Pangs of Desire TS UPDATED!! Part 4 Page 9! - Page 5

Originally posted by: BabbaR_SheR

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Well m a person who doesn't like reading so never goes thru FF section or any writings...but being in love with characters and show..thought to give it a try...and trust me...i fell for you M'am...don't take me wrong...but you write really awesome...that i wanna read more of you...not asking more..but please continue this atleast...it would be pleasure reading more from you...your thoughts are amazing...and the way you pen down them...i won't mind reading them whole my life😳</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">Regards.</font>

Awe thank you so much for your amazing comment and your love! I am extremely humbled 😳

I am not a writer but will try my best to continue writing to your expectations and try to update soon 😊

The writing blended beautiful and in character of both leads. Beautiful!

You write really well...it was such a beautiful piece,I love the ending but wish it was longer...I would to read more of ur work...love ur thoughts n the emotions u put in ur writing...so pliz write more

Beautifully written...the ending couldn't have been better than this...it was sensitive and passionate. I liked it. Thanks for the TS.

you done such an amazing job
Then why you always say that you r not a writer
Actually you posess tremendous writting skills with you .plz keep doing it for PR fans dr
I had no words to express how superb stuff you made for us

Originally posted by: jency-elma-

you done such an amazing job
Then why you always say that you r not a writer
Actually you posess tremendous writting skills with you .plz keep doing it for PR fans dr
I had no words to express how superb stuff you made for us

Thank you 😳 😳

OH MYYY!!! 😲 I just read all 3 parts in a go n I JUST FELL IN LOVE WITH ALL OF IT LIKE OH MY GOSH!!!👏 SIMPLY TRANSCENDENT N SMASHINGLY OUT OF THE WORLD!!!❤️🤗 I mean, Cutie, ur story telling skillzz r on point!👍🏼 n dammnnn ya for ending at the parts where my heart is about to spill out uuurrrgghhh the next update better be LONG n as sexy n seductive n romantic n erotic as the last ones were!!! ☺️ PLEASEEE UPDATE ASAP!!! WILL BE WAITING RESTLESSLY!!!😳🤪

Originally posted by: zzinia2411

OH MYYY!!!😲I just read all 3 parts in a go n I JUST FELL IN LOVE WITH ALL OF IT LIKE OH MY GOSH!!!👏SIMPLY TRANSCENDENT N SMASHINGLY OUT OF THE WORLD!!!❤️🤗I mean, Cutie, ur story telling skillzz r on point!👍🏼n dammnnn ya for ending at the parts where my heart is about to spill out uuurrrgghhh the next update better be LONG n as sexy n seductive n romantic n erotic as the last ones were!!!☺️PLEASEEE UPDATE ASAP!!! WILL BE WAITING RESTLESSLY!!!😳🤪

Your comments made me blush 😳 😳
Thank you, glad u enjoyed the story!

awesome post... nicely written... I have never seen such a amazing zinda dil imagination... I salute u writer arnav-ki-dewani... . . . . . . ...muahhh...love ur post...but please if u can continue please write more m dying for reading the next update... please write if u can write... arnav ki dewani ki jai ho... . 😳 😆