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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: naina927
At last u updated...!!! I was waiting for the update eagerly. Wanted to know what's coming up next; though I knew what was coming up next... But still... You see my excitement...😉 Fabulous update ishana...👏 I really loved it... Abeer cares way too much for meher and meher was actually worried it... Think how much will abeer love and pamper meher and of course his little one... Thinking of meher, hats off to the girl... Really...!!! 👏 She went through so much in life and that too at such a young age. All a woman wants is a child, her child and how painful it would have been for her to know that she will never have a child of her own... A child who will be a miniature of her... Meher's fears were obvious and beautifully expressed. She once lost her baby and this time she will be extra cautious... She will also be over protective of that little bundle of joy, I think. Losing her baby once will now have make her a bit scared too... And on top of that, there is abeer who will go crazy thinking he will be a dad... But definitely he will get to know the truth.. He will get to know that meher carried their baby once and she sadly lost it... It will be way too much for abeer and will blame himself for what happened... That's just my prediction though... 😳 Aww... Meher needs abeer...!!! Soo cute... Waiting for next...!!! Try to update soon this time... Please...

Thank you Naina, your comments are always a treat to look forward too!

I was working on an OS that's why the update was late :(

I think Abeer will be one of the cutest Dad's on television ! I hope we get to see him as a Dad in this show when Meher and him patch-up (which seems like a very longgg journey from now😕)

I can't wait till there is more romance in the show. Besides Abeer's nautanki of course 😆

Losing the baby made her weak, but this time it will only make her stronger. And she'll have her Abeer with her too!😃

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: EasternViolet.
Meher's flashback made me feel very bad for her. She went through a lot and I can understand why she doesn't want to anymore. Glad she's chosen to tell abeer. He needs to know.

Can't wait for the next update x

Abeer is her biggest support system and as he said in the precap - she needs him <3

Will update soon

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: beauty14
Really interesting concept!👍🏼
I like the direction of this story.

They're together now however past memories don't fade away. But I like how you're bringing that in and rectifying what's been done in the past. Like another chance to correct past mistakes. Very cleverly done. :D

I'm really curious as to how you'll continue the story. Now with a baby in the picture, how will they keep their relationship hidden? Meher will tell her mother right!? Ughh..So many questions and no answers. We need the next update pronto!😆

Please do continue soon. And do PM me as well.

Thank you😃

I was very wary of posting this story because I know a lot of people are strictly against the pregnancy before marriage thing - especially in Indian show.

I wish to keep the memories they have but add some new ones to it in this story!

It takes atleast 3-4 months for baby to show, so Meher has some time to decide what she's going to do 😉

P.S. Do you speak Italian?

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

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I was apprehensive to start this one. because baby tracks/stories are so not my thing. and i really feel they take away the intensity from a love story. but still i gave this a try and boy am i glad. 👏

I love the concept on the whole. Especially the part where they are back together. office romance and adorable abeer *woot woot* .

Chapter 1.

Ahhh what a sexy start to a story. You start a story with so much hotness and chemistry and you know you've hooked your audience/readers 😉

These two are so freaking adorable together. You could just eat em up 😆 and they make me blush ☺️

I really really liked the way you bought the divorce thing with the ex-wife word. Like every time it happens on the show abeers eyes go moist and he loses his head. but now he smirks and smiles and finally those wounds are kind of healing. plus one for that

I loved the comfort level you showed with them eating together. its the simple things that mean the most. they've done this before too, but in ur version there was no bitterness and it was so sweet to imagine mehbeer smiling and eating together and just being themselves. made me smile :)

Mehers reasons for keeping the relationship secret seem legit. but i also love how abeer isnt scared of commitment and how eager he is to make her his wife again. You showed their contrasting personalities yet their love for each other with this 👏

Abeers something else can satisfy my hunger made me ☺️ 🤣

You write such hot stuff yet its nowhere near crass. thats a feat in itself 😆 Good job with that.

And i know whats coming next. but i'll go read the next chapter to make sure and know how meher reacts 🤣

P.s would love to know how they got back together, did they talk it over or was it a moment of ummm 😉 hope you are planning to make that part of the story 😆

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

CHAPTER 2

This one was even better than the previous. 👏 I loved the concerned doting abeer. and to see that he is going back to his former self thats beautiful. 😳

So what happened to mehers baby in the past? abeer left her and didnt even know about the baby. feel so bad for the both of them, 😭 And really sad for meher who didnt have him by her side when she needed him most.

I loved how you combined both the parts of the story, its like healing past with the present.

Awww 25 missed calls from abeer aint he a cutie 😆

The last part though when she said "I need you" for meher to accept that and call him. Wow ❤️ that was major. gave me so many mehbeer feels imagining a helpless meher calling for him ❤️ and i can imagine abeer immediately running to her. 😆

Nice concept. Even better execution. Loving it so far. Update soon. :)

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TeriKhamoshiyan

@TeriKhamoshiyan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Ishana-

Thank you😃

I was very wary of posting this story because I know a lot of people are strictly against the pregnancy before marriage thing - especially in Indian show.

I wish to keep the memories they have but add some new ones to it in this story!

It takes atleast 3-4 months for baby to show, so Meher has some time to decide what she's going to do 😉

P.S. Do you speak Italian?

I see where you're coming from, almost like one of those 'taboo' topics, but you've executed it well. :D

Yes I'm sure we'd all love to see that! Lol I didn't even think of that.😆

But I hope she confides in her mother, I love the relationship they share.

Uhh kinda. If you count my broken Italian of about 4ish years,than sure I do.🤣

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Wrackspurt

@Wrackspurt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Wow wow...i just read this one..loved the concept...and how the story is progressing...well with meher again pregnant with abeer's child...so she will tell abeer about this i guess...wondering what will be their next step ...

Do pm when u update next :)

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-farzana

@-farzana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Finally caught up on both parts.

My heart goes out to Meher, feel so bad for her. When she needed Abeer the most he wasn't there for her. I'm hoping this time round she does manage to tell Abeer that she's pregnant and he will be there for her this time.

Looking forward to next update.

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Eshita

@tikit

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Loved both parts it was beautiful. Office romance, mehbeer are cool and soon to be parents awesome. Hope marriage is on the cards again. Lovely. Do pm me the next update.

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: madhufx9...
Just read both the parts Ishana
Very beautifully written , is am loving it .

I felt bad for Meher , u penned very clearly her emotions .

Happy that she planned to share news with Abeer

Continue soon.

Thanks 😃

I'm so glad you liked it!

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