They r 2, but 4 being 1.FF last prt updat page 23. - Page 16

Originally posted by: beebutterfly

Athira- Im so sorry for being late. You already updated the next part and i didnt even comment on the one before it So first things first,

Loved the way you made them meet. How can you say it wasnt good? It was dreamy and so beautiful. Phulwa coming in front of Abhay to save him without knowing it was him just shows what a great bond they share!😍

And loved the bit where Abhay teases her on her clothes😆 That's so him! Glad to see they both instantly got back what they lost when they met. Their smiles! So nicely written there.👏👏

This part

You have a way of incorporating pics which fit the situation to perfection. Really feels like it's happening! :)

@Song- Oh WOW! you got it so right there. And i liked the way you brought of the feelings of these two through the song. I agree it does suit them!

@Mangalsutra- LOL, sooner or later it had to be there so abhi hi sahi😉

Yes I finished it with high speed since i am going out of state in this week end so I dont think I can update till next monday so as a compansation 😆.

Even though I finished it wit jet speed in three hours my hard work on this one was really a lot dear... And it becomes worth when I hear these words from you people... 😊 Feeling very happy...

Great one! Im just sad that you are going to end it soon Cant wait for the next!

Originally posted by: mimi_s

Athira...dont worry abt the mangalsutra...honestly i didnt even notice it ...and only saw it when i read what u had written...honestly cnt thank u enough fr using the pics and the song...it was really nice...loved the way u have written the entire thing...thanks a ton...😊

Originally posted by: akeash

👏AWASOME...,👍🏼 mind blowing dear...Athira, your, words are flying in my heart. perfect song selection, and the pictures. u gave us what we want. thank you dear...❤️

Originally posted by: nity92

👏👏WAAW...WAAW...👏.once again AMAZING, 👏 its beautiful the way u blended the song and PhAb's past. every single word u written hear have life..., it can talk, move , expressing alll... very well written👏

Originally posted by: Marliya

BEAUTIFUL👍🏼 MY eyes are locked in your words😍.amazing explanation of emotions. waiting 4 the next part, hope we will get some more romantic stuff...😳