Os/Drabble-White Chocolate - Page 2

Originally posted by: ...Shefa...

Awesome os 👏

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

wooo Ari , u r on a roll girl

Awesome 👏

Loved it , loved ur version of scene.

Keep writing baby

Originally posted by: meerab...

U r welcum dear and yeah right I m meerab 😳

Originally posted by: mahikmh

Omg omg omg omg aap aa gaye. aap aaye bahar aayi 🤣🤣
chocolate can solve everything ... right? 😉 we know that best 😉
I like Abeer naughty side as well, those lut gayi wale dialogues 🤣 abeer is the most adorable naughty guy around ☺️ i love him ❤️

And my partner you are an awesome writer, keep writing I love it... tum to bologee hi 😆but i am really happy you read and commented :-* thank you nahi boloongi 🤣

Originally posted by: naina927

Haha... What ending...!!! How stupid of me, beginning my comment with the ending... But what to do I really liked it...!!! Aww... Abeer is so sweet... He is letting meher keep his shirt... lol... Seriously Cmon he thought she looked good in HIS shirt... good going huh... And those melodramatic abla naari lines abeer said... ROFL.. I really loved this light hearted os... Keep writing more n more...

Originally posted by: --Ari--

😆 You made me smile. Thank you so much. I am glad you liked it. And the shirt she really did look good in 😉 and abeer is just plain adorable...writing about him imagining his expressions is so much fun...😆 cant help myself 😛

Originally posted by: lasyap3

This was really good ! I thoroughly loved reading it !

Chocolates are not my cup of tea ! But yes , I know what effect does this chocolate have on people...

My friends literally fight for chocolates daily ! 😆