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achyutha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

😆😆😆wow ovi nd purvi r best frnds😳👏thanks for pm yaar👏

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Neha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

*edited*

Fantastic...can't wait for the next, Please update it as soon as possible...

Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 12 years ago

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sarun.love

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

that was one good story!!!!

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Wow Arjun's entry was cool and awesome.

I like both Arjun and Purvi's attitude towards each other. Hmmm not bad, for a change Ovi has became Purvi's friend ah. That's something unusual. Can't wait to find out who called Purvi. Looking forward for more interesting updates. So may weekend treats to watch for😛

Please continue soon.

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Soumya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

10qs guys. I didn't expect so much response. Bt it hppnd nd m vry happy.
I'll try 2 updt it soon.

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Soumya

@Ceon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Double Post.
Plz Ignore.

Edited by Soumya02 - 12 years ago

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Soumya

@Ceon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hum se dur jaoge kaise,
Dil se hume bhulaoge kaise...
Hum toh woh khusbu hain jo sansoon main baste hain,
Khud ki sansoon ko rok paoge kaise...
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Sameer!!
Purvi z shocked.
Sameer: Purvi!! Wht r u doing hr??
Purvi: i took admission hr...
Sameer: really, dats grt yr..
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Both Sameer nd Purvi chated till Ovi cm. She looked at Purvi nd Sameer nd wonder. Coz she nvr seen dis guy wid Purvi nd c also doesn't lyk 2 talk strangers... She slowly walk 2wards.
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Ovi: Hey Purvi..
(purvi looks away)
Ovi: cmon yr.. Main sirf uski help ki. Its gd manner...
Purvi: (turns) toh tu yeh kehna chahti hai ki main manner less hun..
Ovi: nahi yr. Maine esa kab kaha.. Tu sari bat apne upar kyun leti hai..
Purvi: tu dalti hai..
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Sameer looking deir cute battle nd try 2 control his laugh.
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Ovi: tujhe samjhna aur samjhana mere bas ki bat nahi...
Purvi: toh tera matlab main nasamajh hun...
Ovi: ab esa maine kab kaha
Purvi: par tera matlab toh yehi tha na
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Sameer: guys guys wht r u doing... Stop it yr.
Purvi: tu bich main mat pad..
Ovi: Dekh Purvi...
Purvi: dekh rahi hun
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Ovi: (looking upwards) hai bhagwan..
Purvi: yahan par bhagwan namka koi nahi hai..
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Ovi: bakwas band kar... Bhagwan se yaad aya, wo jo v karte hain ache ke liye karte hain. Hai na..
Purvi: han toh..
Ovi: dekh agar main nahi jati toh mujhe kaise pata chalta ki class suspend ho gaya hai...
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Purvi: ...jo v ho, tu uske saath kyun gayi... Aur ab ja uske pass (walks away)
Ovi: Purvi... Meri bat sun... Kya karon main iss ladki ka
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Sameer: kuch mat karo.. Kuch der baad uska ghussa apne aap thanda ho jayega..
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Ovi looked at him wid confusion. Sameer senses her confusion nd introduce him as Purvi's childhood frnd..
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(I want to state dat, Sameer z a Orphan here)
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Ovi nd Sameer mk handshake nd den Ovi went 2 find Purvi. Sameer z smiling by remembering Purvi's name.
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Ovi search Purvi in whole campus bt c cn't find her. Den c found her at exit, ready to leave.
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Ovi reached at nd try to mk Purvi understand. Bt c denies 2 listen her nd leave.
Ovi becm disappointed nd thinks...
Again i loss a chance to meet Aunti!!!
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Desmukh Residence
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Purvi arrives nd hear a loud noise coming out of hall. It annoyes her.
hw cn it possible in Aai's presence, she thinks her self nd ran out 2 figure out de matter.
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Teju nd Soham quarelled wid each other nd Sachin tring to stop dem bt cn't. Dey continuesly quarelled nd it mk a loud noise.
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Purvi reached deir nd cm 2 knw dat Archana z nt at home. She z going 2 market along wid Savita nd Sundari...
Manav in office nd Damoder at theater.
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Sachin nd Purvi try 2 calm dem down. In btwn dis Teju pushed Soham nd he ends up falling on ground.
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It fumes him nd ran 2wards her 2 punch her. Bt Teju moves a bit nd he punched a Bass instead of Teju by which the Bass breaks.
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Soham feels a clap on his back nd turns 2 see de claper. Its Purvi, standing wid crossing her hands on her chest.
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Soham: wht??
Purvi: Chuchaon ching chu chaon..
Soham: hain... Kya bak rahi hai..
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Purvi: Sudh hindi main, Sulochana Aaji ne saat saal pehele Aai ko uski bday pe ek Bass gift kiya tha jo Aai ka fav hai. Aur ab tak Aai ne usper ek daag tak ane nahi diya..
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Soham: toh..
Purvi: toh... 1min 55sec pehele apne usi bass ko tod diya... aur ab 1ghanta 55sec ke baad Aai hume todegi..
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Evry1 starts panick aftr hearing dis nd starts to run 2 find quick fix. Bt deir badlock it missing. Sachin suggest 2 buy a duplicate.
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Soham nd Sachin leave 2 buy a duplicate. Purvi nd Teju starts 2 clean up de hall whch z messed up.
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Soham nd Sachin bring a duplicate in a high cost. Sachin placed the Bass at place, while others r watching dem mindfully.
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Sachin
A voice heared 4m back nd all turned in sudden.
Its Archana.
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All r scared 2 see her nd try 2 cover up deir swet nd fear wid a fake smile. Bt Archana senses smthng wrong nd step 2wards dem wid a suspecious look.
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It mk all more scared nd dey tried to hide de bass by standing bfr it in a row.
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Archana: kya kar rahe the tum log??
Sachin: Safai
Purvi: Dhulai
Teju: Silai
Soham: Bhali
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Archana: kya.. Bhali!! Kiski
Soham: (pause) insab ki, mardad kar ke..
Archana: (wonder nd den looked at Teju)Tu kya kar rahi thi
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Teju: Silai
Archana: Silai!!! Aur tu.. Aur tum log ye piche kya chupa rahe ho..
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She steps 2wards nd all starts 2 panic mutely. She observs de bass whn Soham starts to leave slowly.
Soham...
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I hope u love it.
Plz lyk nd leave ewr feedbacks.
It'll encourage me.
And if ew want 2 be PMd, leave a note hr or add me 2 ur buddy list.

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

2day z no ArVi scean. Bt i'll try post deir next meet of clg in next updt soon. Till den plz bear me :)

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Abhijit

@Attitudeboy

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

10q u 4 disturbance, lol...
I luvd it. Vry funny yet vry intrstng.
Ovi z Purvi's bf & her intentions is suspicious. I bcm more confused whn c says 'i again loss a chance 2 meet auntie!!' M sure dis auntie z Archana. Strange..!!
Whats gong on ewr mind?? U gv us one by one shock which mk us to became anxious abt ur track.
I again lovd de part of Purvi, Teju, Soham nd Sachin's word. Safai, Dhuli, Silai nd Bhali.
It was hillarious & best work on it.
Awsm job. I lyk 2 disturb by ewr PM soon 4 next updt..lol

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Sushitarocks

@Sushitarocks

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Grt updt. I lvd ewr begining shayris and pics.
Cm 2 de post, it was awsm. Lyk i told ew bfr and i told ew once again ew r a vry skillfull writer. We always see smthng nw in ewr post. Continue it lyk dis.
Like Attitudeboy i also luvd 2 get disturbed by ewr pm...lol. So updt soon and don't 4get 2 PM me :)

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