ArVi OS: 'Because I Can't Walk...' Last part pg 17 - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally u updated,Esha..
U rock,girl..What an ending!!!!
Our Kharoos ARJUN back,our ArVi ending up together,what else do we need??
Cherry on the top Ovi n Punni turning positive,well anyways who cares about them?
Plz do come up with another FF soon..

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: rithika2012

that was an awesome part esha..šŸ‘

atlast arvi united.. loved the whole part...
ha atlast we got our strong arjun who bet rohan for hurting purvi.. just loved that part alot..
these lines were really outstanding.. just just loved them..
I had no reason to live, because I cant walk this earth without you, but i did because i knew you were still alive, you were still breathing, and a long as you live, I live too."

thanks for such an awesome part..😊



thank you sweety!! šŸ¤—

in red, hehe i had to put that in- there was a sort of hint in previous chapters :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: peachesnplums

Esha Esha Esha!!! šŸ¤—


OMG, thank you so much darling for giving us the last part - didn't expect it today!!

Loved it, loved the end - befitting conclusion to your wonderful OS.

I'm going to miss it a lot. Thanks a lot once again, will comment more later, once I can contain the excitement šŸ˜›


hehe saw this on tumblr too- didnt reply yet tho

@bold waiting on that peaches :)😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
Res-
Reading the final chapter before bed so I'll comment 6 hours from now Eshu. šŸ˜†
Edited by nalonynnej - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hehe, ami, ill wait for it :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Esha thank u so much for the lovely update. Every part was very well written. A beautiful story with a supeb end.šŸ‘ I am so happy at last Arvi are together.
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Posted: 12 years ago
aww thanks dear! had to make it a happy ending :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it!

I know Rohan did nothing wrong, but it was SOOO satisfying when Arjun punched him! :D :$.

Happy to see Punni and Ovi repent and were remorseful for what they did.

Esha - great job, thank you for giving us a happy ending and making us somewhat pleased, especially since we get nothing from the show!

It was a well written and truly enjoyable OS. One I will read again and miss every time I get to chapter 5 :(.



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Posted: 12 years ago
"But-"

_ "Purvi, I said go."

Reminded me of the ArVi scene by the lake, when Arjun asks Purvi to go and save her marriage 😭

Did you have a picture of what Ashna's wedding dress looked like somewhere? Would love to see...

Ovi also comes to save the day - didn't see that coming!

It was nice of Rohan to not follow his parents and work towards Arjun-Purvi...like Ash, I'm still happy Arjun punched him šŸ˜‰

For nine months I've been the walking dead- just a body that's alive, but a soul that has no life. I had lost meaning to life.

I had no reason to live, because I cant walk this earth without you, but i did because i knew you were still alive, you were still breathing, and a long as you live, I live too

Loved these lines...beautiful...found this quote I posted in another thread --

"Do you know that feeling - The feeling of being alive and dead, both at the same time? When it seems like you are just going through with different notions of life, without actually living it. I do, I know that feeling very well. I live with it, eat with it and often sleep with it."
-- Bhavya Kaushik, The Other Side of the Bed

ArVi reunion was wonderful, why oh why can't they take ideas from our brilliant FF writers in the show...

Thanks once again for the lovely OS Esha, I'm gonna miss it. Hope to see you write more :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: peachesnplums


For nine months I've been the walking dead- just a body that's alive, but a soul that has no life. I had lost meaning to life.

I had no reason to live, because I cant walk this earth without you, but i did because i knew you were still alive, you were still breathing, and a long as you live, I live too

Loved these lines...beautiful...found this quote I posted in another thread --

"Do you know that feeling - The feeling of being alive and dead, both at the same time? When it seems like you are just going through with different notions of life, without actually living it. I do, I know that feeling very well. I live with it, eat with it and often sleep with it."
-- Bhavya Kaushik, The Other Side of the Bed



That was one of the best part of the final chapter and it is exactly what we can relate to!

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