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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: widdy

Fabulous and excellent chapter,VinniešŸ‘

Slowly and surely their relationship has started to build.😊



Thank you Widdy,!, Yes but you know coming to terms with and accepting his feelings is not as easy running down a bus for this Vickram Singh now!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Great job Vinne...!!! It was superb as always...
Omg!!! Cop but why??? I guess.. I hv to wait for the next one...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg vinnie this is superb...
i just loved the brave sugni and vikram...i am loving him even more... he is so caring,protective,sensible and helpful...alas if cvs cud have used these as a storyline here instead of sugni as chulbuli...it wud have been much more interesting.

Cant wait for the next part and how vikram will save her from cops...
great going...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
😊 Vinnie!!! Superb,Amazing,Splendid,fantastic,Awesome and stupendous.
Great job šŸ‘ Vickram and Sugni relationship is blossoming beautifully
Looking forward for the next chapter.
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😊Vinnie, this gorgeous flowers is especially for you. šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: K.swati885

Great job Vinne...!!! It was superb as always...
Omg!!! Cop but why??? I guess.. I hv to wait for the next one...


Thank you so much for your appreciation K. Swatie... Don't worry you will find out soon. šŸ˜‰ Keep reading! .😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ash_arti

omg vinnie this is superb...
i just loved the brave sugni and vikram...i am loving him even more... he is so caring,protective,sensible and helpful...alas if cvs cud have used these as a storyline here instead of sugni as chulbuli...it wud have been much more interesting.

Cant wait for the next part and how vikram will save her from cops...
great going...


Thank you so much Aarthi, Yes if PSH gone down that road it would have been a big hit today. It was great to see Vickram stand up for her, in front of all. I would have loved to see him and Sugni working together for the betterment of the bedni's instead of the stupid love triangle.
Please keep reading, your comments mean a lot!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Sandy66

😊 Vinnie!!! Superb,Amazing,Splendid,fantastic,Awesome and stupendous.
Great job šŸ‘ Vickram and Sugni relationship is blossoming beautifully
Looking forward for the next chapter. šŸ˜‰


😳😳😳 Aww Sandy...Thank you for your kind words. I am glad you are liking it. More romance to come I promise you...so please keep reading and commenting!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry Vinnie
Forgor to answer your question
Lee Child, the author, has written a series of books based on the character Jack Reacher.
Jack Reacher is a big man over six feet tall and well built (thats why Varun as TVS does not quite fit the physique) who has retired from the Military Police and just travels around the US doing odd jobs when he needs to (like a drifter). On his travels if he sees people in trouble (normally its in the back waters of US where police and the law are often non-existant or in the pockets of the local bigwigs) he steps in and helps. He is very clever and fights his battles his way which is why your TVS is reminding me on him.
Hope the above makes sense.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: payal7

Sorry Vinnie

Forgor to answer your question
Lee Child, the author, has written a series of books based on the character Jack Reacher.
Jack Reacher is a big man over six feet tall and well built (thats why Varun as TVS does not quite fit the physique) who has retired from the Military Police and just travels around the US doing odd jobs when he needs to (like a drifter). On his travels if he sees people in trouble (normally its in the back waters of US where police and the law are often non-existant or in the pockets of the local bigwigs) he steps in and helps. He is very clever and fights his battles his way which is why your TVS is reminding me on him.
Hope the above makes sense.


Ohhh Ok Sounds Interesting... my story starts at TVS wandering days,unlike this Jack Raeacher though, he was not looking to help her, in fact the reason he offered to help was he saw those guys as a way to find his death. ( like TVS and his russian roulette game) . Also given the fact that she was a woman and alone he could not just leave her... Although yes the town is a back water town, same as Mauhari.. Thank you for answering... Please keep reading mor to come soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 7

Any one looking at the scene from outside the window of the diner, would say it looked like an old western show down.

On one side stood two police officers, on the other side stood Sugni, with Vickram at one side at her other side was Champa followed by Twinkle and Rattu. He could tell she was scared but looking at her you it was not immediately obvious. Her chin was lifted and she had a determined look on her face.

The only give away was the clenched fist at her sides. "Good afternoon officer, how can I help you?" she said. Vickram smiled slightly, only Sugni could hear she was about to be arrested and greet the officers like regular customers.

"Ms. Sugni Sharma, you are under arrest!? " Said one of the officers, as he reached to his side to pull out a pair of hand cuffs. "You are being arrested for causing grievous bodily injury to Mr. Jwala Singh!"

"I hardly scratched him!" Sugni answered,

"We have witnesses who said other wise ma'am"

"What witnesses...we were..." She began shocked and flustered as to what was going on.

Vickram Placed a hand on her shoulder stopping her explanation, he knew nothing she said here was going to convince them!, Shaking his head indicating she stop talking, she did.

"I am sorry officer," he said "I think you must be mistaken, we were all here and I assure you nothing of that sort happened." He said. The officer looked at him as though he belonged to something in a garbage can.

"And you are..?"

"Vickram...Singh" he answered slowly.

"Well...Mr. Vickram...Singh, charges have been made and we must arrest the lady, you can keep your witness account for the court room OK...I suggest you allow us to do our jobs" He was sure the police man was trying to be intimidating , but he was failing.

"Hey bhagwan!" Vickram said crossing his arms over his chest he took the few steps to close the distance between him and the officer. Standing face to face with him he said.

"Listen Officer Randy?' He read the name tag, "We both know why you are here, with this bogus charge that could not hold up in a doctor's office much less a court room. So i am not going to play your little game here. Do you understand? You can go now and tell your boss man, and we both know exactly WHO you are working for,that all these bullying tactics he is using to scare the lady into submission is not going to work!... now since it seems you like to take reports how about taking one from me...see Mr. Jwala Singh made a very indecent proposal to Sugni, and was about to cause her as you put it "Grievous bodily harm", to defend the lady, I stopped him using the letter opener. As Witnessed by these people standing right behind me, not so Rattu?"

"Of course!" Rattu answered

"We were just about to go to the police station, but since you are here you saved us the trip! If any one should be arrested it is Jwala Singh for attempting to molest a young lady!"

The police man stared at Vickram in shock. Trying his best to take control over this situation he was loosing control of. He said

"Listen Sir, I am here to do my job and right now that is take Sugni with me to the police station, now should any one here have any counter complaints to make feel free to come down to the police station and make them, but for now I have a duty to perform. And any one who is in the way will also be arrested for obstructing justice!" He said glaring at Vickram.

Taking the 2 steps needed he was standing nose to nose with the officer. In a voice that was soft yet hard as steel, he said. "You know that this is an illegal arrest, you have no warrant, you have no witnesses that was not bought, and you have no evidence that a crime was committed ...the man could have cut himself on his car door for all you know. You want to take her? Go right ahead, but I assure you that within the hour she will be out of jail, and you will be out of a job. And if you feel this is an empty threat by all means, please perform your "duties"! He moved from infront of the officer gesturing towards Sugni.

Tiny beads of sweat could be seen on his brow, as the officer swallowed what was being said. Swallowing convulsively he took in Vickram then Sugni who was standing there surrounded by her staff still defiant. Weighing his options he said...

"I guess I need to conduct some more investigations to conclude this charges. Good day!" He said as made his way to the door. Following him to the door, Vickram closed the door and flipped the closed sign. They had enough drama for one day.

Turning he found them all staring at him with their and mouths wide open. Feeling like he was caught on stage naked, he made his way back to the group who seemed frozen, "What?"

Twinkle was the first to snap out of her stupor.

"Oh My God! That was fantastic!" She laughed..."Vickram you were the man, I swear that police man looked like he wanted to piss himself!" She continued to laughed, now joined by the others. The only one not laughing was Sugni, who was still staring at him

'Well , i think we should call it a day...we had enough drama in here for one day...I am sure Sugni would not mind would you?"

"No ---yeah, let's clean up and go home." Every one disbursed to finish closing up.

"Why don't you go home?" He said, stopping Sugni who was about to join the others. "They can lock up.!" A sentiment which was seconded by the rest of the staff. "Come on I'll walk you home!" he said going to the back to retrieve her bag and coat, after a few words with Rattu asking him if he would take over his duties for a few hours they left.

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"What's wrong?" he asked Sugni . The television was on some channel, providing more of background sound than entertainment. They were home for over two hours now, and in that time Sugni hardly said more that ten words to him... a feat that he once thought was impossible. But there was nothing amusing about her silence.

"Hmmm?" She said snapping out of her lost thoughts.

Taking a heavy sigh he said; "well I always thought if you word burst if you were quite for more than 15 minutes, glad to see that I was wrong! He said, a very serious expression as he nodded his head.

It took her a few seconds to get it and the minute she did he received a throw pillow in the face as he herd her tinkling laughter... he realized even in the space of a few hours he missed that sound.

"That's better!" Gazing as she took a deep breath, seeming to resolve herself for something.

" You're not just a guard are you?" she asked looking at him.

" I mean the way you were speaking to that Police officer, that confidence, those were not just empty threats were they?" She was staring at his face as though the answers to all her questions were written there.

"No.. I am not a guard...in fact I can seriously say this is my first guard type job." He answered, he could not lie to her and right now he did not have any desire to do so. He resolved that he would answer her questions as honestly as he could.

"Then..?" she asked

"I am or was a business man behind a desk making deals breaking deals...that's me" he said

"You don't look much like a business man"

"I know...i gave up my three piece suites a while ago. I just could not stand it any more so I left." He told her, the door to his past cracked open a bit and he was to late to close it back, he was not sure he wanted to .

"Why?" she asked softly.

"Cause I lost everything Sugni, everything that matters, my peace of mind, my sanity. It was hell just to breath." He said closing his eyes. When he opened his eyes he found her sitting next to him, her small hands atop his, turning his palm up he grasped hers.

"What happend?" She whispered

He wanted the door to swing open, to tell let it all out, but he also knew that after all the stress she was under today , he wanted to be the last person to add more to it.

"Sugni, please I don't think" he started; he saw a look of hurt cross her face at his refusal.

"Huh" She cut him off, "it's ok," she said her smile did not reach her eyes. " I think I'll go start dinner, you want anything special?" she asked as she began to get up.

Keeping a hold on her hand he tugged her down next to hm.

"Sugni, listen" she was staring at her lap, blinking her eyes rapidly fighting of tears. That looked tugged at him. "Sugni...look at me please...please" he asked softly. He waited until she complied.

"Look today was a long day, and the last thing you need right now is another heavy story." She began to protest, but he cut her off by raising his hand asking her to wait, ..."I promise you I will tell you I will tell you and soon ok, but can you just give me a little more time please?" He pleaded. Some how it was important to him that she understood.

She smiled, that one hundred watt smile that he did not see since morning, another thing he missed he realized. "You're right this has been a long day and you know what all I want to do is kick back and think of nothing for a while, and when ever your are ready I am here! " she said "...Ohh I know for dinner I'll make some fish and chips...nothing puts me a a better mood that a hot batch of fish and chips ...hain naa!" She seemed to be back to her bubbly self. She got up but stopped when she realized his hand was still grasping hers.

"Ummm I kinda need my hand" She said her face the shade of a tomato.. Still looking at her he released her hand fully, where she hurried into the kitchen. Vickram chuckled to himself. He got up intending to follw her into the kitchen, got half way across the hall when his brain kicked in. What the hell was he doing? He asked himself...stopping cold. "Get a grip on your self Vickram" he told himself...He had to get out of here and fast!

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