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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lads

hey dear*hugs*...ds ws a blockbuster hitbuster suuper se uuperbuster mind blaster SS update...ur dialogue cme out as of d professnalss n i doubt if evn dy cud ds mch...u r a bbbeautifuuul writer...phir sey kaha na dt u r nt a guud writer dn thappad padegi *thappad padegi Henry style* haha...
plsss plsss cntinue sooon sooon👍🏼



Hey😃🤗
Aww 😳 That is so sweet of you😳😃 It really means a lot!!😳
Thank you so much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NOTE

Hello everyone😃
Thank you so much to all those who read, liked and commented the previous chapter🤗. I am overwhelmed with the response😳😃

For PMs please send me a friend request on ArVi_SS😛
For now I am only PMing the people who liked the first chapter and those who asked me to PM them, but for the future please send me a buddy on ArVi_SS😳
(Thank you Mansi for the idea😃)

Edited by Avina-Ashvik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you everyone who read, liked and commented on the last chapter.😃

Without further ado, here is the next one😃


CHAPTER 2

6 MONTHS LATER

Purvi got up in the morning. She felt stiff and uncomfortable. She realised that she had fallen asleep at the foot of the bed due to which she was very uncomfortable. As she stood up she realised she had clutched something in her hand as if her life depended on it. It was Arjun's photo. She recalled talking to his photo at night, crying her heart out, convincing him to come back. She missed him. She needed him. She wanted him. She loved him. Oh how she wanted to hug him, to listen to his voice. She yearned to hear him call her all those special names he had for her, the ones that would make her weak in her knees. Yes. Arjun had left. Leaving her all alone. However, she knew if anyone was responsible for this, then it was her. This thought once again brought tears to her eyes.

Purvi got up and went to get dressed. In the shower as well, Purvi cried her eyes out,she missed him a lot which brought out all those feelings she was experiencing. Oh how she regretted ever telling Arjun to get married to Ovi. How could she ever do that? She claimed to love him more than anyone and anything and yet she caused him the most pain. Oh the irony of life. Her conversation with Arjun, his pain when he spoke to her that night, made her realise on what mistake she was going to make. If she could not live without him for a few months, how could she expect him to live without her for the rest of his life and too with a woman he did not love? Moreover, give the rights he had reserved for her to someone else? HOW? How could she do that?

As she got dressed; wearing a dull coloured churidaar, as there was no happiness in her life, what was the need to wear bright colours; she looked at herself in the mirror. The old Purvi, could no longer be seen. All she saw was a dead Purvi. One who had forgotten how to smile, one whose eyes were ever downcast, sad, full of grief and swollen due to all the crying. She had lost quite a lot of weight as well due to lack of eating which was because she had lost her appetite.

She combed her hair, made a side parting which made her miss Arjun more as she recalled how he used to remove her fringes that came on to her face and tucked them behind her ear, always planting a forehead kiss after that which would make her blush. Tears once more made way to her beautiful black eyes which he would gaze in with so much love that it would overwhelm her. She reached for the silver tin on the dressing and opened it. With a small movement from her finger took what was in it and applied it on her forehead. Yes she was married. Purvi was a married woman. More tears rolled down her cheeks; which would always be blushing with a slight pink hue when he came closer to her and spoke to her the feelings in his heart; as she wore her mangalsutra, another symbol of her marriage. She then went in to the past, remembering how she became her married woman, how her life changed drastically.

Manzilein ruswaa hain

The destinations are upset

Khoya hai raasta

The road is lost

Aaye le jaaye itni si iltajaa

May it come and take this small request of mine

Yeh meri zamaanat hai

This shall be my release

Tu meri amaanat hai... Aaa...

You are my fidelity

Mujhko iraade de

Give me resolutions

Kasamein de, vaade de

Give me promises and vows

Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de

Give support to the signs of my prayers

Dil ko thikaane de

Give the heart a place to live

Naye bahaane de

Give me new reasons

Khaabon ki baarishon ko mausam ke paimaane de

Give the rainfall of my dreams, a goblet of the season

Apne karam ki kara adaayein

Show me your benevolent deeds

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Throw a gaze in this direction also

Sunn raha hai na tu

Are you listening or not?

Ro rahi hoon main

I am crying

Sun raha hai na tu

Are you listening or not?

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Why am I crying?

Ra ra...

Waqt bhi theharaa hai

The time is also still

Kaise kyun yeh hua

How did this happen

Kaash tu aise aaye jaise koi dua

May you come like a blessing

Tu rooh ki rahat hai

You are the peace for my soul

Tu meri ibaadat hai...

You are my prayer

Apne karam ki kara adaayein

Show me your benevolent deeds

Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

Throw a gaze in this direction also

Sunn raha hai na tu

Are you listening or not?

Ro rahi hoon main

I am crying

Sun raha hai na tu

Are you listening or not?

Kyun ro rahi hoon main

Why am I crying?

FLASHBACK

When Purvi reached home, the night of her wedding, she was welcomed with questions from everyone. Archana, Manav, Sulochana, all asked her questions while Ovi, Sachin, Savita and DK waited for her waited for her answers.

"I will answer all your questions," came a voice from behind her, the voice she recognised too well. Her heart skipped a beat listening to him. She turned back to look at him. There was rage in his eyes, anger that she had never seen before and pain. A lot of pain. Due to her. Tears stung her eyes when she saw him in that state.

"Ask me Archana aunty, Manav uncle ask me whatever it is," spoke Arjun with a very firm tone.

"Why did you call us here Arjun?" Asked Manav. "And why are you both in this state? You are supposed to get married today aren't you? Then? What is going on?"

"Purvi wants me to get married to Ovi, Manav uncle," Arjun began. Ignoring everyone's confused and shocked glances, he continued, "Should I continue Purvi and Ovi? Or would you like to do the honours?" Purvi's heart broke hearing him speak like that. On seeing no response from them but their heads down in shame, he continued, "yes! Purvi wants me to get married to Ovi Archana aunty, because of you. She wants to sacrifice our love for your sake, so that Ovi accepts you as her mother and she convinces everyone else to do so as well. Basically, Purvi is selling me off to Ovi for your sake!"

More tears made way down Purvi's cheeks especially when she heard his last words. She never expected this reaction from him. She knew he was angry, but she had no idea how much hurt and pain her deal caused him.

Everyone was shaken. Ovi tried defending herself by going over to Manav and speaking to him, "Baba, I love Arjun a lot. I cannot live without him. That is why; I had no option but to do this. I love him a lot Baba..." BAMM!! Went a slap across her face. Her cheeks were reddened and tears fell from her eyes. She looked up in shock to see Manav had raised his hand on her. He slapped her once more.

"I am ashamed of you Ovi! How could you do that? You know that Arjun does NOT love you, he NEVER HAS and NEVER WILL. Then why did you do such a thing? How could you even think of it? You do know that Arjun loves Purvi, he can give up his life for Purvi and he already proven that! Can you not see that Ovi? And you made a deal with Purvi regarding Archana? What a despicable act! How could you do that?! Ovi you have ashamed me today! You proved that my upbringing has failed! You proved me a FAILURE as a father!! You proved me a failure!!" Saying this Manav broke down.

Savita rushed to console him while Ovi stood there deeply ashamed her head down tears flowing from her eyes. Archana was about to go to him but was forced back due to Savita's glare. Listening to all this had shocked Archana to the core. She walked over to Purvi and SMACK!! More tears came out of Purvi's eyes. "Why did you do this Purvi?" She held Purvi by her shoulders, shaking her while asking her that. "Why Purvi? Why did you all this? What if Arjun had agreed to this STUPID DEAL of yours? 3 lives would have been ruined Purvi? Did you not claim to LOVE Arjun? Then how could you do such a thing?"

"Aai, I did all this for you. I could not see you unhappy; your whole family was against you. I have seen you suffer for these 18 years aai. I have seen you cry yourself to sleep every night for the last 18 years because you were separated from baba, your daughters, your family. And I tried every way possible to stop this divorce from happening. But nothing worked. You and baba were determined to separate and I could not see that. Especially after I saw how your hopes increased on reuniting with your family when baba came back after 18 years. Aai I had to do that. I had no option aai." Purvi cried her heart out. Archana pulled her in to a hug and cried along with her daughter.

On the other hand, Manav was shocked and confused hearing Purvi's words. And he voiced his confusion. "How can this be true? Archana was it not you who sent me the divorce papers to Canada? Then why would you want to reunite with me? What are you saying Purvi? How can all this be true..."


Phew!! Hope it was long enough to make up for the delay. Really sorry for not posting it for so long😔 I will try being more regular in my updates😛
Apologies for any grammatical mistakes, I am not a very good writer, so please correct me if I am wrong:)
Please hit the like button and please do comment:)
Thank you for reading:)

Edit:Once again a special shout out to Mansi: Thank you 🤗

Next Chapter:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101464700

Edited by Avina-Ashvik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Omggg Dil Chahta Hai Zyada!!! 😛
LOL Just Kidding! Needed to get my revenge and I got it! 😎

Now onto my comment:

Smartie first of all I just wanna say that this was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!! Like I cannot even express how fabulous this was! ❤️ Like I already told you, it made me cry because of how detailed you are! It's was like TV in my head literally! I could just see the flashback and Purvi in her dull colored churidaar and it just got me so emotional!

As far as your writing goes, like I tell you every time, you improve each time you update. I've read your OS, and now this SS and you have improved heaps and bounds and I'm so proud of you!

Great, great, great job!!

Keep giving this fab updates! I love them! <3

And omg I always see the S/O after I'm done commenting so I run back jaldi se! ☺️ And like I always say: it's all you! I just get that V.I.P. feelings whenever you show them to me to read! Thanks for letting me do that! 🤗
Edited by -Mansi.- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Mansi.-

Omggg Dil Chahta Hai Zyada!!! 😛 HAHAHA😆

LOL Just Kidding! Needed to get my revenge and I got it! 😎
Ab dekhna tum main kya karti hoon😈

Now onto my comment:

Smartie first of all I just wanna say that this was A.M.A.Z.I.N.G!! Like I cannot even express how fabulous this was! ❤️ Like I already told you, it made me cry because of how detailed you are! It's was like TV in my head literally! I could just see the flashback and Purvi in her dull colored churidaar and it just got me so emotional!
Thank you so much Mansi😳 This really means A LOT!! Especially if you feel the emotions after you have already read it, thank you so much😃

As far as your writing goes, like I tell you every time, you improve each time you update. I've read your OS, and now this SS and you have improved heaps and bounds and I'm so proud of you!
Once again thank you so much.😳😃

Great, great, great job!!
Thank you😳 (Kuch zyada nahin ho raha hai😳 Am getting really senti😳)


Keep giving this fab updates! I love them! <3
😳😃

And omg I always see the S/O after I'm done commenting so I run back jaldi se! ☺️ And like I always say: it's all you! I just get that V.I.P. feelings whenever you show them to me to read! Thanks for letting me do that! 🤗
Thank you for doing it and helping me and encouraging me😳🤗🤗



And thank you for always giving such awesome comments😛


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Originally posted by: Avina-Ashvik



And thank you for always giving such awesome comments😛


Edited by -Mansi.- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by Avina-Ashvik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
sara
first of all thnx alot for the pm.
coming to the ss
i always hav this bad feeling that arjun listened to purvi and married ovi. always felt like changing the whole track which happened after that. now that nach baliye 6 is over and pavitra rishta is becumin worse day by day, iam counting on ur ss to stay connected wid them.
till now i just loved evrything about ur ff. ur writting style is fab.
hope to see nxt update very soon
i hope ur ss becomes superb
ALL THE BEST
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
ATTENTION ALL READERS!
I have made an account for the purposes of the SS only called ArVi_SS. I will still continue with my normal account (Avina-Ashvik), but PMs every time I update will be send with the ArVi_SS account. If you would like to receieve a PM, simply "like" this post, and you will be added to the PM list! Below are the people who have been sent a friend request:

Bluems,
jeemanrocks,
Per357,
lovelyprincess1,
amu_mannu,
diana72,
geetrana45,
asharithvik,
bitasta,
*Maleena*,
Lads,
hangok,
monakhan.,
crazygirl4arvi,
FlawlessAshvik,
-Mansi.-,
-LiveLaughLove-
ashvikluverrr,
asmi3893,
kandykandy
sheenamathew93
logambika
shagufta2211

Please do not like this post if you are already on the list!

Thank you Mansi😳🤗 for the idea

Edited by ArVi_SS - 11 years ago
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Awesome update. I always wanted arjun to stand up for himself and not just accept Purvi's demands. Really looking forward to where this story goes.

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