When Two Worlds Collide//Arvi FF//Ch. 5, Pg. 14 - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
OMG loved this one..
m loving this sarcastic,bubbly and yeah SASSY Purvi 😆
really liked ovi and purvi's part..ahh for once she's willing to help Purvi..great..she'll(we) know abt A.Kirlosker and his gang soon..😉


Purvi was screaming over seeing
a cockroach in the bathroom,
ahh now this purvi is just like our Sheetal..😆

woah she went to Darbhanga all by herself to return arjun's jacket which she forgot in her locker..🤣🤣
ahh m also loving this mysterious arjun.wanna know more abt him...!!
woahhh Arjun SHIRTLESS..man..
ahh zoya and sunny in their gang..great..!!
wow..purvi is friends with arjun, teju ,sunny and zoya..guess she'll be joining their gang soon..!!
and ahh arjun and his gang attending Purvi's college fest..eagerly waiting for the next part..!!
Very well written sheetal..u r a great writer..love how u describe ,how purvi feels and how she studies things going around her..!
thankyou for this chapter..
cant wait foe next one..plz updte soon..!!
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Sheetal👏

I love it... Do update soon.
Loving the way you have presented our lover boy Arjun
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Thank you Jenelle - glad you liked it, means a lot coming from such a great writer like yourself! 😛 😳 I'll definitely try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: arjunpurvixo

Thank you Jenelle - glad you liked it, means a lot coming from such a great writer like yourself! 😛 😳 I'll definitely try to update soon 😊


😊
😳
You making me blush
I'm not a great writer. I'm still struggling with a chapter for my Os.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Awesome update ...😊 loved it please update it soon😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Sheetal...you have a real nice natural writing style...think Peach commented on it earlier.

Teju's character is coming along nicely...second-in-command types.

Arjun is ...well...Arjun
Liking this Purvi ? Trying to be good...but not too much...drawn to the mysterious bad boy...

My favorite? The police officer blessed with your sass...😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Totally lovin this FF sheetal 😃 Update soon plejjj :P
Edited by Huma- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sheenamathew93

Awesome update ...😊 loved it please update it soon😉

I'll try my best 😃 Thanks dear for the feedback 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Pancham101

Sheetal...you have a real nice natural writing style...think Peach commented on it earlier.


Teju's character is coming along nicely...second-in-command types.

Arjun is ...well...Arjun
Liking this Purvi ? Trying to be good...but not too much...drawn to the mysterious bad boy...

My favorite? The police officer blessed with your sass...😃

Wow, thank you so much Su! Your comments are such a treat to read 😳

I've always imagined Teju as this mysterious, independent, in-charge kind of girl... wanted to bring that in here 😊

I too am liking this Purvi because I'll make sure she'll never sacrifice -.-

and LOL the police officer 😆
Edited by arjunpurvixo - 12 years ago

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