Pangs of Desire TS UPDATED!! Part 4 Page 9! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Oh god 😳
*runs and hide behind the bed*
😳 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Wow !!It Was Amazing !Loved it too much. . .I hope u r going to continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Read both parts in 1 go...
Very tilting... well written...please do continue...

I do wish Sher has these kind of thoughts about Shardda in the series...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
YAAR SERIOUSLY!!!!!!
U STOPPED AT WRONG TIME
I was expecting a loonnnggg version

Write soon👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

This was too good and ohh so sensual, lovely writing..

Could imagine Sher's passion and intensity while reading it, it was beautiful..

Wish this was a bit longer though got over too fast, update sooner and make the update long if possible..

You write good..


Thank you for your comments! Will update soon. Hopefully with a longer update!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Aww...what a lovely update 😳😳😳 Keep going...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you for your overwhelming response everyone really appreciate it! Here is the last part to my story! I hope you will enjoy it as much as the others 😊

Enjoy!!



PANGS OF DESIRE
PART 3



"Sharddha..." Sher moaned in her neck...

His husky voice somehow penetrated through her trance and Sharddha opened her eyes, registering the state she was in. Her saree was drenched through and clung to her body. She was hugging Sher intimately as his hands roaming all over her back and his lips latched onto her neck! They were on the open terrace, in the pouring rain visible to anyone!

Sharddha gasped at her forwardness

Suddenly she felt extremely conscious and shying away from her husband, tried to pull away from his embrace.

Rapid thoughts clouded her mind!

What must he think of her?

The way she was clinging to him like a wanton nymph!

Like that Rani! Sharddha thought disgustedly.

They had yet to develop the bond of familiarity between them which would warrant this behaviour from her Sharddha thought. Yes her head spun with these new emotions in response to his kisses and insistent touches but now she started heated up with embarrassment at being led astray by her raging hormones.

Even though Sher was too consumed by passion to let her go, Sharddha felt it her responsibility to restrain the situation to the proper decorum certified of their relation. She gave another push and pulled away from Sher.

That was a mistake.

In their tussle Sharddhas saree had lodged in the zip of sher's jacket without her realising. As she pulled away her pallu became stuck and came undone, leaving her vulnerably exposed.

Stood a few feet from him, her eyes went up in shock to meet Sher's. As she looked into the blazing orbes she was overwhelmed by the intensity and wild passion she registered there. She averted her gaze unable to endure the meaning of that passion.

It frightened her!

Sharddha turned a deep shade of red with embarrassment. She turned her back to him in order to regain some composure and tried to steady her racing heartbeats. But what was she to do she would have to talk to him no matter how shy she felt. Closing her eyes and sighing she whispered,

"H..h...humari saree..."

Sher was behind her in an instant, and wrapped the pallu around Sharddha. He had by no means wanted to dishonour or humiliate her. He only wanted to love her, devour her and treasure her.

The romantic atmosphere and the rain as well as the glimpse of his wet blushing wife sent the blood rushing in his veins. After all he was a hot blooded male and the object of his desire was in front of him. His body screamed for release but with a will of steel he controlled himself. He would only proceed if she gave her permission. Saying this his hands did linger over her shoulders as he uttered his hoarsely whispered request

"Aaj inkar mat kijiyay. Humain pyaar ki ijazat day dijiyay"

In response all Sharddhas was able to do was gasp and close her eyes as her insides melted on hearing Shers deep voice! And his request? Her hormones spiralled out of control and her heart began to beat so fast she feared it would burst out of her chest!

"Hum...hum...,"

Her words stuck in her throat as Sher began sliding his hands down her arms, hugging her from behind and continued kissed her neck softly.

"Mmm"

"Yea saazish hai boondon ki
Koi khwaaish hai chup chup si...

As the rain continued to pour over them, Sharddha half heartedly tried to step away again, but Sher playfully pulled her back and then proceeded to slide his arms under the pallu and around her waist teasing the skin with feather touches.

"Mmm..."

An involuntary moan escaped sharddhas lips.

"May I?" Sher whispered hoarsely.

To her utter amazement but now unable to resist the seductive assault, her own lips answered back

"Yes...yeeesss" she whispered back shyly.

Sharddha continued to melt in Shers arms the rest of that night...
Edited by arnavkidevani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Nice part loved how you ended it but wish this one had lasted long wished to read more and more so good was the writing, try continuing it if you can.. Great update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
please dont leave this now, wpuld like to read the next fiery part in mucgh detail.love ur writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: max_thakker

please dont leave this now, wpuld like to read the next fiery part in mucgh detail.love ur writing.


Ok I'll try but "fiery" part and I don't seem to go together! 😉 😳

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