ll Dear Arjun ll A Short Story ll Pt. 9 Pg. 23

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: arvifan1
woww lovely update dear! So teju knows abt the baby..yayy! 😳...eagerly waitng 4 the next update..plz update soon 😊

Thanks for the comment - this is really sweet! Glad you liked it 😃

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Sheetal, loved the update :)

I've to say I like this O better than the TV one (as do many others I believe). He is not delusional.

So Teju knows...hmm, wondering if Ovi will find out before Purvi...will she have that baby bump questions (like in the show) as well...I wonder 🤔 When will Arjun know, hope ArVi are alone when he does find out.

I cannot tell you how much I liked this bit --

Why couldn't I just go back to the days where Arjun was the boss and I was the employee and we always bickered and fought? Why couldn't it still be those times where we first confessed our love and became so shy around each other? Why couldn't we go back to the days where Arjun would live in the chawl and I would cook for him and bring him food – just like a sweet and simple married couple? Why couldn't this all just be one bad dream and in reality I hadn't accepted Ovi's deal?

Can she take us along too, as we go back to those days of glory...

Looking forward to the next 😊

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Ruchika Sen

@Ruchikaarvilove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

"I used the wall as a support system when I felt my knees going weak and my body just losing balance. A kick in my stomach brought me back to my senses. I let go of one of the hands I had on the picture and put it on my stomach trying to reassure myself that I still had a part of Arjun with me. I quickly wiped my tears as my baby boy started to kick again. "

I loved this part! 😃 " A part of Arjun " Really awesome!

Please do continue soon... 😊 I wish Purvi did the same as she did in this FF 😭 But its sad dat its just a FF 😭 🤢

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Luv-Arvi-Pari

@Luv-Arvi-Pari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Hey sheetal my intelligent girl luv ur update...U have shown purvis emotion,arjun caring nature so beautifully...Jst luv it..Plz update soon..Pm me also if u can..May allah bless u

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kandykandy

@kandykandy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Wow another wonderful update dear. Loved it alot. 😊

Tnx for the pm.

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Peach - Awh, I'm glad you liked it 😊 I had to add in the part about Teju because there just had to be someone else that would support Purvi - it would irk me if there wasn't. Arjun has to find out, but I'm just like Purvi - I don't know how to put it :/ 😆 😳 Thank you for your lovely comment :D

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Aw, Ruchi! Really glad you liked it :D It's hard to write this story - I have to do it when I'm sad or in a bad mood 😛 So I can only hope that my descriptions of Purvi's pain turn out okay :/ Aw, that really means a lot to me - thank you so much! <3

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: Luv-Arvi-Pari
Hey sheetal my intelligent girl luv ur update...U have shown purvis emotion,arjun caring nature so beautifully...Jst luv it..Plz update soon..Pm me also if u can..May allah bless u

Thank you so much Meghna! I will try to! and be sure to like my 2nd post on the 1st page for PM's so I don't forget (: Thank you for your blessings!

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: kandykandy
Wow another wonderful update dear. Loved it alot. 😊

Tnx for the pm.

Thank you! Glad you liked it! You're always welcome 😊

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diana72

@diana72

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

hi juz lov ur updates...its so exciting to read n brings bck memories of arjun n purvi. i luv ur style of writin. sorry for the late late n extremely late response ...had a bunch of stuff i had to clear first. please do pm m whn u updatd n tks for a great job ... 👏

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