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Wonderful!!👏👏👏 Seriously, it's a really really wonderful piece, I'm really impressed by the way you wove in all their past memories so well into the situation - true it was the past, but it really affected and changed her life in such a shocking manner.
@Shatru - Loved it!! He was truly her first love, the little natkhat things he did for her made her realise that somebody cared for her:) And sad memories toh hain, but I'm super glad you started off with how he commented on her beauty first - something nobody has done for her before.
but now fr his that act she doesn't feel angry fr him but a kind of pride over him. she murmured into his ears, what did you do to me?
Very very true! I really really liked the way she called herself a police officer's husband so matter-of-factly to Arjun, being a dacoit it is super ironic for her to support a policeman. But she loves him so much that his this sense of justice truly makes her so proud of him:D
She placed her head on his shoulders, the place where she felt more secured after her mother's lap.
Aww! 😍😍 This line is beautiful! He's really her strength and her hope now - and to compare it to a mother's lap really goes to show how much trust and faith she has in him. Loved this line!:)
He fulfilled all his promises by this time, stand fr her, rescue her frm all dangers even placing his on life at the mouth of death, he gave her all the care and love he promised to her.
It's really ironic how fate brought them together once again, he might have made those promises in jest but he fulfilled them till the end superbly, to always keep her safe and happy:)
Loved your writing, after a long time it's nice to see her remembering Shatru and their earlier days again to see just how far they've come. Beautiful, and keep writing more!:D
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