When Two Worlds Collide//Arvi FF//Ch. 5, Pg. 14

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr
Yayy Sheetal another FF...*excited*
Wow..loved the first part...!!
Arjun is so caring...Oh my..and hot too...😳😳
Purvi..lol she also dnt like this "extra sweetness" from O!
I am loving this story..its different...
and aww Arjun amd purvi on motor bike..😛😛
aha..first part was great...!!
eagerly waiting for next part...plz update soon..!!

Haha - I can't stop myself from writing 😛 Wow, really glad you liked it! :o LOL, I just realized how sassy I made Purvi after I published it 😆 Oh well... old Purvi is going to be back in this FF - not that crying, sacrificial Purvi 😛 and I just had to add in some Arvi cuteness in the first chapter 😉 and hmm... I'll probably update sometime this week! Updating Rose Garden on Wednesday 😛

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

@shredy & arvifan1 - Thank you guys so much for your comments! Really means a lot to me that you like it! Hope I could do this plot I have in my mind justice 😳

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Peaches 🤗

LOL! Well, glad he reminded you of something! I sent it to my best friend whom I actually wrote this for, she's not even Desi! 😆 And she said it reminded her of Step Up 2 😆

and yes... I mean with Arjun's gang ways I'm sure more things won't be forced upon her 😉

and LOL if I was gonna add Onir in the story, I had to add some comedy! 😆

and oh, she'll definitely have to owe some explanations in the next chapter or 2 😉

Aw, really? Thank you so much Peaches - your feedback is always a treat! Glad you like it! 🤗

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

My Eshuuu 🤗 I was waiting for you to unres 😛

LOL - like idk I'm trying to make him a gentle gunda, like do those even exist? LOOL.

But who said Onir has abs? 😉 Debating on whether to just make him someone random or to be on the football team lol - that'd correspond well with Purvi on dance :o

and awww, thanks Eshu - so glad you like it! Will update sometime this week!

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Pancham101

@Pancham101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

The lovable bad boy!

That is definitely the hook here, Sheetal. I ...like it!

Harlequinn written all over it...😃😳

So many movies coming to mind, Pardes, Josh, Lafangey Parindey...Amitabh movies...hmmm

I am looking forward to the development of Arjun...love the tenderness towards Purvi from the first instant and Purvi's attraction and jealousy...

Curious about Purvi and Onir and why he is the way he is...(not really😉, satisfied by the sketch 😃)

Waiting for more Purvi and Arjun scenes..go figure

And the little thing with mom...? Will that be something or that's just for comic relief???😃

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Sujata di! 🤗

LOL, GG - gentle gunda 😆

Awhh, people are getting reminded of so many different movies/characters - most I've never heard of, but still love it 😆 Haha yeah, there's definitely going to be more to Arjun 😉 I like making the focus on Purvi however, since we already know how much Arjun loves Purvi in the show 😛 and Onir is the typical college frat party boy - that's why he is what he is 😆 and lots of scenes are coming your way - especially in chapters 2-3 😊 and LOL I don't know which one to make the evil parent 😆

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Pancham101

@Pancham101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: arjunpurvixo
Sujata di! 🤗

LOL, GG - gentle gunda 😆

Awhh, people are getting reminded of so many different movies/characters - most I've never heard of, but still love it 😆 Haha yeah, there's definitely going to be more to Arjun 😉 I like making the focus on Purvi however, since we already know how much Arjun loves Purvi in the show 😛 and Onir is the typical college frat party boy - that's why he is what he is 😆 and lots of scenes are coming your way - especially in chapters 2-3 😊 and LOL I don't know which one to make the evil parent 😆

I just know its going to depend on who is on your s**t list that day...* Long suffering parental sigh*🤔

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Posted: 12 years ago

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omg wow sheetal that was just amazing lovedd loved it one of the best FF's ive read so far, you write so well. can't wait to read more do uppdate soon :D

keep up the good work

Edited by -ScarletRose- - 12 years ago

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Sheetal

@arjunpurvixo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: -ScarletRose-
reserved, im half way thru now :p

omg wow sheetal that was just amazing lovedd loved it one of the best FF's ive read so far, you write so well. can't wait to read more do uppdate soon :D

LOL sorry it's so long 😛 I've written an OS on Arvi as well here -

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3408484 😊

Hehe, I'm working on it! I have to finish part 2 of Rose Garden and then I'll work on this - I have so many ideas for it 😛

@Bold - Thank you so much, that is the sweetest thing! 😲

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