ArVi OS: 'Because I Can't Walk...' Last part pg 17

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Because I Can't Walk This Earth Without You

This an ArVi OS I wrote/thought, circling around after Arjun- Ovi's "marriage"

The characters are from PR, except the obvious extra which I've put in myself.

The whole OS won't be posted here,

I'll link you guys to the parts via tumblr, since that's where I'm writing it.

If you do follow my tumblr, simply just like the post, if you like it (:
If not, you can go and message me on my tumblr at http://dilkyunyehmerashorkare.tumblr.com/ask anonymously and leave your views (:

or you can comment here as well (:

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Esha

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Part 1 : page 1

direct tumblr link: http://dilkyunyehmerashorkare.tumblr.com/post/34531318229/arvi-os

Part 2 : page 3

direct tumblr link: http://dilkyunyehmerashorkare.tumblr.com/post/34909790885/arvi-os

Part 3: page 6

direct tumblr link: http://dilkyunyehmerashorkare.tumblr.com/post/37031333214/arvi-os

Part 4: page 10

direct tumblr link: http://dilkyunyehmerashorkare.tumblr.com/post/37592094787/arvi-os

Preview: page 14

direct tumblr link: http://dilkyunyehmerashorkare.tumblr.com/post/39434966924/arvi-os

Part 5: page 17

direct tumblr link: http://dilkyunyehmerashorkare.tumblr.com/post/42161248379/arvi-os

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 1:

She stepped out of her car and walked to Deshmukh Residence. It's been so long since I've seen everyone. I miss them; there's nothing better than home.

"Aai? Baba? Teju?!" she asked as she walked in the house.

Her Aai's heart filled with warmth seeing her baby girl after months. Her exit from home filled such emptiness in every nook and corner.

*Flashback*

Diwali celebrations were at its fullest. Manav Deshmukh requested his home to be transformed into a palace of lights. The atmosphere itself spoke blissful and entertainment. But a little later in the evening called for some unexpected news of letting go, if that even was the right words to use in this case.

To read full part, click here

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-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

😊

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Sheetal

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Posted: 12 years ago

Esha, I LOVE your story so far. You're such a great author 😲 Can't wait for part 2 😃

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WanderingBeauty

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Posted: 12 years ago

Just finished reading the OS...And guess what...I LOVED IT!!!!! The best thing is this one deals with post-marriage situation...Update soon...Can't wait to read more!!!

PS-Wish Purvi realised all this real stuff in the serial as well...😕

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rithika2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update dear...👏👏👏 cant wait for the next... update soon...
loved purvi's realisation of her mistake...

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Jagruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

heyy esha read your OS...it was damn awesome...
so WAHI as our purvi's best friend..sounds great...loved him and more than that love purvi of your OS...
do continue soon..and plz pm me of your updates.. 😛

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Latika Gurung

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Posted: 12 years ago

the 1st part was awesome... i loved it... do continue dear...:):)

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Loved your OS. Its simply superb, awesome and beautiful.

I just wish that Purvi will have the same realisation in PR. Well only can wish. Anyway, the way you described Arjun in black sherwani and Purvi in emerald green saree was lovely.

She just can't seem to forget Arjun and I think it's vice-versa. Well, now eagerly waiting for your Part 2 as I'm curiously waiting to see if Arjun will ever come to meet Purvi. Just to move on in her life, will Purvi agree to the marriage with Rohan.

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