Originally posted by: coldy07
I love your post and the relies posted here 😃
Coming to the show , yes I do agree with a few points mentioned here .
I'd like to point out that I loved how the past scenes were intricately woven into the present for eg . The violin scene , Shirt scene , Dal makhani scene . This way it didn't look forced, and I felt like I was watching some meticulously planned and crafted drama .
Also I'd like a little more insight on Meher's part of the story in the past. I feel it would be great if they narrate Abeer's story through his show , and some reaction from Meher to it , which would also progress the flashback story . 😳
As for the alimony and the divorce , I seriously hope the CVs have some nice realistic misunderstanding to show . Otherwise what normally happens is they keep saying X years back , I'll never forgive you for that , but the cause is often trivial . So yeah , hoping for the best . I don't want an out of the world reason , just some simple issue , like a difference of opinion which would pave the way for a divorce as that clash of opinion was something they could not live with at that point of time .
Now , I'd like to mention about how I love the little touches they add here and there . What I can recollect right now is how Abeer mentions that he got Meher's shoes from the pool . Like they didn't magically appear in the car 😆 . So I really liked how they got that there . Can't recollect more . But there have been instances where I've thought , yeah that was neat . Yes I'm silly :p
As for the lack of intensity , yes it is there . The comedy is of course always welcome. But being a human , it is impossible to be Unaffected . So a little bit of emotional scenes would do wonders I think .
The Abeer we saw in the first episode , minus the 'pulling herione forcibly ' can be shown to us at least in isolation . Aisa lage ki usse bhi farq padta hai.
Adding Pooja scenes like the Jagrata would also be in the TRP favour , IMO .
Tunnus track had it not been so abrupt would have done wonders . Still I think they are trying all resorts to pull in audience , so let them do their work . I hope for the best .
That's all for now I think . Keep writing more 👏
Thank you so much😊
Oh yeah, the writers are doing an awesome job, having the past scenes interspersed with the present. But I'd definitely like more of them. Not to the extent that it hinders the flow of present events, but maybe, just one flashback a week?😳 I love the thought they've put into the writing though- details like these enrich the storyline. Very commendable.
What you said in pink- WORD!!! I hope they have some solid, fleshed out back story for their separation- something not so simple, but complex, just as relationships are. Because most shows tantalize you with the promise of something great, but will fall short with the revelation. I hope this doesn't fall into that category.
Oh no, you're definitely not silly. These details make all the difference. And I notice that they shoot the episodes way ahead compared to other shows, perhaps even a week later. I think it helps them to be careful and avoid unwarranted errors.
I vote for comedy every time over unwarranted abuse of heroines. But yeah, some anger, without being physically abusive would be good. The Abeer of the initial episodes actually promised Meher that he'd wreak havoc in her life. Though he achieved it partly by relating their story on national TV, I am afraid he's gotten more mellow since then. Maybe a more...vicious, if not malicious Abeer would be okay?
You know, I laughed aloud when they played the Jagraata music, because I was like- here it comes😆 They're trying to pull in diverse audiences for a good reason, and I hope they're successful.
Lovely post- you said it all so well⭐️👏
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