ArVi SS Jaane Kyun Note Page 32 - Page 5

both of the updates were nice.update soon👏

Thanks for an awesome update...

wow sara !!!!!!!

Firstly sry fr late.. Huge hugss my dear:*:*..lv lv lv ur write ups..i realy njy readng ur write ups a lottt..:*pehle d nach reviews whch xpresd each n evry step lift mvemnt crazines masti beauty love n al dt whch ws in evry AshVikian's zubaan n dt u turnd dm into words xpresng vrrry bbbeautifully.. N dn d OS whch ws sooo lvng romantc bit whch xactly ws our ArVi once..u refreshd our mann by writng sch bbbeautiful ArVi OS.. N nw ds SS..ds s js a entirely a dfrnt 1 a v dfrnt thought.. U r an immensely grwng bbeautiful writer..:*lv u dear..KEEP GNG KEEP ROCKNG:* GOD BLESS U:*... N nw abt d update.. It ws sooo sooo emotional..evry line ws literaly gng lyk scenes infrnt of my eyes as Mannu said...i ws lyk feelng d pain of Arjuns by hs wrds..n suddnly d line came "PURVI MARRIED" i ws lyk seriously my mouth opnd widely in shock..i ws totaly cnfusd to whm she gt married..i ws deeply in it readng emotionaly scrolng dwn n sdnly realisd dt its ovr;(..pls update soon dear dyng here.. Hahaha..sry fr d zyaada hi long cmnt..meri bas chale tho mey likhthi hi jaavu..lv u dear:*.. N bdw njyd d convo of u n Mannu it ws quite fun:D:D

Originally posted by: asmi3893

sara
first of all thnx alot for the pm.
coming to the ss
i always hav this bad feeling that arjun listened to purvi and married ovi. always felt like changing the whole track which happened after that. now that nach baliye 6 is over and pavitra rishta is becumin worse day by day, iam counting on ur ss to stay connected wid them.
till now i just loved evrything about ur ff. ur writting style is fab.
hope to see nxt update very soon
i hope ur ss becomes superb
ALL THE BEST

Hey Asmi😛
I hated the entire track🤢
Aww so sweet of you😳 I just hope I can live up to your expectations🤔
Thank you for all the wishes and compliments😳 They really mean a lot😊
My writing is very much inspired from all the stories I have read on IF on a few fave couples of mine😳
Once again thank you😃

Originally posted by: Bluems

Awesome update. I always wanted arjun to stand up for himself and not just accept Purvi's demands. Really looking forward to where this story goes.

Thank you😳 Same here😛
I hope you like it and I live up to your expectations😳

Originally posted by: -purvideshmukh-

both of the updates were nice.update soon👏

Thank you😳 I will try😛

Originally posted by: bitasta

Thanks for an awesome update...

Your 2nd chapter was a treat to read especially for these reasons:

1) I always wanted Arjun to be strong and not falter during crucial times : Not something we witnessed in the original PR. He failed to open his mouth about Purvi and himself during his forced engagement. And secondly he faltered beyond redemption by giving in to Purvi's most inane and imbecile demand. But the Arjun in your FF is the same Arjun we fell in love at the first place--- strong, determined without no nonsense attitude. Thank's for retaining that essence of Arjun.

2) In the original PR we have never seen Purvi regretting for what she had made Arjun go through. We get to see it in your FF. Thanks

3) The thing that I liked the most in this FF is Manav and Archan's reaction towards their daughters doings. Manav slapping Ovi for the deal she put and Archana slapping Purvi for giving in to Ovi's demands--- the right thing they should have done as parents. Instead we saw Manav thanking Purvi for giving Arjun to Ovi ( hey Manav he is not Ovi's Ken Doll) and even Archana accept the whole thing without a mum. Had PR CVs gone your way of writing the story, neither would most of us lose touch with ARVI, nor would PR be the convoluted mess it is today...

So thanks for the wonderful FF once again.

Thank you so much 😳
1.I hated it when they butchered Arjun's character by letting him give in to Purvi's stupid demands🤢 I am glad you like the Arjun here and hope you will continue to like him😳

2. Why Oh Why did Purvi not regret what she did? I always wonder. This was actually very inspired by reading a few FFs here😳 and the fact that I hated why Purvi never realised her mistake.

3. When I watched the episode where Arjun and Ovi go to the wedding venue (which was not until recently, like a couple of weeks back) I was shocked with ArMaan's reaction. Especially Manav. What do they think Arjun is, a toy? Whom Purvi gave away to Ovi due to her insistence and Manav tells Purvi thank you instead of knocking some sense in to his laadli daughter's head?!😲😡

Thank you for an a amazing comment and I really hope you like the story in the future as well😳

Originally posted by: crazygirl4arvi

wow sara !!!!!!!

again a nice update 👍🏼

i now wish pr bhi aisayich hothi tho kithni achi hothi...

i luvd it ❤️

plzz ,if u dont mind ek precap bhi dey diya karo... 4 more suspense 😉

purvi always makes me cry with her, its her aadath,😛

and purvi did the same here tooo...

plzzz do update fast

i'm eagerly waiting

Thank you so much Praseetha😳
It really means a lot😳
Hehe, I will try giving a precap next update onwards😳
I hope I can update soon, kind of busy this week
Once again thank you😛