ArVi OS: 'Because I Can't Walk...' Last part pg 17 - Page 15

Aww ash, peaches- your comms are too sweet! Ill reply fully when im home. Thank you guys 🤗

That' was beyond amazing. I'm literally speechless. You just write in such a way, I'm looking for words (other than amazing and terrific and whatnot) to describe it.
The way Arjun's emotions were beyond... amazing! It was as though I could feel the pain he was going through. The part where Rohan went to go talk to him was very well written. I was imagining the whole thing!
Purvi's emotions were fantabulously portrayed too...
The end really made my day. (And it's been a long one).
It was such a great Fan Fic... I'm don't want to say goodbye to it. :(
You are truly an amazing writer. Throughout this FF, I felt the emotions of the characters, as though it were happening in front of me. It was too good! :)
Hope to read more from you in the future. :)
-Esha (We have the same name! :D)

Originally posted by: omg11apiz

That' was beyond amazing. I'm literally speechless. You just write in such a way, I'm looking for words (other than amazing and terrific and whatnot) to describe it.
The way Arjun's emotions were beyond... amazing! It was as though I could feel the pain he was going through. The part where Rohan went to go talk to him was very well written. I was imagining the whole thing!
Purvi's emotions were fantabulously portrayed too...
The end really made my day. (And it's been a long one).
It was such a great Fan Fic... I'm don't want to say goodbye to it. :(
You are truly an amazing writer. Throughout this FF, I felt the emotions of the characters, as though it were happening in front of me. It was too good! :)
Hope to read more from you in the future. :)
-Esha (We have the same name! :D)

Oh gosh I didn't know that you've updated your last part of this OS.

So Purvi is wondering why Arjun didn't hug her back😲

I like the way he told Purvi to go downstairs as she's being waited for and when she say but..'Purvi, I said go'.

I loved Purvi's reaction about Arjun.

As she opened her room door, Archana yelled at her as she's drenched. Teju was worried while Purvi was somehow feeling guilty.

As they were running short of time, Purvi was asked to wear special outfit from Aashna that was meant for her DIL. Purvi is worried as what Rohan's parents might think . The truth is Purvi has no other option and what's yours will come back to you. Nobody can change that. Significance of the outfit. Archana said she'll speak to Rohan's mom.

It was a maroon and red lehenga😳. Rohan was there outside her room and he was wet too. He made joke of the rain and before leaving said that he love her outfit😛

She was wondering what's this play as her mehendi speaks of Arjun and so was her outfit...

Poor Arjun stood at the Mandap and remembered the saat pheras they left halfway and his words to her 'even death stands no chance to separate us'. Well, what to do its not nature but human being who separated you both.

Hmmm so she's feeling what she assume must have felt by Arjun too.

As Rohan and Purvi stood up for the nuptial rounds and teju tied the knot on the shawl, the door creaked open and they heard STOP THIS to which Teju dropped her hands from the shawl leaving them untied.

It was non other than Ovi. Purvi wasn't ready to face humiliation on her wedding day in front of her in laws, poor girl.

Arjun raised his voice and told Ovi to stop yelling was but the best part was when he said to Teju not to call him jeeju as he's not her sister's husband and he can never be👏

Rohan knew that Purvi can never give place to him in her heart. He's a true friend of Purvi as he knows her well.

Purvi felt bad and told Rohan that she want to marry him but I liked the way he said he doesn't want to separate 2 lovers as that's the biggest sin😊

The whole Mandap scene and the way Rohan tried to make everyone understand and kept the situation under control was very good.

I thoroughly enjoyed the whole scenario between Arjun and Rohan.

So it was Rohan whom Purvi said 'I love you' as she thought it was Arjun but at least from there Rohan knew what was in her heart.

Thank god finally Arjun-Purvi tied the knot😳

Poor boy was so happy because finally he got Purvi as for 9 months he's been walking dead.

Awww, so sweet as he placed the ring on her fingers and told her never to take it off and she promised

I loved the ending, it's so beautiful especially as long as Arjun lives Purvi will live too❤️

Thanks a lot for such a beautiful and heart touching OS. It was superb⭐️😃