ArVi OS: 'Because I Can't Walk...' Last part pg 17

shreya2094

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Posted: 12 years ago

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woww!!fantastic update!loved it to the core!it was a cliffhanger indeed...cant wait for the next part!plz do update soon!😃

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Azaad_Panchi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

omg esha that really a cute part n really luved it...w8ing for the next part...

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-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Fantastic job Easha!! Arjun and Purvi both have both clearly not moved on..

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bonibright

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Superb update,Easha..👏.Its worth the looong wait..Loved the song u used..Plz update soon..

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

A long wait to read the part 3 was just worth the wait Esha😛

OMG, the way you described Arjun is just marvelous. I loved the part Purvi fumbled the minute she saw Arjun. Both have actually not moved on at all but yet they show themselves as very strong when deep inside they are shattered into pieces.

Overall your post is fantastic and so was the choice of song👏. As usual you have left us on a cliffhanger. i think its Arjun who wants to talk to Purvi. so please my heart will not be able to take it if you're not going to update the next post ASAP.

Awaiting eagerly😉

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: NadaCinta
A long wait to read the part 3 was just worth the wait Esha😛

OMG, the way you described Arjun is just marvelous. I loved the part Purvi fumbled the minute she saw Arjun. Both have actually not moved on at all but yet they show themselves as very strong when deep inside they are shattered into pieces.

Overall your post is fantastic and so was the choice of song👏. As usual you have left us on a cliffhanger. i think its Arjun who wants to talk to Purvi. so please my heart will not be able to take it if you're not going to update the next post ASAP.

Awaiting eagerly😉

Ahh love getting long feedback :D

Glad you enjoyed reading it :) promise i wont take another long time to post the next part.

Im gonna keep you guessing who's at the door :P

thank you ! :)

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: eshaaax3.

Ahh love getting long feedback :D

Glad you enjoyed reading it :) promise i wont take another long time to post the next part.

Im gonna keep you guessing who's at the door :P

thank you ! :)

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Oh Esha, you are a 'suspense queen' 😆

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Suspense Queen? 😆 well the amount oftimes ive added cliff hangers, i guess so!