ArVi OS: 'Because I Can't Walk...' Last part pg 17

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Eshu Brilliant!! beautifully written👏 literally Hav tears in my eyes ❤️

as evey1 said this was heartouching* line ❤️

Everyone will forget completely that an Arjun loved a Purvi and a Purvi loved an Arjun😭

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bonibright

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Absolutely brilliant job,Easha..👏

Loved it to the bits,specially

"Everyone will forget completely that an Arjun loved a Purvi and a Purvi loved an Arjun "..😭 😭

I have tears in my eyes literally..

Awesome,superb..

Plz update soon..

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

ahh love the comments ! Will reply later 🤗

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Latika Gurung

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

it was an awesome part...!!! totally loved it...:):) great job dear...! eagerly waiting for the next part...!

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Sheetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

EASHAAA.

DUN DUN DUN.

SHEETAL IS HERE WITH HER ONE-OF-A-KIND REVIEWS!

Okay so this part was just jkfhrgkjregj. I LOVED PUNNI OK LIKE. I'm so glad she repented for her mistakes, like who even knew, I thought it would be Ovi lmfao 😆 and omg the Arjun part okay i was like this because that whole part was just perfect jgherjkg UGH I JUST LOVED HOW STRAIGHT UP AND HONEST THEY WERE BEING and omg the emotions and ugh there were shivers going down my spine okay idk if you understand how perf your story is and then THE HUG FROM BEHIND THE HUG OMGGG I DIED OKAY I WAS LIKE

but girl you cannot just leave off there you have to update okay like arjun's reaction and why did she stutter what happened did the whole world see that she still loves arjun or what fhwkjgwhkj okay i hope you liked my review LMFAOO

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AshvikFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Awesome..!! Do continue soon.. 😊 waiting...!! 😛

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

omg such amazing feedback <3 hehe

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Sheetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: eshaaax3.
omg such amazing feedback <3 hehe especially sheetal's awh i love her

awh easha, so kind 😳 love you too <33

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

LOL sheetal, very funny !

Almost done with the last chapter- will be coming up very soon :)

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Oh Easha

I know I'm very late but its better late than never ah 😉

I just can't stop loving this sentence 'an Arjun loved a Purvi and a Purvi loved an Arjun'. You've literally made me cry😭😭😭.

It was just remarkable😛. Ah you surprise me as I thought it was Arjun but it turn out to be Punni😃. The 2nd best part was when Purvi thinks she's hugging Arjun from the back...

Oh gosh, now I'm eagerly waiting for your next part 😲.

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