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rithika2012

@rithika2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

that was really an awesome update soumya... 👏👏👏
loved purvi's character and her entry was superb...😊😊 waiting for arjun's entry...
pls update soon and do pm me pls...😊

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achyutha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

soumya i always luv ur os yaar😛😛👏👏i should appreciate u for being a good writer ,nd intresting styart purvi deshmuk -the brave girl😛😛😛👏

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Latika Gurung

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

awww awesome start... the lines at the beginning r superb... waiting for arjun's entry...:):) do continue dear..

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sarun.love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

that was one heck of a good story maan!!! wah kya baat hai... i mean seeing purvi in a new was a very good idea... loved it and do continue!!

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Soumya

@Ceon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Hazaron khwaishen esi ki
har khwaish pe dam nikle,
Bahut nikle armaan...
Phir bhi kam nikle.

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Purvi: My self
Purvi Manav Desmukh
nd meet my bf...
Guy2: bbff...
Purvi: (wid naughty smile) best friend...
Ovi Yash Mallhotra!!!
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Ovi brust out in laugh. Purvi tk her books 4m Ovi nd...
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Purvi: (wid much attitude)Lets go babes... We hv no tym 2 waste.
De both grls walk away 2 nearby park nd brust out in laugh.
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Guy3: hai na ekdam komal kali...
Guy2: chipkali hai... chipkali hun
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Ovi: oh god..!! Purvi, ew r amezing Yr... Hw do ew manage??
Purvi: what..??
Ovi: yeh adaa, ye nazakat. Evr thng. Itni ban dhan ke ati hun, phir v koi meri tarf dekhta tak nahi. Likin sab toh tere naam par hi mar jate hain... Kaise karti hai yr ye sab.??
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Purvi: bas ho jata hai.. Aftrall m 1piece..(wink)
Ovi: ya ya i knw my miss world. Bt phir v kuch toh tips de...
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A black mercidise apears at de gate, nd slowly enters... All fellows wonder woh might be...
De mercidise stops in de mid...
Door opens and a guy jump out.
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He steps on de ground nd Purvi feels a sudden blow of wind on her face... Nd look back.
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Ovi: kya hua...
Purvi: nahi esa laga... Kuch ajeeb sa..
Ovi: hmmm... Lagta hai tera prince charming aagaya..
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De guy shown walking wid a book which moving on his fingure tip.
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Ovi: wese tere hisab se tera prince charming hoga kesa..
Purvi: kya bol rahi hai.. Chodna
Ovi: Are batana plz.. Plz plz plz
Purvi: Ok ok batati hun..
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Purvi: Sharukh jesi aankhen...
The guy tk of his sun glasses nd his eyes r shown... killer one...
Purvi: Ranbir jesa smile... jise dekhkar ladkian uff karke marjayen...
He smiles nd a bunch of grls fight wid eachother, dat 4 whom he smile..
Purvi: Aur jab wo chale, na dekhna wala v dekhta reh jaye...
De english lecture(female) passing.. Nd sudden her eyes fall on de guy.. Wonderlingly says..Wht a hunk??
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Purvi: aur uska nam koi chiku miku nahi balki koi dashing sa naam ho...
Ovi: Jaise..
Purvi: jaise jaise Ar..
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Suddenly a voice heared 4m back at de sm tym Purvi turns.
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Arjun dat guy stands in front her..
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Purvi: hain.. Konsa jun..
Arjun: nt Jun its Arjun, my name
Purvi: Ok sooo.
Arjun: m just asking ew whr z princpal's office..
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Purvi: toh ese bolona.. Nam batane ki kya jarurat hai. M nt intrested in ewr fellow name..
Arjun: hello miss..
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Purvi: my name z nt miss.. Its Purvi
Arjun: whtevr
Purvi: hw dey ew call me wht evr.. Ew..
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At de tym Ovi, who got impressed by Arjun at 1st intterputs nd..
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Ovi: kya purvi, bas kar.. New hai
Purvi: woh hum v hain...
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Ovi: tu v na.. (looks 2wards Arjun)Oh sorry, Arjun...
Arjun: Kilosker
Ovi: oh, nyc name... By de way my self Ovi Mallhotra.. I cn show ew office..
Arjun: ya plz...(throw a iritted look 2wards Purvi nd walk away)
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Purvi drag Ovi who z walking away wid Arjun..
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Purvi: tu iskeliye mujhe chodkar jayegi
Ovi: sasural nahi ja rahi hun... Bas office tak hi ja rahi hun.
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Purvi: jo v ho.. Tu uske saath kese ja sakti hai
Ovi: kyun nahi ja sakti..
Purvi: kya kyun... Tu.. Tu meri best frnd hai..
Ovi: wo toh sabko pata hai..
Purvi: or wo mera best enemy hai...
Ovi: wo tera enemy kese ho gaya.. Aur hua v to mera nahi hai..
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Purvi: haan kya.. Ja uske saath aur apni sakal mat dikhana... I hate you
Ovi: Bt I love you. Hai cmon yr.. Don't be so posessive. Main sirf uski help kar rahi hun..
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Purvi: help gayi tel bechne..
Ovi: plz yr. Don't be silly. Tere aur mere bich aaj tak koi aapaya hai... I'll just back...
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Purvi: haan haan.. ja ja.. Kal tak 'Yeh dosti hum nahi todenge', aur aaj ek ladka kya aagaya 'Hum aapke hain kaun'.. Hun
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A voice heared 4m back, Excuse me Nd Purvi turns..
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So guys, hwz it plz share u'r feedbacks.
If its lame don't bash on me Plz...

Edited by Soumya02 - 12 years ago

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Gaurav more

@Gauravc_More48

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Lajawab hain ji...
Wah ji Wah.
Soumya Behna Great Update yaar u didn't PM me awww:'(

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rithika2012

@rithika2012

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

lovely udate soumya...👏
👏the first meet of ARVI so hatke... and purvi's attitude and the way she talks woow i loved it...😳
OMG ovi and purvi are friends in your ff...😲
waiting to see who called purvi...
pls do continue soon... u made my weekend...😊😊 hope to get more arvi treats from you...😉😉
pls do pm me...

Edited by rithika2012 - 12 years ago