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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: FlawlessAshvik

Loved it Sara <3
You write so well :O
Amazing!



Thank you so much Arohi😳😃
I am glad you liked it, really means a lot😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Lads

Firstly sry fr late.. Huge hugss my dear:*:*..lv lv lv ur write ups..i realy njy readng ur write ups a lottt..:*pehle d nach reviews whch xpresd each n evry step lift mvemnt crazines masti beauty love n al dt whch ws in evry AshVikian's zubaan n dt u turnd dm into words xpresng vrrry bbbeautifully.. N dn d OS whch ws sooo lvng romantc bit whch xactly ws our ArVi once..u refreshd our mann by writng sch bbbeautiful ArVi OS.. N nw ds SS..ds s js a entirely a dfrnt 1 a v dfrnt thought.. U r an immensely grwng bbeautiful writer..:*lv u dear..KEEP GNG KEEP ROCKNG:* GOD BLESS U:*... N nw abt d update.. It ws sooo sooo emotional..evry line ws literaly gng lyk scenes infrnt of my eyes as Mannu said...i ws lyk feelng d pain of Arjuns by hs wrds..n suddnly d line came "PURVI MARRIED" i ws lyk seriously my mouth opnd widely in shock..i ws totaly cnfusd to whm she gt married..i ws deeply in it readng emotionaly scrolng dwn n sdnly realisd dt its ovr;(..pls update soon dear dyng here.. Hahaha..sry fr d zyaada hi long cmnt..meri bas chale tho mey likhthi hi jaavu..lv u dear:*.. N bdw njyd d convo of u n Mannu it ws quite fun:D:D



It is ok about the late reply😳
🤗🤗 More to you😳
Thank you so much😳 It really means a lot😳 I am really happy that you enjoyed and felt what I wrote in the write ups of NB😳.
The OS was my first completed piece of writing that I posted😳 So the appreciation really means a lot😳
And the SS. This was actually supposed to be an OS as well, but the ideas kept on forming in my head and then it would have been too long to be called an OS😆
Thank you so much for all the wishes😳 May God bless you too.
I am glad you could visualise the scene and feel the pain of the characters especially Arjun😳
Hehe😳 You are actually one of the few who commented on Purvi being married😆 Yes she is married, let's see whom she is married to😉😆
I am really enjoying reading your reactions while you read the story😳
I will try updating soon, actually a bit busy this week, I hope I get the time to update😳
Hehe😳 Thanks
Thank you for giving such an awesome comment Lads😳😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Another awesome update sara 👏👏 Fab writing !!!
the 6 months leap and the way u wrote of purvi missing arjun terribly and regretting her mistake made me emotional ..was imagining the scene and loved it 😭😃
The way arjun said to everyone how purvi and ovi dealed and stood firm on his decision 👍🏼 always wanted to see this in the serial and still wished that he had said no to purvi's deal
Armaan reaction now this what a parent would react and not just stand and accept and move ahead glad manav knocked some sense into his laadli beti's head
agerrly waiting for the next update !!! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: sheenamathew93

Another awesome update sara 👏👏 Fab writing !!!

the 6 months leap and the way u wrote of purvi missing arjun terribly and regretting her mistake made me emotional ..was imagining the scene and loved it 😭😃
The way arjun said to everyone how purvi and ovi dealed and stood firm on his decision 👍🏼 always wanted to see this in the serial and still wished that he had said no to purvi's deal
Armaan reaction now this what a parent would react and not just stand and accept and move ahead glad manav knocked some sense into his laadli beti's head
agerrly waiting for the next update !!! update soon



Thank you Sheena😳
I always wanted to see this in PR, but after the 6 month leap there, Purvi did not even realise her mistake🤢.
I am glad you liked the way I am showing the characters😳 And I hope you like the what I have planned😳😃
I will try updating soon, but not sure when is soon😳
Once again, thank you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
wooww super liked.it's fully opposite to original na.so we ll c #Arvi proper life na😉.😃.waiting for next part.n thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56


Thank you😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: srijasrij

wooww super liked.it's fully opposite to original na.so we ll c #Arvi proper life na😉.😃.waiting for next part.n thanks for the PM.



Thank you😳
I will try😛
No problem about the PM😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
I AM BACK!!! *Singing Kofee with Karan song*😆 (This was especially for you Mansi😉😆)

Thank you so much everyone for the amazing response. I really hope I live up to the expectations you people have😳

Once again, a special shout out to Mansi, thank you so much for everything🤗

Now without further ado, here goes:

Recap: Manav, Archana and the rest come to know that Ovi proposed a deal to Purvi who accepted and tried forcing Arjun to get married to Ovi, who refused completely. Ovi and Purvi get slapped by Manav and Archana respectively. Manav overhears Purvi saying why she did that. Manav gets confused and asks Archana about her sending the divorce papers to him in Canada. Now:


Chapter 3

"It is all true baba," came a voice from behind. Everyone turned to see Teju holding some papers in her hand. "Whatever Purvi said is true baba. Aai has loved us and missed us a lot in the last 18 years. But your question is valid whether it was aai who sent the divorce papers. Baba, aai did not send the divorce papers. It was aaji who did all this. It was aaji who forged aai's signatures and using Sachin dada's help sent you those papers."

Manav was shocked hearing that. "Sachin did you do all this?" Manav asked Sachin who was nervous and fumbling. "Sachin I asked you something. Answer me now!! Did you do this?" Manav screamed with anger at Sachin on getting no response from him. "Y.yy..yes baba.." Sachin stammered. SMACK! He received a tight slap from Manav. "How could you do this? Today both my children FAILED me as a father! I am ashamed of you both! Aai how could you do this? You know how much I love Archana, you saw how much I suffered when I was away from her, even then you did all this? Why aai? Why? Was your hatred for Archana more than your love for your son?" Manav was heartbroken. His family had betrayed him. Savita felt guilty seeing her son in this condition. And so did Sachin, Ovi and Teju. Purvi was glad that the truth was finally out, but she was still upset due to her love being really upset with her, but she had done such a deed. How could she expect him to be fine with everything?

Manav walked over to Archana and apologised to her for misunderstanding and not trusting her and her love for him and their kids. He apologised to her for not being able to raise their kids well enough as the result was in front of them. Archana too asks for his forgiveness for the mistakes she made in the past and they hug.

"Teju how did you learn the truth?" asked Manav. There was a tension filled silence in the room, which was broken by Teju.

"Baba, aai, I overheard Sachchu dada and aaji speaking to one another. Actually, I always had a doubt in mind regarding the whole divorce thing. When I came to Mumbai I lived with aai, Sulo aaji and Purvi, so I knew them and understood them really well. My doubt grew even more so after we all started living in one house. Aai's behaviour towards us was always full of love but she tried hiding it. So I spoke to Arjun because no one else would have understood me at that time due to all the tension at home. Arjun too felt the same. He also knew that something was wrong and so he helped me. I found out the truth today accidentally and I called him up, so he asked me to get the divorce papers with aaji's signatures and come and meet you all here." Narrated Teju.

Purvi was shocked. Arjun, her Arjun tried reuniting her parents and what did she do in return? How could she even do that? Fresh tears that formed in her eyes streamed down her cheeks. She looked up at Arjun who was looking at her. Her tear filled eyes looked in to his pain filled angry ones. He looked away after a while in anger.

Manav walks over to Arjun and apologises to him for the way he behaved with him in the past couple of months and thanked him for re-uniting him with his wife. Archana walked over to Purvi and, "See Purvi. You wanted to make a deal out of his love and see what he did for your love. What you did was very wrong Purvi and you should realise that. When someone loves you, you should not take advantage of their love. If you don't love someone then you should not use them and take their love as their weakness. But you love Arjun, don't you Purvi? Then how could you take advantage of Arjun's love for you. What if he had agreed to your demands Purvi? You would be responsible for the ruin of 3 lives Purvi. I hope you have realised your mistake." She concluded.

In the meanwhile, DK went to Arjun, hugged him and said. "I am proud of you my son. Today if your mother had been here, she would have been proud of you." Arjun hugged his dad tightly while tears rolled down his eyes. DK tried consoling him as he understood his son very well. "Why dad? Why does this always happen to me? The person I love the most always leaves me alone? First mum and now Purvi?" Arjun cried in his dad's embrace. He was a broken man. His love had deceived him.

The guilt was killing Purvi. She felt guilty for hurting the one man who actually loved her for who she was, who accepted her with her flaws, who loved her deeply and stood by her in her trying times. How could she do that? She wanted to apologise, say sorry for all the pain she gave him in the last couple of hours, pain that was enough to last him a very long time. But she could not. She lacked the courage. She tried meeting his eye but he was not even looking at her. She had never seen him in that state and it killed her. How she wished she could go back in time and undo whatever she did. Alas she could not! She felt worse after she overheard him speaking to DK and all she wanted was to go to him and hug him so tight that it would squeeze all his pain away. But she could not.

She looked at him, hoping that he would look in her direction and he did. Seeing the pain in his eyes, she felt very guilty, but she was going through the same emotional turmoil. She wanted to tell him that she wanted to speak to him alone, but how could she without anyone knowing? While thinking of this, she was playing with her fingers and realised that she had her phone in her hand. She texted him saying that she needed to speak to him alone.

Once she pressed the send button, she looked at him, waiting to see his reaction. The moment his phone buzzed, she saw confusion on his face, maybe he wondered who texted him. He slowly took his phone from his sherwani pocket and looked at it. She for the first time could not read the expression on his face. He sighed and then looked at her, she pleaded with her eyes and his gaze softened. That was when she realised how much her man loves her. However angry he was with her, he would always give her a chance.

"I want to speak to Purvi alone," Arjun announced to everyone. "Can I please?"

Everyone agreed and began leaving the room. Archana went to Purvi and gave her shoulder a tight squeeze. While DK went to Arjun and asked him to be calm, patient and not let his anger take over the rest of his emotions. After everyone left, there was an awkward silence in the room, a silence that never existed between them.

To break the ice, Arjun knowing that he was being nasty, spoke, "Is there anything remaining to say Purvi?"

For the nth time that day, tears welled up in her eyes. She looked at him with so much pain that it hurt him more that he was the cause of her tears. He wanted to kiss her tears away, but how could he, when she had done the same to him?



Phew!! The end of this chapter. I know it was shorter than the other 2, and I am sorry about that, I will try updating the next one sooner😛

Now I was requested to give a precap, I can't really do that but I will ask you guys a question to ponder over,

What is it that Purvi wants to tell Arjun? Will Arjun listen to her?

To find out what happens next, wait for the next chapter😉😛


Apologies for any grammatical mistakes, I am not a very good writer, so please correct me if I am wrong😊
Please hit the like button and please do comment, they really encourage me to write more and better😊😛
Thank you for reading😳😃


Next Chapter: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/101638873


Edited by Avina-Ashvik - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
*Thud* as I fall to the floor after reading this update.
Smartie! 🤗🤗
Double hugs for the double amazing update! Like why so perfect girl?

First of all the I AM BACK part! Haha, I LOVED IT!!! 🤣 Like everytime I watch Koffee With Karan I think of you and this song and it's just like: 😆 all the time! Arey, kitni baar maine ka hai, thank you MAAT bol! Saab log meri "Thank you Mansi" padte thak jayenge! 😆😉 But really, it's not a big deal at all! All I do is send out the PM, you write the entire update and I know how hard that is trying to keep everyone hooked on your writing and I think you do a fabulous job at it each time!

I love how you showed Arjun and his love, how he tried to get Archana-Manav together was just adorable, Purvi's reaction honestly brought tears to my eyes and so did Arjun being a "broken man" ,also how well everything was portrayed was like TV in my head.

You have kind of recreated this whole serial and I love how you did it! You showed how deep love is, and what one can do in love or for the person that they love.

Ayeee and you're an amazing writer!! Never wanna see that again! 😉

Keep writing fab like this, and I will always read it!


Edited by -Mansi.- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: -Mansi.-

*Thud* as I fall to the floor after reading this update.

Smartie! 🤗🤗
Double hugs for the double amazing update! Like why so perfect girl?

First of all the I AM BACK part! Haha, I LOVED IT!!! 🤣 Like everytime I watch Koffee With Karan I think of you and this song and it's just like: 😆 all the time! Arey, kitni baar maine ka hai, thank you MAAT bol! Saab log meri "Thank you Mansi" padte thak jayenge! 😆😉 But really, it's not a big deal at all! All I do is send out the PM, you write the entire update and I know how hard that is trying to keep everyone hooked on your writing and I think you do a fabulous job at it each time!

I love how you showed Arjun and his love, how he tried to get Archana-Manav together was just adorable, Purvi's reaction honestly brought tears to my eyes and so did Arjun being a "broken man" ,also how well everything was portrayed was like TV in my head.

You have kind of recreated this whole serial and I love how you did it! You showed how deep love is, and what one can do in love or for the person that they love.

Ayeee and you're an amazing writer!! Never wanna see that again! 😉

Keep writing fab like this, and I will always read it!




Aww Mansi, thank you so much for such a sweet comment😳😃 A return hug to you🤗
HAHAHA. The I am back bit, reminds me of you😛😆 I just had to use it😆
It is a must and I am sure koi nahin thakega if they know how much you help😉😃

Honestly, whenever I watch the old ArVi scenes, it just makes me realise the depth of Arjun's love. He really loves her so much such that he is ready to do anything for her (which can be stupid at times, like the way the show went. However, they just changed his character there, because the real Arjun would never have done that.) and forgives her for all her mistakes. So I felt that I had to show it here.

Once again thank you so much😳😃 for such sweet, encouraging and supportive comments😃


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