ll Dear Arjun ll A Short Story ll Pt. 9 Pg. 23 - Page 7

RES :DDD

this is such a perfect chapter!

im editing as i go, but omg this part

"No Purvi. I am DONE with listening to you,
being played by you, and being used by you! I
want answers and I want them now," Arjun said
in a stern voice. There it was – my much wanted
angry Arjun.


so happy to see khadoosloskar :p perfect visual in my mind!!

next up, pg 10!

Originally posted by: arvifan1

lovely update dear 😳 want to knw what happens when arjun cmes to knw abt the truth...plz do update soon..eagerly waitng 😊

Originally posted by: Ashvikfan

Omg ! Omg ! Sheetu my sweetheart thanks a ton dear wat a wonderful update :) ahh at last purvi wants to be with arjun yayy and im loving onir here he is so sweet not like in show ! Errg.. Ovi only one word to her " spoiled brat " and plz plz make purvi to tel the truth about their baby to arjun and update soon dear ! Love u alot :-)

Originally posted by: rithika2012

i just love this onir alot.. he is too good..

so i think arjun guessed that its his baby and we got to see angry AK again..

lovely update pls do update again...

Originally posted by: AshaNegiFan

I like this Onir, than the one in show!! 😆

You write emotions so clearly that as a reader you can fell them..

Lovely update...do update soon..😃

Yippy.. M do happy tht I gota c a glimpse of Khadoos Kirloskar.. Daahhh.. How much I miss dis spark.. 😭 Tnx :) Sheetal fr again introducing D Real Arjun.. I loved Arvi's convo.. Purvi alas blurtd dat she's 7months pregnant n Arjun.. Hs first question.. Did u kno Onir alrdy lik phle se.. N thn whn Purvi said.. Nah.. I dint.. N I ws lik Bingo.. Arjun's fear tht purvi might b involved wid Onir whn ws wid him.. Obv he dint doubt hr,he trusts hr buh thn wht else ge cud decipher aftr seein hr married to some othr guy n also pregnant !!
M glad,Arjun bursted out on purvi.. He showed hs pain,showed how hurt he is.. Much needed thing !

Arjun's holdin purvi's wrist.. Damn.. They dint hug :( n as olways,to ruin dem.. Dat brat arrived n as expected blasted widout any complete knowledge.. Lik Arjun Evn I feel lik blowin some sense into hr gud fr nothin Brains !! I dun gt one thng.. How dis ovi gal expects Arjun to accept hr aftr wht she did to him n his love.. Hah :/
Arjun agn tryn to mk hr understn buh bein Ovi.. She wud olways b bsy showin hr tantrums.. Y dint he slap hr actually????
purvi shouted on Ovi.. Really????? Pla someone pinch me.. Dat surely ws a treat.. Here she knows how to speak fr herself n hr love.. Gosh.. I so so loved it!

I really liked purvi's eagerness to know,if Arjun too thinks abt hr lik she thinks abt him n whn those words came out frm Ovi's mouth.. It soothed Purvi :D dat surely ws a moment !

Arvi's heartwrenching Eyelock.. Gosh,we dun evn gt to c it now :'(

Oka.. I again loved purvi's concern abt whthr its Arjun's baby wid Ovi o not.. Atleast,here she's insecure n evn showin it!!
Lik othrs,Evn I love dis Onir due to obv reasons.. Wish cvs hv hd used him d same way!
I really enjoy how he mocks purvi.. Indirectly/directly,olways tellin hr tht she'd done a blunder..

Yippyyy.. Purvi wants to b Arjun's gal again but it aint dat easy now
Thank god.. Onir is jus bein a friend here..

M really lovin how ur moulding d story in ur own way..
Eager to c whts nxt.. To c Arjun's reaction.. To c dat fiery Arvi agn !

Update soon n tnx fr d pm:)

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Yippy.. M do happy tht I gota c a glimpse of Khadoos Kirloskar.. Daahhh.. How much I miss dis spark.. 😭 Tnx :) Sheetal fr again introducing D Real Arjun.. I loved Arvi's convo.. Purvi alas blurtd dat she's 7months pregnant n Arjun.. Hs first question.. Did u kno Onir alrdy lik phle se.. N thn whn Purvi said.. Nah.. I dint.. N I ws lik Bingo.. Arjun's fear tht purvi might b involved wid Onir whn ws wid him.. Obv he dint doubt hr,he trusts hr buh thn wht else ge cud decipher aftr seein hr married to some othr guy n also pregnant !!
M glad,Arjun bursted out on purvi.. He showed hs pain,showed how hurt he is.. Much needed thing !

Arjun's holdin purvi's wrist.. Damn.. They dint hug :( n as olways,to ruin dem.. Dat brat arrived n as expected blasted widout any complete knowledge.. Lik Arjun Evn I feel lik blowin some sense into hr gud fr nothin Brains !! I dun gt one thng.. How dis ovi gal expects Arjun to accept hr aftr wht she did to him n his love.. Hah :/
Arjun agn tryn to mk hr understn buh bein Ovi.. She wud olways b bsy showin hr tantrums.. Y dint he slap hr actually????
purvi shouted on Ovi.. Really????? Pla someone pinch me.. Dat surely ws a treat.. Here she knows how to speak fr herself n hr love.. Gosh.. I so so loved it!

I really liked purvi's eagerness to know,if Arjun too thinks abt hr lik she thinks abt him n whn those words came out frm Ovi's mouth.. It soothed Purvi :D dat surely ws a moment !

Arvi's heartwrenching Eyelock.. Gosh,we dun evn gt to c it now :'(

Oka.. I again loved purvi's concern abt whthr its Arjun's baby wid Ovi o not.. Atleast,here she's insecure n evn showin it!!
Lik othrs,Evn I love dis Onir due to obv reasons.. Wish cvs hv hd used him d same way!
I really enjoy how he mocks purvi.. Indirectly/directly,olways tellin hr tht she'd done a blunder..

Yippyyy.. Purvi wants to b Arjun's gal again but it aint dat easy now
Thank god.. Onir is jus bein a friend here..

M really lovin how ur moulding d story in ur own way..
Eager to c whts nxt.. To c Arjun's reaction.. To c dat fiery Arvi agn !

Update soon n tnx fr d pm:)

OMG!!!Sheetu loved the update..

Originally posted by: bonibright

OMG!!!Sheetu loved the update..

This should have been shown in PR too..

And wait did Purvi call him ARU??????

OMG!!!!!Yayyy!!!!!!RD hugs for u,for this..😳 😆

Once again a lovely update.😊 It was a treat to read. Eargerly waiting for the next part.