problem !!⭐️

zoya: for god's sake, will u please keep quite ?😡

asad: finally ... u've understood the peace in silence !! ... I'm glad that from now, u'll maintain silence !😆

zoya: all ur games are fine until we find them ... Once it's done, u'll know wat is zoya !!😡

asad: no, I need to know abt it right now !! ... Tell me ... Wat ..is ..zoya ?😉

zoya: zoya ... Umm ... zoya isss ... a good girl !!😆😆

asad: ( laughs off ...) first think wat to speak n then speak ... Ok ?

he starts walking with slippers in his hands leaving his footprints in sand ! ... Zoya stops for a moment, thinks n runs towards him ...

zoya: wat wrong did I speak that u asked me to think before I speak ? ... I know very well ... That I'm a good girl !

asad: firstly, everyone thinks that they are gud ... !! ... We need any other person to confirm it !!😉

secondly, I don't think u r gud or ... u donno the meaning of good ... So, get a dictionary !!😆

zoya: I'll remember this forever ... Mr.asad !! ... U insulted me in beach ... that too ... a public area !!😡

asad: hold on !! don't decide to have a grudge on me !! ... Though it's a public area, there's no one to hear that u r insulted !!😉

n by the way, does the public space matter to u more, or the insult ? ... Is it ok if I scold u in our room ?😆😳

zoya: so, u also know how to speak !! ... I thought ... by now, u would've understood me , but no ... U r still the foolish one !

vanshika: ( shouts ... ) now stop it !! ... Since the last 15 min's, u both are arguing with eachother ... Don't u have any other thing to do ?😡😡

zoya: but aunty, how do u know that we were arguing ? ... n from where did u come here all of a sudden ?😲

vanshika: coz, I was eavesdropping ur convo through phone !! ... I called ur dad's no. through my phone n dropped my phone in ur handbag ...⭐️👏

Asad: wat ?😲😡

Varun: actually, ur mom wants to know if everything is fine btw u both or not, so ... she did this ...sry on her behalf !

Vanshika: sry ? ... For wat ? these 2 are useless ! ... They donno how to behave atleast like a boy friend n girl friend !!😆

Asad: mom ?😲😡

Zoya: yes aunty ... it's ur son who's going soo fast leaving me behind !! ... Then wat can I talk ?

asad: I'm not fast, u r only slow !

vanshika: but u r not fast in every sense, asad !!👏😉

asad: mom ?😲😡

zoya: that's soo true ...😆

vanshika: lets go now ... it's waste of time even to let u guys stay alone !!😉

such stupids !!

they all go home ... zoya's parents go to their home !

everyone go to their rooms after dinner

in asya's room:

asad: wat were u doing wen my mom was keeping phone in ur bag ?😡

zoya: I did wat u always do ... Ask in a shocked expression ... " Mom ? 😲😡" 😆😆

asad: I think this is all my mom's plan to get us closer, ... but remember, I'm not going to ditch aenna for u !!😡😳😳

zoya: that's soo sweet of you 😳!! ... Even I'm not waiting for us to get closer ... n u know that better !!😆

asad: we should stop my mom from doing all these things !!⭐️

zoya: even I'm feeling so !! ... Wat shall we do ?

asad: we'll plan something tomorrow⭐️⭐️, gud night !

zoya: gud night , but can I ask u something ... if u r not going to fall asleep 😳?

in varun n vanshika's room ... They start to read asad's diaries 🤢!!

Actually, I can continue this part with the dairy n zoya's question, but didn't coz I'm not feeling to write it 😆!!

friends ... I'm getting actually the lowest response ... for 356 pm's, I'm getting 32 likes n even less comments !😭😭

I'm completely disappointed !

If the response is same in this part also, then ... I'll end my stories ... both ... as even that story is getting less response !😡😡

I'm sry for saying like this, but this time ... I'm pretty sure to discontinue both my stories if the response is soo less !!

if u like my story, please share my story with ur buddy's also ... else ... this will be my last update !!



********** love ... reyna

This story will be updated every Thursday !!


my first story: BEST FRIENDS TO BEST LIFE PARTNERS

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3823857/best-friends-to-best-life-partners-upd-epilogue-11-2


Lemme know if u liked it !!

Buddy me for my pm's !!

I'll only pm to those who'll comment ... !!

reyna's index: fusion of ff's , girl's corner n kid's corner !!

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3762857/reynas-index-fusion-of-ffs-girls-corner-n-kids-corner

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely😆😆
Edited by 11sinal - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...loved it dear...it was fab... 👏
eagerly waiting for ur nxt update... 😉
pls pls pls pls continue soon... 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update dear.
How can uh be so mean, for some uh ll stop writing😡
Plz continue soon.

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