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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Ohhh finally u updated Jenelle..😛
LOVED this part..
Arjun umm thinking about purvi..😳😳
Wow..manav invited Arjun to Purvi's Birthday party...
Eagerly waiting for the next part..😛
Do update soon if possible..Thanks..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏 tks for updating...yeh..arjun cudnt concerntrate...tks update soon...pls pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
lovd it 😊 plz do update fast...and pm me afta updatng 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Jene its good one indeed as well
Arjun being lost in Purvi's thoughts,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing 😛

It seems like Arjun is still puzzled on why his parents did not mention that they knew Desmukh family which puzzles me too😲.

Well. Manav received call from his daughter and wished her happy birthday. Surprising while Arjun was waiting for Manav to finish his phone call suddenly he found himself to be thinking of Purvi. Okay... He was mesmerized with her beauty and smile and wanted to ope more about her but in this big city how is he going to locate her. While he wished he could see her for once, he came back to is present moment and told himself that he sold be thinking of Ovi.

So Arjun was trying to cover up in front of Manav that he wasn't thinking of Amy woman as first and foremost he's a businessman😉.

Arjun had to call off for the day as he can't seem to concentrate on his meeting with Manav as he keeps thinking of Purvi. Before Arjun left, Manav invited him for his daughter's birthday party. Arjun is going to be in for a surprise as that is his angels birthday party😛

Looks like Purvi has dominated Arjun's thoughts instead of Ovi 😊.

I love it so much and waiting eagerly for your next update to find out the birthday party suspense.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Glad you liked this part guys. I will try to update as soon as possible. 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Can't believe I missed this Jenelle! Even though I got your Pm😉

Wonderful Job! Good to see you back in action! So Ms.Purvi is dominating Arjun's thoughts.. So Manav has invited Arjun to the Party wow..
Waiting for the next chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Chapter 5 ---- Birthday Preparations

Meanwhile, Purvi's mind was in chaos. She had so many things still be done. Her father was throwing her a grand birthday party. He had invited all his business associates and colleagues. Manav Deshmukh always did things on a grand scale and this party was no exception. Purvi took it upon herself to ensure that everything ran smoothly. The maids tried to get her to stop working as it was her birthday and this party was for her but she continued to oversee everything. Her baba meant the world to her and she wanted him to enjoy this party because he was a workaholic and needed a much deserve break. "Tonight has to be perfect." Purvi thought.

She looked around the beautifully decorated mansion and smiled. It looked perfect. There were dozens of orchids all around the hall. Liles were her favourite flowers. Balloons of all shapes, sizes and colours hung all around. Purvi loved it. She smiled. She decided to call her dad. He answered on the first ring.

"Hey birthday girl!"

"Hey baba."

"So how are the preparations going? Is it to your likings princess?"

"Yes baba. The room is wonderfully decorated. I can't wait for tonight."

Manav smiled. He loved his daughter very much and would do anything for her.

"Oh by the way princess, I've ordered your favourite cake. It's supposed to be delivered shortly."

Now it was Purvi's turn to smile. Her baba never forgot her likes and dislikes.

"Red Velvet Cake!!!!! Yummy. I can't wait baba."

"Princess, I almost forgot, I got you an early present. It's in your room. I want you to wear it tonight."

"oh baba, you're the best. I love you so much. Thank you."

"No need to thank me dear. I'll be home as soon as I can."

Purvi hung up the phone and sped towards her room. Archana her mother was just coming down the stairs when Purvi crashed into her.

"Purvi! What's this all about?"

"Aai, I'm sorry. Baba said he got me a present, I was just rushing to see what it was."

"I really don't know why Manav spoils you so much!" Archana said.

Purvi was about to say something but thought better of it. Ever since she could remember, her mother had always treated her as though she was a step child. She could never figure out what she had done to offend her. She's had asked her father about it but all he said was to give Archana some time.

Archana walked away annoyed and left Purvi on the staircase. Purvi looked hurt but vowed once again that she would win her mother's heart.

She ran up to her bedroom and there lying on the bed was one of the most exquisite gowns she had ever seen. It was a turquoise halter dress with simmering sequences. The gown was long and flowing. Purvi loved it immediately. She hastily tried it on. It accentuated her figure flawlessly. She was busy admiring herself in the mirror when something sparkly caught her eye. She walked over to her dressing table and found a tiara and a turquoise colour diamond necklace. The note next to it said "For the world's most beautiful princess. Hope you like it. Love Baba."

Tears welled up in her eyes. Her father was the best. She was just about to call him again when a pair of cufflinks caught her eyes. She had forgotten about said cufflinks the moment she had laid them on her dressing table. Now she found herself thinking of the handsome man she'd bumped into earlier. Purvi wondered what it would be like to be held in his strong muscular arms. She looked away from the mirror, embarrassed that she had thought that. Such thoughts had never entered her head before. She thought she was losing her marbles. Why was she thinking about this stranger? She had no connections to him and yet she felt that she had known him all her life.

Purvi took the cufflinks and gazed at them. "I'll definitely return these to you Arjun Sir.! I don't know how, but I will."..

Edited by --Jenelle-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
Loved the part Jennele..😛
Aww!!Purvi will look gorgeous in that gown...😳
I hope Arjun turns up to the party and sees her in that dress..😉
Plz update soon..😊
Thanks for the PM..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great post jenelle😛

Hmmm as I guessed😉. Purvi is Manav's daughter. Her mind was in chaos due to the grand scale birthday party organized by her baba. She's such a wonderful girl that she made sure that the party run smoothly😊. Awww her baba meant the whole world to her and she wanted him to have this much needed break as he's a workaholic😳 .

Wow!!! The hall is decorated with orchids, Lily's, balloons - it simply sounds great 😛.

The father daughter convo was sweet and very touching. They both love each other so much😊. Yummmyy, its red velvet cake ah😃.

Ohohhh for the first time Archana is shown differently. Purvi is treated like a step child??? Purvi is a very strong girl and I like her believe that she will win her mother's heart once again.

The way you described the turquoise halter gown with sequence, tiara and the turquoise colour diamond necklace to suit the gown is just awesome.

Well, what can we say the cufflinks on the dressing table caught her eyes and reminded her of Arjun where she's in the strong muscular arms of Arjun is something Amy girls would wish for 😳.

Your last part was well said when she felt that she had no connection to this stranger but felt she had known him all her life. Physically, they may not know each other but its the soul that recognizes.

So, your next chapter is going to be very interesting as Purvi is thinking that she'll definitely return the cufflinks although she doesn't know how yet but the biggest surprise that's awaiting her is Arjun's presence on her birthday party...

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