FF LEARNING TO BREATH..updated pg 25 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Vinnie u r an awesome writer
I just loved the way you didnt drag the whole cop story and Vikram speaks of power and his ability to tackle any situation to protect Sugni was beautifully described...just loved how he handled the whole thing.
Keep going... its a fabulous story.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Another great chapter,Vinnie.👏

Excellent and outstanding writing,keep going.👍🏼
Please don't keep us waiting too long for next chapter😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: ash_arti

Vinnie u r an awesome writer
I just loved the way you didnt drag the whole cop story and Vikram speaks of power and his ability to tackle any situation to protect Sugni was beautifully described...just loved how he handled the whole thing.
Keep going... its a fabulous story.



Thank you so much Aarthi for your support and kind words. Yes he dose have a no nonsense attitude and he saw it for what it was and was not going to pretend otherwise. Stay tuned ...I hope you enjoy the rest as well!
Edited by Vinnie79 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: widdy

Another great chapter,Vinnie.👏

Excellent and outstanding writing,keep going.👍🏼
Please don't keep us waiting too long for next chapter😉



Thank you Widdy! I have decided I will do updates on Tuesdays and Fridays! So please Keep reading and commenting.!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Ohhh ! pardon for such a late comment ! 😒 you do know I love reading the chapters ❤️

Just finished reading 5 & 6 --

and got to say, very very nicee ! you tied in parts of the story smoothly together ^-^ Love how Vickram and Sugni seem natural in their communication with each other, even nonverbally.

and this worse problem that has came up, very interesting - Jwala being the villain here - and Vickram holding backk on opening doors to his past... it's soo great though its like he has found a purpose to his life right now, to protect Sugni. I loved how he turned out to be Guardian Angel 😳 that she asked for some kind of help and he suddenly showed up ^-^ heheh.

love how he's fighting the feeling and feel as though he should nip that feelings by the bud... it seems like he is mostly wanting to do that for Sugni ? cause she would be hurt in the end ? (assuming he feels he deserves his own hurt). but that relationship is slowly growing, and naturally. ^-^

emotional chapters too. and love how he is willing though unwillingly in a way, to go back to his past to help Sugni being the only reason it seems. he truly does want to help her, again looking out for others more than himself. ever.

and gosh that Jwala makes me mad too 😡 youve made him a very villain-y villain. great ! and cant help rooting for Vickram to say hello to his power again as a Thakur to help Sugni ^-^ ... this is one of the things, I think, that people should do with their power if they have it

I love Vickram and Sugni's interaction too !

the chapters are fantastical ^-^
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Another great chapter (7), Vinnie ! ^-^ and to me, you describe their nonverbal behavior very well, ^-^

even though he was trying to keep his identity anonymous, but I too loved how his confidence self came back when he turned the tables on the police officer 😲 well handled, me agree ^-^

and nice to point out how even if nobody else noticed, but Sugni realized that he is not just a guard... there is more to him.

loved how he asked her to wait and he will tell her for sure soon... but apart from that, didn't want to release this heavy story on her when she already been through a lot lately. and how he's not sure if he wants the door to remain closed or close again. he wants to let it out, aww 😒 and he's going to try to answer her questions as honestly as he could.

it must be so hard for him. emotion overload. 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Octopie,
Thank you ...I always love reading your reviews and your thoughts on each chapter. Yes Right now Vickram is going through an emotional battle with his feelings being awakened after so long, he will put up a fight with himself. 😭

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hehe, well I love reading your chapters ! and I think that's really great you're going through his emotional battle, Vinnie ! it's something very humanly real - and I really can sympathize with the way you're describing him. 😒 it sounds like he doesn't have too much trust in himself either (which I think was mentioned in a chapter). it also could be easy to just let his emotions of the moment control his actions (like those feelings for Sugni), but he's controlling them. that's great and also sad at the same time, he's being conscientious and careful but it's also slapping him in the face, that he shouldn't do any thing of the sort, not even hold her hand. again, this shows another aspect of him being a veryy good guy. 😳 but ridden with guilt and no self-love. 😒
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Vinnie
Another amazing chapter.Love the internal battle between wanting help but hating that parts of past have to be revealed to do so.
Also love the way he is unwittingly falling for her and pulling back when he realises what is happening
Cannot wait for the nex installment
Thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Great job Vinnie. I enjoyed it. I felt as though as I was reading a Mills & Boons romance novel. Keep going girl!!!

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