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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 4

"I need to talk to you"


Purvi kept her ornaments on the table and sat on the bed. She couldn't take anymore nonsense. She was lenient before, but not now.

"You didn't go home?" The figure shook its head and stepped inside.

"Go ahead, speak"

_ "Purvi, this wedding is wrong-"

"Listen, I don't want to hear what you have to say about this. You've done all that you needed to ruin my life and two others. Why do you need a fourth chance to ruin my life? Thank you for coming, but I'm going to have to request you to leave"

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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
Nice part. Plz update soon... I cant wait 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome job Eshu!! You never fail to impress! I was happily surprised to see that is was Punni who came to meet Purvi. The way you showed Purvi's feelings was excellent. Especially the last part when she thinks she is hugging Arjun from behind. Well Done!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@barbie thanks !

@Avni hehe, plottwist ;)) thank youu! šŸ¤—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭Everyone will completely forget that an Arjun loved a Purvi and a Purvi loved an Arjun' ...

You made me cry!!!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pancham101

😭Everyone will completely forget that an Arjun loved a Purvi and a Purvi loved an Arjun' ...


You made me cry!!!!


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me too..😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
heyy Easha..šŸ¤—
thankyou for this amazing update..šŸ˜†
I cried after reading this
I could've had the two most important loves of my life with me;you and … her. But I have
nothing today. Nothing at all. I stand alone here.

and
Everyone will forget completely that an Arjun loved a Purvi and a Purvi loved an Arjun
ahhh I loved this part esha..arjun being all strong and attending his lover's wedding and purvi all confused..
as I said before I love this arjun..not running behind purvi..just happy for her..
ohh yes I knew where this story was going.. *Kuch kuch hota hai style*(my fav movie..)
until I read the last part..confused..again u left us with a cliffhangeršŸ˜•

this part was superb easha..u are also a great writer..such talented ,creative person u are..šŸ˜†
ahh will be eagerly waiting for your next update..šŸ˜›


Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I could've had the two most important loves of my life with me; you

Everyone will forget completely that an Arjun loved a Purvi and a Purvi

loved an Arjun.

he little light that was on the terrace dimmed as the figure in front her blocked the little light . "A…A…Ar-Arjun?"

She moved an inch or two back. "What are you doing here? Why are you here?"

_ "Rude much? You could have said hello you know"

She looked down and realized she was being a little rude. Maybe he was here just because- it didn't matter to her anyways.

"Uh… you .. you um, came to my wedding …"

_"How could i not? You came to my wedding" His words pierced her insides.

"Oh, hmm, well, how's life? Heard you live in London now?"

He laughed a little, "Life's well Purvi. London's great. It's always raining over there- was the only witness of the major part of my life, and now I decided to stick with it"

She knew exactly what 'major part' of life he was talking about; but it was true. And like before, today the two stood together, even if they were apart, and the only witness was the rain.

"Oh, i see. Um, do you, uh … live alone in London? Like, does DK uncle stay-"

"No. I live by myself. You see, after being dumped the first time by my fiance, i was dumped by my wife too." Arjun chuckled.

Purvi was taken aback. What was he talking about? What did Ovi do?

"What do you mean?"

_ "I got stuck between two sisters. One loved me and left. The other was obsessed for a while and left me. But you know, life moves on, right? You're doing so too."

Purvi looked down once more. Ovi left Arjun? What on earth?

_"You must be excited right Purvi? It's your wedding day! Must say, you look beautiful. Rohan's a lucky man. He's a long time best friend right? The lad's good. He'll keep you happy …. I'm sure"

The more Arjun tried to keep a normal conversation, the harder it became. He tried to suppress his feelings, but the more he talked about the future of his love, the higher his feelings rose.

"Arjun… I'm … I'm sorry" Sounds of trumpets and drums went on full swing and the girls downstairs ran to the baraat with their umbrellas. Thunder struck, and the rain fell even harder at this moment. The two became drenched and Arjun just gaped.

"Im sorry Arjun. I, I ruined both of our lives. I was wrong. I wasn't thinking. I was wrong to do that to you."

Arjun stepped closer, and Purvi stepped back again.

"But you know what, you're stupid too." Arjun's eyes widened. She's still crazy.

"Why'd you listen to me?"

_ "Because I love you Purvi"

"That's the problem! Why do you love me! Im not worth it Arjun. That love that you have for me has ruined us. There is no us anymore. Look where we stand now! Why did you love me so much that you listened just because I said so?"

He didn't know how to control the girl- she was in hysterics. This was not good, especially on her wedding day.

_"Purvi, whatever's happened has happened. We're both to blame. You thought you could deal without me, and i thought i could be the perfect prince and heed your words. But we're both wrong. And we just have to accept it."

"Arjun, you know things won't be the same, but, why'd you come here? Doesn't it hurt you?"

_"I know. I just wanted to see if my love was going to be happy, and Rohan is a good guy. Yes it does hurt me Purvi. It hurts a lot, but the the question is, doesn't it hurt you too?"

"Even if it does, it doesn't change anything." She sighed, "Arjun, here's your ring. I havent taken it off ever since, but now i cant keep it anymore. Please take it."

_"So I should i give you mine too?" Arjun waved his left hand in front of her.

Pools formed in her eyes and she shook er head. "No, keep both." She handed him the ring and moved back.

_"I'll always love you Purvi, no matter what"

"I have to go, the groom is here"

She turned around and walked to the stairs that led to her room. He's only here to see me one last time. To just see if I'll be happy. How do I tell him that I don't even know what's going on myself.

The lights on the terrace began to dim again and Purvi turned around. Holding the bottom of her skirt and being careful not to slip on the wet concrete floor, she hugged him from the back.

"I love you so much Arjun. I can't live without you. I know it's late and Im getting married, but i won't be able to give the same door to Rohan. I won't have that strength left in me. Ar-Arjun? Ar…"

Purvi's eyes widened.

Esha your tumblr is very awesome as i said n ur os makes it more beautiful

Blue bold@ he didn't mentioned that how much he still loves her as the ring

placed in his hand was a suspect for him...

Pink bold@ They were apart from so many years they didn't forget so now

how could they forget each other so easily...

PS:When your past comes in front of u after so many years that time u don't

don't have so much eagerness that how much missed him/her.

Red Bold@ The whole conversation was really touching "When Purvi taked

Out the ring n gave to him by saying now i don't need it bcoz i m going to be

Some1 else's now that made him to give her the same back she denied to

keep it bcoz she didn't wanted her past to come between her new life

I think the song which i like to play on this part is "Sau dard hain,Sau rahate"



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Esha,

Thanks for not making us wait long, and giving us a wonderful update 😊

My favorite bits -

Punni Tai, of all people!! Lol - who wouda thunk! So my mehendi prediction came out to be partly true ;)

Love when AK got sarcastic here, despite the sadness

We'll probably make it to the books of most unsuccessful love stories in the history of love stories.

I stand alone here. 😭

...You came to my wedding" His words pierced her insides.

Ovi left Arjun? What on earth? - please explain how this important plot point came about. Would love to know.

ArVi's tryst and their conversation tugged at the heartstrings. Hope you don't make us wait long for the next one, cliffhanger lady.

And who is that person at the end - Rohan, Arjun or some totally random person like I don't know, Sameer Rane šŸ¤”
Edited by peachesnplums - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hii i really really loved it,i can fell their pain and that credit of course goes to ur writing .plz cont soonšŸ˜†

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