Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3 - Page 10

Originally posted by: sweetone

great. in love with this FF. update ASAP please.

Originally posted by: Mi*chi*

Thanks for the lovely update. Beautifully written and it was a treat to read.

Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty

<font color="#660066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Thank you so much Jago...🤗

Purvi's pain was something which took me an eternity to pen down...:P
Glad you liked...I mean loved it! CV's ke justice ki to baat hi mat kar! They are degrading the story day by day! And you quite skillfully pin-pointed the lines which I absolutely love myself!
Ye sab apke ashirwadka hi to fal hai aaji...*Purvi style*...😉

PS-I was going to thank you for the lamba wala comment, but then I noticed more than half of the lines being mine! 😆</font>

Originally posted by: NadaCinta

OMG Sheena!

Each and every line carries a lot of weight as your creative mind has executed the story so beautifully. So much of thought and care has been put in this story. Arjun and Purvi's agony has been clearly depicted. Without me realising, there were tears in my eyes. I could feel it to the core.
Thank you so much Veno di...😳
I have tried to put myself in the place of characters and understand them. Glad the effort has paid off!

Sorry to repeat some of the lines from your story but just love them:

i) she joined the office only to find out that she was working for the Kirloskars;

ii) his eyes has been cold and ...distant;

iii) she knew he was hurt because of her but what worried her was if it was beyond repair;

iv) he was the last person on earth she would fall for as he was rude, arrogant and full of himself; and

v) when destiny plays the threads, human beings serve as mere puppet.

A few of them are my favourites as well, actually all of them!

The thing here is not just time would set everything but how hurt he is ONLY he knows and only time will be able to heal him (that is the period of Purvi being with him).
Both of them still have a long way to go before they are reunited, in Purvi's case the distance being longer!

Smart AK, as he knows Purvi in his fingertip👏. Reason being, if he would not have made her sign the contract, she would have tender in her resignation.
He has already witnessed her resigning too many times! And this time, he has followed 'Prevention is better than cure!' principle.

So our Ms Purvi did realize how badly she had betrayed Arjun (how I wish and hope that this will happen in PR, hmmm). The worst thing a person should do is betrayal of trust as that is the basic requirement in a relationship.
It has finally happened in PR and it goes on to show how late I update! Once the trust has been broken, it's too difficult to place the same trust in the person as you had once placed before!

She had gripped to those memories as that was the only thing that belongs to her and no one can take it away from her not now nor ever. 'Sometimes you will never know the true value of A MOMENT until it becomes A MEMORY.'

@Red...Beautiful lines!

I felt that from the way he had asked her to call him Sir was not because he wants to but he had to as it was to make her realize the distance she had created. I'm sure by seeing her getting hurt he will be a millions times more hurt than her.

Some distances need to be maintained. As much as he wants to go and hug her, the circumstance won't allow him to!

Finally, at least we get to see here that she could feel his pain and blames herself for inflicting it on him. Her heart was beating faster than she ever knew on how much she yearns to hug him and tell him how much he means to her.
Ahem, ahem! It's only her who can set the things straight! Arjun can only show her the destination, she would have to tread the miles by herself.

Although, she has decided to move on but that's not going to be an easy task for her especially when she will be seeing him day in day out. This will be her biggest test!

Let's see if she manages to stand up to what she claims! And thank you once again for the long comment...😳 Nothing pleases me more!

Originally posted by: gaurav_ankita08

Sheena i think u made an drastic FF where people like us would cry on each n every part...
@ Blue lines remind when archana went with ovi-teju-sachin,Purvi was crying so deep that no one was there too regain consicious,that pain was only lover's can get bcoz u have been left him/her forever...
@ Pink line Reminds that human be puppets when they are not in stable condition,they act like a robot which anyi says u do that work...
@ Brown lines reminds that she was loving him but she knowed that he is married to her sister...
Eveything i can say Sheena well done u have done far justice to the story....

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik

super duper freaking awesome update sheena...! loved it... thanx a ton for the PM..:)

Originally posted by: xoxoarvi

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Originally posted by: shahdevanshi

plsss pm me nd do cntinue... jst lved d storyline nd d way u updated waiting 4 reunion of arvi in ur ff as well as in the serial...jst lved it 2 d core nd i njoyed reading dis ...pls update soon... 😊 😊 ❤️

Originally posted by: meowfans

i ve literally fallen short of words to
describe hw beautifully u ve written
this...the way u portray arjun and his
feelings is completely out of the
world... 😊 👍🏼 thankx a ton for pm... and the way u expressfeelings of purvi even ekta is failed to express:p...
and the line " i vl make sure that you dont enjoy ur stay here" i luv it babe..[<3]
eagerly waiting for nxt part...

Originally posted by: shreya2094

another amazing update...cant tell which part i like the most coz the whole of thing was very touching...i loved how u described purvis feeling n how she missed him... arjuns also missing her a lot but trying to act stubborn to make her realise her mistake...thts really good here...and yeah the line"she had wasted a forever she cud spend wid him"was really very touching...a fantastic update dear!looking forward to the next one!plz do update soon...cant wait for the nxt part😃