ll Dear Arjun ll A Short Story ll Pt. 9 Pg. 23 - Page 11

Originally posted by: eshaaax3.

RES- i will edit, dont kill me lmao!

OMG Sheets...this part was awesome..!!
OMG OMG OMG finally arjun knows the truth...and awh loved the way she said dat..u remember our wedding night..uhh I was blushing...😆

and ahh I LOVED this part..sheets..ur a brilliant writer...👏👏
I was blushing while reading dat part where they were talking abt their first night...!
he finally knows the truth...and he also is angry on her..this is what our arjun and purvi wud ve done..ohh I miss dem soo much..😭
ahh soo khadoos arjun was back...yayy*happy dance*
and I loved EVERYTHING abt this part..!
so happy with ur update..i really wanted all this baby track to go this way..(Cv's u really shud read this SS..duh..!)
now m eager to know what happens next..what will arjun do..?? how will ArVi win their fight against the world..what will happen to double O-O..??
ugh cant wait for next part...
plz update soon...!!
and Thankyou for updating..!!

sheetal this part was amazing 😳 woww...so finally arjun knows the truth! Yayyy..m so happy 😊...m very eager to know what happens next 😊 Plz update soon, just cant wait to read the next part 😳

Originally posted by: arvifan1

sheetal this part was amazing 😳 woww...so finally arjun knows the truth! Yayyy..m so happy 😊...m very eager to know what happens next 😊 Plz update soon, just cant wait to read the next part 😳

hey sheets after your every update i am becoming a big fan of yours...

Hmm.. So m Crying 😭 😭
I so much wanted c dis instead of dat thappad scene

Leme start wid d beggining.. Ovi blamin purvi n purvi all quiet.. Expected buh here she knows,thra no use of tryn to mk Ovi understn 😆 😆

OMG.. Did I hear guilt in ovi's eyes???? Lik she realises wht hs she done to hrself n Arvi???? She's accepting dat she was WRONG n Is WRONG???? Woahhh !

Haha.. Here it ws Teju who stole Ovi's valuables instead of purvi stealin dat stupid alcohol bottle.. Dis Change.. M lovin it !

Oh.. So evn Archana spoke up fr Purvi fr d first time.. A Dream Come True.. 😃 😃

Onir of ur ff.. Earns my respect n lil bit of love too..

Whn he said.. Purvi,R u mad??? Dat guy who took bullet fr u,ruind his life fr u.. He wudnt come!!!???
I literally Felt lik Run n hug OniR 😳

N as he said.. Arjun came !

N now knows dat he's d FATHER of PURVI's BABY.. N also, dat onir n purvi r jus Friends..

I obv loved dis scene d most.. D excitement in Arjun's eyes n voice.. I cud visualise it all..
Thank God.. He Showed dat He's Hurt n feels Betrayed.. !

Whn he said.. It wudnt hv hd happend if Purvi hvnt hd made him a Prize..
I love u fr dis Sheetal..

I want to say many things buh unable to figure out d words..
looks lik aftr writin fr some gud 4-5 mins.. M goin speechless 😆😆
Completely moved by dis no.! Ur a Proficient writer.. Jus few words n its all done..


Hah.. List of my best writers on IF surely increased today..

Dis FF is upteenth times better thn whts runnin on tv.. EKTA, u dhid read it n c wea u lacking..
If,PR wud hv gone dis way.. M sure.. TRP's wud hv been in ur pocket !

Waitin fr d nxt update.. Plz update soon..
N Wana c more of Arjun now :)

OMG!!!!! Sheetal!!!!😉

Luv dis updt sheetal..I can feel purvi's pain,guilt sadly which is missing in pr's purvi...Nw i want to see arjun action wht he will do next..Plz updt soon..Plz pm me whn u updt..Luv meghna