Arvi - Love A KISS OF POISONE|NEXT Part On pg 19|PM LATER - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
it was again an awesome update soumya... i loved it... 'tum bandaro k pass choor k jaati' was funny lol... now what will ArVi do is really going to be interesting... waiting for the next part... thanx for the PM and ya HAPPY DIWALI...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Soumya behna awesome part dear...
Heheheheheheh lov'd when all four of them sits on groung n keep a hand on their heads...
Purvi's question was funny Football male hain ya female...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Awsm updt Soumya. Feeling bad 4 Ovi. Woner why dat Man smile at Archu's pic. Love Purvi's qus lol 2 Ovi. It was hillareous 🤣 Updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
heyy soumya awesome update...
loved the team work all four siblings have done but all in vain..all because of their intelligent mom archana who knows how her childrens are..hehe that was so funny when they came to know that tje vase was not the original one..
and so so excited for next one...ArVi partners wow...so happy..thankyou for this lovely update.
and wish ur family a very happy Diwali..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
happy diwali soumya and yet again u give us ur best updates... keep it up!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Fantastic update Soumya.😊

I like the bonding between the brothers and sisters as well as with Archana and Manav. Ovi and Purvi's convo was funny and cute.

I like Purvi's expression when she was asked to be paired with Arjun.

Please update soon as there is suspense when comes to Ovi as she keeps Archana's picture while she's sleeping and also that guy who could be Ovi's father gave a smile when he saw the picture.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Superb update.👏..Loved it to the bits..Specially,when these 4 siblings come to know that the vase is not the original one and all their hard work (😉) went in vain..😛..And PURVI asking OVI,whether a football is male/female??🤣..Eager to know what happens when ARJUN n PURVI work together..Plz update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Sry guys 4 let. My health z nt doing nw dayz well, so...
Anywayz ewr updt z here.
Enjoy...

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Teacher instructed Arjun and Purvi to work together. Both r trying to protest bt he didn't let him 2 speak and dey hv 2 drop deir ideas of spare coz dey hv no options..
Dey started 2 work bt trying 2 avoid each other as much as possible. A microscope given 2 each pairs to examin blood cells.
Teacher also placed a microscope on Arjun nd Purvi's table. Both of dem move deir hands to tk dat at sm tym nd deir hand crashed.
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Dey both hv a eyelock 4 a little tym..
Arjun pulled the micrscope 2wards him and Purvi 2wards. Some tym dey go on lyk dis on deir 'Tu Tu Main Main' till teacher stop dem nd ask dem 2 work 2gether otherwise go out..
Dey say sorry to teacher and move deir heads to microscope and again dey crashed and a so called romantic eye lock happend..
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Purvi's phone's vibration break deir eyelock. She pick the phone and saw a msg 4m Ovi.
In dat c told her, c didn't go home nd waitng 4 her at cantine..
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Again Arjun and Purvi fought over de names of cells. And den he gv dem final warn & dey shut deir mouth up.
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(POV OF BOTH)
Purvi: Oh god kab mujhe yahan se or iss khadus se chutkara milega...
Arjun: Pak gaya hun main. Acha hota main yahan aaj aya hi nahi hota.
Purvi: aaj iss ghadi ko kya ho gaya hai... Chal kyun nahi rahi hai..
Arjun: Abe teri biwi ne tujhe khana nahi khilaya hai kya... Age badh mere bhai. Kab tak jhelu main iss jhali ko??
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Finaly the bell rang and both Arjun and Purvi relise a sigh of relife at de same tym nd look at each other.
Both moves deir faces in irritation.
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Arjun get away 1st followed by Purvi bt in mid her foot stucked in smthng nd she abt to fall bt Arjun turn nd catch her nd dey hv a eyelock. While other students r watching dem.
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One of dem said dey cn make such a gd pair agar wo ladhna band kare to..
Disz breaks deir eyelock nd dey realize abt de crowd behind dem. Both move away silently.
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Purvi reached at de cantin in the thought of wht hppnd recently. Deir Ovi z waiting for her.
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Deir sm guys also sat dey notice Purvi nd dey bet to propose her nd win her.
Ovi and Purvi both leave 4m deir by talking to each other. Mean while a hand cming wid rose in front of Purvi nd she stoped in wonder.
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Guy: tere bin na bhuk lagti haina pyas lagti haina neend ati hai na chain rehta hai...
Purvi: beta check karwale dengi virus v esa hi hota hai & she move away.
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Again she stops by another guy who falls on her feet nd begs her to become his grl frnd.
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Purvi: acha thik hai...
Guy: really??!! (Meri to lotri lag gayi)
Purvi: ya really. Well m ewr grlfrnd ryt?
Guy: ya
Purvi: so I am ewr grl frnd
Smart
Intelligent
Sweet
Talented
Excllent
Romantic
Isn't it??
In short I am your
S.I.S.T.E.R
hai na!!
Guy: wht sister!!
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Purvi: han matlab main apki behen aur aap mere bhayiya.
To bhayiya ji rakhsa bandhan ke din gift lekar jarur ana.
Main apka 5 rupey ki rakhi ke saath intezar karungi. Bye..
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Ovi and Purvi almost run away 4m deir bfr brust out in laugh; left behind a shocked full and a huge crowd rolling by holding deir stomach in laugh.
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Ovi and Purvi reached at parking area nd brust in laugh. Aftr sm tym dey finaly end it up...
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Ovi: Purvi, kahan se lati hai itne ideas
Purvi: dimag se
Ovi: aur dimag kahan se
Purvi: Oye ulluon ke sardar dimag late nahi hai, dimag hota hai. Bas use thik se chalana hota hai. Jo karpaya wo sikandar aur jo nahi wo bandar.
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Ovi: Oh acha to kal jo sawal pucha tha uska ans kya hai
Purvi: konsa sawal??
Ovi: wohi football mail hai ya female...
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Purvi: bara(12) ladke nickr pehenkar ek ke piche
bhagte
reheteee
hhhaaaiiinnn
(pause)
(pause)
(pause)
Ladki hogi
Ovi: ...awesome...
Purvi: always ;)
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Precap: Arjun get a hard slap from a guy.
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Don't 4get 2 hit like and do comment.
Edited by Soumya02 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
hey just simply loved ur ff and this update to the most... awesome work...👏
Really the abrevation of sister and the answer for football were just too much...😆
😆The way purvi handles everyone is just so refreshing...😃 And arvi cute scene was just so good...
loved it..😳 Precap is interesting pls update soon.. thanks for pm and do pm me again...😊
Hey itna small update se i am not satisfied so if u can pls give us more lengthy one and with all this masala as usual..😉. Pls do only if u can otherwise no need...
this small updates are making me more interested in your ff.. pls continue soon dont make us wait for long time...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Hhehehehehehehehehehehe cute n funny behna...

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