Pangs of Desire TS UPDATED!! Part 4 Page 9! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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When are you going to update??
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here you go sweeties 😉


PANGS OF DESIRE
PART 2

She gasped again!

"A..a..aap? Yahan?" Her voice shook with nervousness and was barely audible.

"Haan hum. Kyun? Nahi hona chahyai?" He answered her, grinning in the dark and taking measured steps towards her.

"N..n..nahi..." She croacked.

As she heard his shoes click on the stone floor, Sharddha began moving backwards. However she had only moved one step when she came against the balcony railing. Unable to run to her room, she slid along instead trying to control her erratic heartbeats at the same time. She felt the blood rush in her veins and beads of perspiration appeared on her forehead.

"Nahi?"

"A..aap to Jaipur gaiy thay na"

"Nahi, tumhay akaila chod kay kaisay gatay?

Her heart leapt into her throat at this huskily uttered declaration and she felt her face flush warm.

Her back was now against a pillar in the railing. Sher chose this moment to step right up to her, putting one hand on the pillar and one on the railing, enclosing her but not touching her. She closed her eyes and began breathing heavily effected by the close proximity.

"Hum nay socha kay mil kar dono kuch pyaar ki batain karain gay"

Sher looked at Sharddha as he uttered these words seductively, hoping she would gauge the passionate undertones to his statement.

But what he saw in the semi darkness instead left him breathless.

She looked tantalising and delectable in her flushed state with her eyes closed. He was unable to control his gaze which slid down to her chest which moved up and down due to her quick breaths. He felt drawn to her quivering lips, the rosebuds inviting him to devour them! All he wanted to do at this moment was to take her in his arms and kiss her senseless, however he rained in his desire as not to scare her.

Just as Sher was about to move away from her, they both heard an even louder clap of thunder and a brighter spark of lightening shone.

Overcome by emotions and the sound of lightening, Sharddha jumped with fright and the next instant put her arms around Sher and hugged him tightly.

As her soft body squeezed against his, the heavens chose that moment to burst forth their splendour and heavy rain began to fall from the sky drenching them both on the balcony.

Wet through to the bone, Shers body was on fire. He could no longer control his body's reactions and slid his arms around his madamji, stroking her naked waist as he did. His head came down to the nook of her neck and he began nuzzling there. He sighed a sigh of content as at last he was able to touch, kiss the woman he loved. The only one he craved for. The one he had dreamed of doing these things with!

Sharddha on the other hand was also feeling overwhelmed by some new sensations. A constant fluttering was taking momentum inside her and she began to feel a dull ache in the pit of her stomach. And as Shers fingers grazed her exposed waist she felt her skin tingle with anticipation of more! More of what she wasn't sure yet but her whole body ache for his touch. She moaned involuntarily as his lips grazed her ear, then kissed her neck softly. She hugging him tighter, unaware how in her innocence she was igniting Shers passion even more driving him crazy to the point of no return!

"Sharddha!" Sher moaned in her neck...

Edited by arnavkidevani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Such a perfect 2nd part 😊. Your writting has the twilight effect on me 😃. please do continue !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Wow what a sexy romantic 2nd part totally loved it 😳

Ease continue soon it ended too fast 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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☺️...☺️...☺️
Amazing piece it was...but again...it was too short[=(([...You really write so well, man.
Just one complaint😆...Sher always talk like "HUM"😎...*wink*
waiting for next part desperately as Sher is waiting to love her lady more desperately☺️...it was sensuous but it din't seem...coz it was so so lovely...my imagination is on cloud nine now😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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brilliant, brilliant update !
wish it was longer...
continue soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: BabbaR_SheR

☺️...☺️...☺️

Amazing piece it was...but again...it was too short[=(([...You really write so well, man.
Just one complaint😆...Sher always talk like "HUM"😎...*wink*
waiting for next part desperately as Sher is waiting to love her lady more desperately☺️...it was sensuous but it din't seem...coz it was so so lovely...my imagination is on cloud nine now😆


Corrected the "hum" for you 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
This was too good and ohh so sensual, lovely writing..
Could imagine Sher's passion and intensity while reading it, it was beautiful..

Wish this was a bit longer though got over too fast, update sooner and make the update long if possible..

You write good..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: arnavkidevani


Corrected the "hum" for you 😉

oh..sirf hmare liye?😉
Shukriya😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
wow,absolutely fabulous , jus when i thought tht the story will be dragged u had hit the right notes, cant wait for thext parts, also a request- if poss turn this into an ff rather thn a ts.,it would be a pleasure reading.

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