Ohhh ! pardon for such a late comment ! 😒 you do know I love reading the chapters ❤️
Just finished reading 5 & 6 --
and got to say, very very nicee ! you tied in parts of the story smoothly together ^-^ Love how Vickram and Sugni seem natural in their communication with each other, even nonverbally.
and this worse problem that has came up, very interesting - Jwala being the villain here - and Vickram holding backk on opening doors to his past... it's soo great though its like he has found a purpose to his life right now, to protect Sugni. I loved how he turned out to be Guardian Angel 😳 that she asked for some kind of help and he suddenly showed up ^-^ heheh.
love how he's fighting the feeling and feel as though he should nip that feelings by the bud... it seems like he is mostly wanting to do that for Sugni ? cause she would be hurt in the end ? (assuming he feels he deserves his own hurt). but that relationship is slowly growing, and naturally. ^-^
emotional chapters too. and love how he is willing though unwillingly in a way, to go back to his past to help Sugni being the only reason it seems. he truly does want to help her, again looking out for others more than himself. ever.
and gosh that Jwala makes me mad too 😡 youve made him a very villain-y villain. great ! and cant help rooting for Vickram to say hello to his power again as a Thakur to help Sugni ^-^ ... this is one of the things, I think, that people should do with their power if they have it
I love Vickram and Sugni's interaction too !
the chapters are fantastical ^-^
