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My name is Student

@-Soleil-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Hey, I'm Monika, almost new to the forum. 😃

After watching BD, discussing episodes, reading wonderful pieces of writings, my inner writer has woken up once again. I used to write on another couple, but then left, but Mehbeer has persuaded me once again to write.

So this is my first attempt on them, look through it and please leave feedback, it would mean a lot. 😳 It is based on yesterday's precap, hope you like it.

x-x-x

Hurt much?

Ouch!

The only thing that came from her mouth. But...

Wasn't this needed? It was.

The same words she had told Abeer, were piercing her heart when interpreted by him.

Truth I would say.

Now, sitting at the corner in the room near the window, tears falling down, she recalled every single harsh word she voiced since they have met again. And then, she put herself on his shoes. Hurt much?

x-x-x

That is all! Thanks for reading! ^^

Love,

Monika

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TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

What the eff 😲

this ended even before it started 🤣 i am afraid to comment anything cause i fear my comment will become longer than the update 🤣

but it got the point across.

*rubs hands in glee* how i'd like a hurt meher. she deserves it after all the random curses she keeps throwing at him for no reason 😡

next time write a bit longer than the average comment atleast 🤣🤣🤣

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suma madhuri

@madhufx9...

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is very short , it will not suffice my hunger 😆

But baby , u r writing very well , should give big wala update next time .

And as for this piece , it's beautiful . Meher needs to taste her own medicine , nice idea .

Keep writing 😳

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My name is Student

@-Soleil-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: babydolll
Resss

Waiting you to unres! 😳

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My name is Student

@-Soleil-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ari--
What the eff 😲

this ended even before it started 🤣 i am afraid to comment anything cause i fear my comment will become longer than the update 🤣

but it got the point across.

*rubs hands in glee* how i'd like a hurt meher. she deserves it after all the random curses she keeps throwing at him for no reason 😡

next time write a bit longer than the average comment atleast 🤣🤣🤣

I knowww 🤣

Maybe it is longer, idk, hahahahah

Nahi bas, bechari, seh rahi hai aaj kal, hospital ke bed pe, rehnedo 😆

I will tryyy 😉

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My name is Student

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --fero--
Short but awesome one

Thank youu 🤗

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My name is Student

@-Soleil-

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ari--
that is better 🤣

I know I know 😆

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My name is Student

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: madhufx9...
This is very short , it will not suffice my hunger 😆
But baby , u r writing very well , should give big wala update next time .
And as for this piece , it's beautiful . Meher needs to taste her own medicine , nice idea .
Keep writing 😳

Haha sorry, next time pakka! 😃

Thank you so much for kind words! 🤗

Thank you 😃